so this is my fic......the first chapter sucks....enjoy!
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Peter stormed in his tiny apartment. Clearly having a bad day. A *really* bad day. "Damn, how many spotlighted redheads are there in this city?" the more he thought, the more he screamed about everything.
"AND THAT ASS AT THE BUGLE!! skye clearwater.....haha.....yea......right.....that ass.
Obiously, screaming made him feel better, but it made him think about what that other redhead sang.
"what was her name? wasn't it Tifa Cain?"he thought to himself."I liked that song though.....what was it? uh......"
Once peter started singing, he found he had a good voice.
"I sit up with the radioooo, sing along, with the ones i know....to get through one night a day.........I'm callin every friend i've had, wake 'em up and make them ma-"
He froze when someone knocked on the door. Praying whoever was at the door didn't hear him, he opened the door.
"I like your singing, Tiger."
"damn. you heard.....so, what are you doing here?" Peter asked, slightly turning red.
"peter! you dont have to be embarrased for singing. I thought it sounded good."
"tell me why your're here...." his face was as red as the costume unter the sweatsuit he was wearing.
"would you like to come over on saturday? at 9:30?"
"hmm.....i may have to talk to my alarm clock....."
"Peter!!! PLEASE!" she pleaded. "peter? where are you going?"
"Mr. alarm? can i go? oh thank you! he said yes."
"he better have. well, see you at 9:30?"
"wouldnt miss it for the world."
Mj didn't say anything, she just smiled the smile that made Peter melt.
END CHAPTER 1one
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that was my first chapter. also my first non-all humor story. and for further warning, i have 12 chapters written, and a little reference, are harry's eyes green or brown? and chapters 6, 7 and 11 are sappy. please reveiw......as you didn't reveiw my friend's. ^^ thanks!
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Peter stormed in his tiny apartment. Clearly having a bad day. A *really* bad day. "Damn, how many spotlighted redheads are there in this city?" the more he thought, the more he screamed about everything.
"AND THAT ASS AT THE BUGLE!! skye clearwater.....haha.....yea......right.....that ass.
Obiously, screaming made him feel better, but it made him think about what that other redhead sang.
"what was her name? wasn't it Tifa Cain?"he thought to himself."I liked that song though.....what was it? uh......"
Once peter started singing, he found he had a good voice.
"I sit up with the radioooo, sing along, with the ones i know....to get through one night a day.........I'm callin every friend i've had, wake 'em up and make them ma-"
He froze when someone knocked on the door. Praying whoever was at the door didn't hear him, he opened the door.
"I like your singing, Tiger."
"damn. you heard.....so, what are you doing here?" Peter asked, slightly turning red.
"peter! you dont have to be embarrased for singing. I thought it sounded good."
"tell me why your're here...." his face was as red as the costume unter the sweatsuit he was wearing.
"would you like to come over on saturday? at 9:30?"
"hmm.....i may have to talk to my alarm clock....."
"Peter!!! PLEASE!" she pleaded. "peter? where are you going?"
"Mr. alarm? can i go? oh thank you! he said yes."
"he better have. well, see you at 9:30?"
"wouldnt miss it for the world."
Mj didn't say anything, she just smiled the smile that made Peter melt.
END CHAPTER 1one
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that was my first chapter. also my first non-all humor story. and for further warning, i have 12 chapters written, and a little reference, are harry's eyes green or brown? and chapters 6, 7 and 11 are sappy. please reveiw......as you didn't reveiw my friend's. ^^ thanks!