First attempt at a fanfiction. So forgive me for any ooc ness. Please read the following author's note. I always thought my first would be Bleach but I guess not. Maybe I'll publish it later though.
Anyway... I really wanted to try the character from a different world falls into OP stories. So here it is please bare with me and let me know what ya think. I'm always up for constructive criticism. Also I hear a lot of people saying they don't want a Mary sue which I'm guessing is like those perfect characters so I'll try super hard not to make it like that. If I do, just let me know. Also a little heads up she doesn't come from our world so she never heard of one piece before so it's not like a show but rather an alternate universe.
Also if your scared this story won't be continued, so ya don't want to start it do not fret. No matter how long it takes, only death will stop me from finishing this. I hate when authors drop stories. Lol sorry for the rant but... Please enjoy!
Oh also I should tell ya where we are huh? So ya don't spoil the show for yourself. If ya passed the time skip read on. If not hit the back button unless ya don't mind spoilers. Anyway we're in the middle of the war. Many things will change due to my bad memory and ideas haha.
Disclaimer's Note: I do not own One Piece. If I did everyone would die at the end. So thank goodness I'm not I like the characters living much better.
Luffy's POV
I accidentally dropped the vivre card on the ground and went to pick it up. I heard Ace call out my name and quickly looked up. It was then that I saw Ace leaning over me with an almost panicked look. Almost as if he was about to protect me from getting hit by something. Which was weird because he was just sitting there. Is he an idiot?
"Ace is that a mysterious move to scare the marines?" I questioned him as he gave me this strange look then I noticed something behind Ace move.
Ace's POV
I thanked my body as I was able to move in time to protect Luffy from the incoming Lava fist. I waited for the move to strike me as I felt relief that I could protect Luffy until the end as his Older Brother. After a couple seconds of no pain I heard Luffy talk and looked down.
"Ace is that a mysterious move to scare the marines?" He asked with a look mixed with curiosity and questioning. That was when I realized I was just standing there looking like an idiot. Quickly trying to clear the blush of embarrassment that overtook my face I turned around. That was when I noticed what most likely just saved me and Luffy.
OC POV~she shall remain a mystery for a bit.
I felt myself dozing off as I sat in my study. Being the priestess of my people, I required lots of rest daily. However I was required elsewhere for the night and would have to sleep later. I lazily yet gracefully arose from my chair and walked out the room. I then walked down the long hallway and entered a slightly smaller room that was my bedroom.
It was a simple room with white walls and a light gold trim. The bed was grey with white pillows and a cream colored blanket. I walked over to the body length mirror and stared at my appearance for a moment. I had long slightly curly hair that was naturally lavender in color and reached my mid thigh when down. Being a priestess required you to act and look like a complete lady.
Taking my hair out of it's comfortable lazy bun I put the gold hair tie down on my dresser. I then grabbed the gold complicated clips, that matched my gold eyes, I was told to wear for tonight and began to set my hair. It ended up being pinned up in a sort of bun with a few strands in my front free. Releasing my hair I sighed softly.
I then reached for my closet door and opened it. I pulled out the outfit that they had pre made for this event. It was a silk dress with 2 finger width sized straps. After the top stops there is only a few strands that cross making a spider web pattern and partially expose my stomach. My back however did not start until it reached my hip area leaving my whole back exposed. The bottom was a normal skirt like design that hugged me just right and ended a couple inches above my knees. The whole dress was white with gold trim, 'just like my walls' I thought as I smirked.
As a priestess the gods gave us beauty, we are blessed with long silky hair and naturally soft skin that was light in tone, yet remained slightly tanned no matter how much sun was received. I only knew of this thanks to Carol, my mentor.
The event tonight was to celebrate the people's priestess coming of age, which was celebrated when one turns 17. Everyone would be there to celebrate however I was not allowed to see anyone. The only person I was ever allowed to see was a young woman named Carol. She taught me everything I know including how to walk, talk, use the bathroom, how to dress, how to do my hair, how to use my powers and defend myself, and even how to be a proper lady.
