Disclaimer: I dont own Pokemon. If I did, Pikachu would be a talking shoe, Ash would have been devoured by his mom, and Misty would have spontaneously combusted...be glad its not mine...
Author's Note:
Well, this idea just wouldn't leave my head, so I decided to release it into my Notepad. Generally, its a pretty good concept thats rarely used. Its ignored! Its unused! Its the ever popular capture through the eyes of the Pokemon story! These are a personal fav of mine, and its never put into use, so I have been planning one for quite some time now...and here it is. So, to whoever reads it, PLEASE comment, and lemme know what you think. I hate it when readers read, then dont even tell the author. If I dont any reviews for it after a while, Im just gonna cancel it.
To the fans of Dungeon of Control, read and enjoy, cuz if it goes right, this is my new DoC.
So, enjoy it while its here!
-Raik the Raichu
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Chapter 1: Stolen By Imprisonment
In the midst of a nicely overgrown forest, lived a young Pichu. A Pichu by the name of Kolu, who lived with his Raichu mother and father. They usually lived the average boring life of a small Pokemon family. The dad goes and gets food, the mom stays and watches after the children, and the youngest stays behind, being smothered by his mother.
"Mom! Stop! I wanna go out! Let go of me! Your smothering me!" yelled little Kolu, trying to break free from his Raichu mother's loving embrace.
"But your such a cute little thing! I cant help but smother you with love!" she said, giving him another tight hug.
"Mom, Im getting too old for this!"
"What are you tlaking about? You're barely 1!" she snapped back, releasing him.
He glared at her, growing impatient. "Now can I go??" he said in an annoyed tone. She sighed and said, "Fine. But remember, you are NOT alllowed to leave beyond the boundaries of our area!" He groaned. "But mom, thats barely even far away!"
This time, she glared and sternly said, "I dont care. You stay in the boundaries. Im not losing you too!"
Kolu knew she was refering to his older brother, Zak the Pikachu. About 3 months ago, Zak had wandered off to go find some food, and never came back. His mother, assuming the worst, was devistated, and his father was mixed with different feelings. Kolu was upset, as his brother had been like a buddy to him. He taught him most of what he knew, like how to discharge, how to use thunder attacks (even though he'd hurt himself in the process), and even how to fish without shocking the water, which wasnt a smart idea.
He missed his brother greatly, and always wondered what had happened to him. He had heard rumors from some friends that he had been killed in battle, while others simply stated that he was probably captured by a human, and then there were a few impossible theories that didnt make any sense at all. Either way, he missed him, and always wished he could see him once more...
As young Kolu prepared to leave, his mother yet again told him not to leave the area, which he answered back in a snappy way. The last thing she yelled out to him was, "Be home by dinner or Ill give you such a shocking!" He rolled his eyes, and set out to go look for his friends.
He wandered around for a few minutes, searching for some of his friends. Today was a very quiet day. No sound. No motion. No nothing. It was as if everything had died.
He wandered aimlessly around, looking for someone or something to occupy his time. After about another 15 minutes, he grew bored with looking around, and started to head home. As he turned around, he heard a noise from far off. Now filled with curiousity, he moved towards the sound, and ignoring that he had stepped past the boundaries his parents set.
Stepping through some bushes, he finally found the source of the noise. Not even 3 feet from him, sat a trainer, eating an apple, and spacing off into space. Kolu watched him for a while. It was the first human he had ever seen, but looked just as they had been described. Tall, pinkish, and wearing something called "clothing". He looked at his waist, where 6 red and white orbs could clearly be seen. He had heard of these as well. They were supposedly designed to suck up Pokemon like a windtunnel, in a red flash of light.
As he stepped closer to the human, he accidently stepped on a twig, which snapped loudly, alerting the trainer. He stood up quickly, and looked around.
Oops...
Kolu ducked down, hoping that he wasnt seen. There was a long moment of silence, before he started to get the feeling that the trainer was done looking. But just before he could even begin to stand, a large rock shot right through the bushes, barely missing his face, and causing him to jump up, giving a yelp of surprise. "Ha! I knew you were there!" he heard the trainer call out, sounding cocky.
Kolu turned to greet him face to face. The trainer then pulled one of the red and white orbs off his, and threw it at him. He ran out of its path, and then began wildly sprinting off in a random direction, as the trainer ran after him.
Kolu was scared and worried. In a matter of minutes, he had lured a trainer right towards him, and now he was gonna get caught, and then who knows what. As he continued to run, he wasnt paying attention and rammed himself into a tree. Going his full speed, and then running head first into a tree caused him to become dazed for a while. Dizzy and in pain, he awkwardly walked in circles, staring at the colorful spots now visible. It wasnt long before the trainer found him.
The trainer was confused at what he saw. A little Pichu, clutching his head, and running around in circles. Taking advantage, he tossed one of his Pokeballs, releasing an Ivysaur.
The Pichu looked at the creature before him. He knew he couldn't take this thing on by himself, especially with a headache from being rammed in the head. But the thought of him getting taken made him try to defend himself. He tried a standard headbutt, but just as he pulled it off, the Ivysaur stepped over to one side, making Kolu miss and ram into another tree. Incredibly dizzy and in pain, he just sat there, hopeless and awaiting the inevitable.
Focussing his sight for a few seconds, he saw the trainer pet the Ivysaur on the head, and then suck him back into the ball. The trainer looked down at Kolu, who was clutching his throbbing head, and simply dropped the ball right on his stomach. At that moment, Kolu finally stopped straining, and simply blacked out as he was quicky sucked into the red and white ball.
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Kay, thats all I got...so, enjoy, cuz it will get better.
