I made this for a friend of mine on DA (the link is on my bio) it is based on her story and you guys should totally check it out
Author's note: Hey guys! This is my first fanfic (poem) I post here in what, a year? Or more I think...hm, I do not know. I am a writer in development and English is not my first language so productive criticism is accepted
Disclaimer- I do not own anything, just this story/poem
Enjoy!
I should have listened
I should have known
I never loved him fully
Why did I let him treat me like this?
Why did I lead him on?
I thought him and I had some type of a connection
But I was wrong
I always felt empty on the inside while I was with him
I never felt happy
I never felt truly loved
I never felt a bond
The only thing I felt was fake love
And darn it
It is so hard to tell whether is real love or not
My friends warned me
So did my dad
So did my brother
They told me he wasn't good for me
That there was something wrong
They told me to stay away
That he would hurt me somehow
Oh, I should have listened
On the altar, I stood watching the crowd on the corner of my eye
There was my older sister
Smirking and looking at him with a lust in her eyes
As I glanced at him
He was looking back at her
Not with the face I expected
Instead of a serious face
He had the same expression as her
Oh, I should have known
I did the unexpected
I punched him square in the face
I yelled at both of them
Then I found out
My sister has been pregnant for over two months
Stupid slut
Its funny how he denies everything
But the look in his face says it all
I run and run until I am out of the chapel
My friends
My heros came to save me
I am lucky to have them
Because if I didn't I would've drowned
They manage to calm me down
And one did something I would have done
She grabbed a brick
And threw it at his car
Glass shattered as we laughed
Glass broke and fell like my heart did
It has been broken
But not completely
It just need the right someone to fix it
My friends take me away
They think it will do good for me
I couldn't agree more
Even if I didn't show it
We pack
Then we leave
Along the way
We all had fun together chatting and joking
I feel like I am at home with them
But I still feel like there is still something missing
I still feel the pain
We arrive
We unpack in the hotel
And we plan out what we will do
Even with my minor protest
They still make me go
As we go
There is a man
He is so handsome
Messy hair
The color of the night sky
His eyes
Blue like the ocean
His skin
He is pale
Like a sexy vampire
Oh I can't help to blush as he glances at me
The waitress comes
She puts a drink on the table
I tell her it isn't ours
She tells me that its from the guy with a smile
Oh I feel my cheeks burning
The worse thing my friends could do
They did it
They ditched me
...great
I play with the straw
I feel a presence
I look up
Its him!
Oh calm down!
He sits
We have a small chat
Other guys come
His friends
He looks so embarrassed and shy
I couldn't help to giggle and introduce myself
He looks at me with a loving smile
Oh why do I keep blushing!
...great
My friends come back
We all introduce each other
Friendship between us all seems to bloom
Oh I can't help but to look at him
He hasn't spoken much
But he still makes my heart flutter
I think that there is someone that will fix my broken heart
I have a feeling he is closer than I thought
My friends told me something like this would happen
Oh, I should have listened
I hope it wasn't too bad, but please tell me what you guys think and how I can improve, I would love to write more stories or poems on TT and maybe Attack on Titans or even Frozen. It all depends on you guys