All my life I felt like there was something missing in my life. Once I even told Carol about it. She simply told me it means I wasn't helping my people enough, but not to worry once I turn 17 I will become the perfect priestess. After slipping on my dress and white slightly heeled dress shoes I called for Carol to explain I was ready.
She came in and we left for the event. I was told the event was not far. We stepped outside and I got in my litter that other guards would carry after I was hidden from view. They walked for approximately 15 minutes before I was set down. I waited for Carols okay to step out and slowly got out. I was in a little room that was very dark and had walls of dark red and black.
The only place I was allowed to sit was a red pillow sitting in the middle. I gracefully kneeled down in the proper position and awaited. Apparently the room I was in had slight cracks in the wall that allowed voices to float in. Throughout the next 4 hours I heard my people pray for our safety and a good year. Then without warning my little room caught on fire.
At first I was startled when I heard them praying even after the flames should have been visible to the outside. 'Did they set me on fire on purpose' I wondered. Then I realized the fire was not normal as it tried to ignite me it could not and only surrounded the room missing me entirely. Not even the fumes were getting to me as if I was surrounded by a bubble of protection.
Knowing not to speak in front of strangers or anyone besides Carol I waited for the ceremony to be over to voice my concern. When the door was opened it revealed a girl about 5'6" so two inches shorter than me. She had short dirty blond hair with freckles that littered her face. Her green eyes avoided my gold, as looking directly in the eyes of a priestess is bad manners I was told.
"Carol..." I called out, "Is the ceremony over?"
"Yes." She replied curtly.
"I see, then if you do not mind could you please remove these flames?" I asked her silently as to not make a big deal of it to show her I was okay. She looked confused and slightly bowed.
"I'm very sorry madam but I do not see these flames you speak of."
"I see, I apologize for the misunderstanding it seems the long hours are beginning to get to me I wish to return home to sleep now."
"I understand madam I shall help you to your litter." The rest of the night was silent as I was carried home. Which was odd I usually heard their footsteps when I was carried home. Against the rules I slightly peaked out the curtains to see what was amiss. As I looked out all I saw was white. The floors, ceilings, and walls if they were walls even though they looked as if they went on forever. Seeing no one around I stepped out of my litter. As I did so the litter itself disappeared into thin air.
I decided to start walking. That was when I noticed a crack on the floor. As I approached said crack it seemed to quickly spread and break apart revealing a below not too far down. Not having enough time to stop my fall I began to plummet. I managed to roll into my fall which gave me the less possible damage. My surroundings were filled with people.
I couldn't believe it! I was seeing all these people they all looked so different from one another, there were even a lot of what I was told were known as males. I then turned to see a boy with wavy black hair that framed his face and freckles just like Carol's. Curious I reached over and tapped him ever so slightly so he wouldn't notice, although he looked too busy to notice me anyway.
Being a priestess from a single touch I was able to see parts of a person's past and what their next action was going to do in the near future. Seeing everything in the matter of seconds, I held back my tears and prepared myself. I stretched my arms and let out my wings. I was told everyone has wings, I couldn't help but wonder why no one was using them. Maybe these people here did not have them I thought briefly. Carol told me that was how I was chosen to be the priestess everyone has white wings but the one born with gold feathers scattered within the white was told to be given powers by god's will.
I thought quickly and wrapped my wings around me and stood between who I knew now as Ace and the incoming fist of Akainu a supposed admiral of the marines who are after Ace's life. After I heard the resounding thud of the fist hitting my wings I slowly unwrapped them to see if there was any damage.
Our people's wings represent our hearts and were made to protect our lives and are only as strong as the person's will to protect or live. So noticing no damage I was not surprised. However, I was surprised when I looked up and noticed many eyes on me.
Well how was it? Hopefully you're not stabbing your already bleeding eyeballs out to rid yourself from seeing this ever again haha.
Personally I don't know much about religion so this was just jibber jabber because I figured that a priestess would be blessed by god or something didn't mean to offend anyone just thought i'd put that out there.
One question though later on, for example if Sanji were to come in, should I continue her pov then switch to others to explain what's going on since she's pretty clueless, never seeing men before she'll have no clue what sanji is doing. So Review please before those chapters approach to let me know what you think.
Recently updated minor fixes (9/21/15)
