Hello! This is my first ever fanfiction story, I've only posted this teaser so I can hear your thoughts and reviews. Should I continue or no?

Bella sighed as she gazed into the onyx colored eyes of her boyfriend Edward Cullen.

A smile teased it's way onto his lips making Bella even more enarmoured.

"Hi," she said softly, biting her strawberry lips.

"Hello," he replied back, looking longingly at her mouth and then back at her.

For a moment, time seemed to be suspended. With only the couple left alone in their own little bubble. Locking eyes, they seemed oblivious to their surrondings, lost in each others eyes.

How were they to know what was about to unfold...?


OKay guess that's the teaser. Press review button please!