Prologue:

"Hurry! He's gaining on us!" Two ninjas, a male and female, were being pursued by another male ninja, but this one wasn't any ordinary ninja. He was one of the Legendary Sannin, Lord Orochimaru.
"Pathetic. You can't get away from me, Kaora, Raizo. I will get your daughter, whether you like it or not. "
Kaora held her precious 9-month-old child closer to her, hoping Orochimaru did not get his hands on her.
"He's gone…" Raizo calmly stated looking around. Kaora came to a stop, and when she did so, the child woke up and started crying.
"Awww…poor baby. Exactly why I should take her: You can't even keep her from crying." Kaora and Raizo spun around to find Orochimaru behind them, standing on the head of a big purple snake. "Now, you have two options: 1) You give me your dear child or 2) I kill you, the girl, and your oldest daughter. Now, which will it be?"
Kaora and Raizo talked to each other quietly for a moment, looked at the infant, and sighed.
"Will you take care of her?" Raizo questioned Orochimaru.
"Of course I will." He answered impatiently.
Kaora looked at Orochimaru." Her name is Aki."
"Cute." Orochimaru muttered before jumping off the snake's head in front of them. He took Aki out of Kaora's arms, then smirked and said, "Thank you. She'll become so loyal, she'll destroy her own village if I tell her to." Orochimaru jumped back onto the snake's head and frowned. "Manda, squeeze." The huge snake wrapped its body around the two ninja suffocating them. Orochimaru finally told Manda to release them and left the ninja to die in the forest.

How was that for my first story??? Please review!!!! ^_^