Breaking Dawn Fan fiction

(AN: Hey, ppl. This is my first fanfic, so go easy, k? Lemme know wat u think in the reviews.)

Bella's POV

I sat on the edge of the bed not knowing what to think. I was way too excited to think anyways. I felt like I didn't deserve him. Edward, my Edward. He said he could handle this, and I trust him in my life, I trust him with my life, I know he's can control himself…I hope.

The door creaked open. I blinked once and he was besides me, I felt like I didn't belong here the way he said "I love you Bella Swan." The way he looks like he could strike someone dead with that crooked smile he gave me, just before his lips touched mine.

We were off on a journey, an adventure in a world I never thought of exploring with anyone else besides Edward. I was surprised that he even gave in before the wedding. It was new, different like nothing I've ever experienced… Until I felt a sting, a burning sensation on my neck. Only one word could leave my lips "Edward…" The pain shot up to new heights, my face flushed white. A flashback of Phoenix barley came though all the pain. My screams were so loud that I could only see Edward mouth his words.

"Bella! No! I-I- I'm sorry Bella!'

Edward's POV

I changed into my clothes as fast as possible while dialing Carlisle's number. Alice answered the first ring and before I could say anything she spoke "were on our way, Carlisle has medication I should have told you." Then the phone went dead. I walked to Bella with no wasted time. She was in so much pain. It was so tempting to just eat her, so simple. I got closer to her neck to suck out the venom.

She whispered,"No Stop! Kee-" was all she could say though the pain. So I listened to her. She was going to be a vampire anyways. But we weren't ready for this now.

In a blink of my eyes my family was in the motel room. Carlisle was the first to Bella's aid. "Edward don't just stand there! Take her venom out we have no time to spare!"

"She said no, she wants to be one of us. We were going to change her after the wedding." I glanced at her engagement ring. "Carlisle I know what I'm doing, I love her and for once, I think she's making the right decision."

It was hard to talk with her in so much pain, Alice was already trying to make her feel better. I didn't know anything else to do, so I walked over and kissed her forehead and held her gently, like a glass doll. Emmett was being stupid. Big brothers... "

"Should have used the morphine earlier." I punched him hard on his arm.

"I'm sorry, I didn't tell you Edward. I thought you would change your mind..." Jasper was outside trying not to think about the blood in the room. It was hard for everyone except Carlisle who was now wrapping the wound in a bandage and giving her a drug to sleep. Medicine and drugs are great things. ;D

The effects were starting to work on Bella. She looked at me with sleepy eyes and gave me a very small smile and I could tell she was in pain. She brought me down closer and whispered in my ear, "Thank you, Edward. For everything. I love you, I feel like I'm dy-dy-dying. Yawn I'm getting really, really ti…" and she was gone, in a deep, deep sleep a world that she will never experience again.

Everyone was talking amongst themselves. I was watching Bella in a deep sleep, breathing steadily. I was listening to my family's thoughts. Alice was thinking that she should have told us before. Jasper was calming everyone down. Esme and Carlisle were thinking about how Bella was going to get away from humans. Emmett wasn't thinking, what a surprise, and Jacob was- Jacob?!

There was a growl at the door; the next thing we see is a ravenous werewolf (AN: Ohh scary!!) in the already cramped room.

"Where is she?! Where's Bella?! I heard her scream!"

He saw her lying on the bed with the bandage around her neck. "What did you do?!" He looked at me angrily. He pounced the same time that I ducked. Jasper was right behind him and threw him outside into the rain, and down into the forest. I pushed him and pinned him to the fresh muddy ground.

" I don't want to hurt you Jacob!" I yelled.

"You hurt Bella why don't I hurt you, too?!"

With that he rolled over me and clawed my face. I kicked him off and he ran into the forest to transform back into a human. "I'll see you soon Edward, you better remember."

Later That Night



Carlisle's POV

"Hello is this Carlisle?" He asked after I answered the phone.

"Yes, who is this?" I replied back

"This is Charlie." Charlie, he was the last person on my mind right now. He's going to ask about Bella, ugh! I knew me and Esme should have thought up a better plan. Well I guess we have to play off what we have.

"Oh hello sir, how can I help you tonight?" Bella... oh, poor Bella... She is in so much pain right now in her sleep. I wish I could do something to help besides give her pills. She is a daughter to me, she will be my daughter soon.

"Well I would like to know if you would like to come over right now, to talk about Bella, she has a time she is supposed to be home and lately she hasn't been coming home on time. I would like to talk to you about it with Edward and her." Ok, this is going well. Except one problem that I couldn't say on the phone. Doesn't it feel great knowing that someone in your house is suffering, dying and you have her dad on the other line of the phone wanting to talk to her right now. Well we have to tell him sooner or later, Edward prefers later, I prefer sooner. Well I guess I have to say "sorry" to Edward.

"Sure Charlie we will be right over, we have some news for you."

Edward's POV

As I sat inside Carlisle's black Mercedes, I held my eye drops, ready to put on a show, to fake Bella's death. As we pulled up to the house I put a few drops in my eyes, and blinked rapidly to make sure it looked like I was crying. I walked out of the car and Carlisle rang the door bell.

Charlie invited us in "Is something wrong, Edward?" he asked me before I could say anything Carlisle replied for me. "Well... I don't know if you're ready for this, but it's about Bella." He was shocked by my dad's response. I think we were doing great job acting, since he was thinking about all the bad things that could have happened, and not once did he thing about her being a vampire. Stupid humans. I decide to try my acting skills. " Bell- Bell- Bella's gone!"

Worked like a charm. He believed every word we were saying. I should mess with humans more often. Charlie spoke up starting to cry. "What happened?" was all he could manage to say after his "big news" he just received. Carlisle had a plan "On her way home, she stopped on the road, apparently her car wasn't working," he went on "Some person who was drunk, well... hit her..." Wow, this was almost believable! "I'm sorry Charlie, I did everything I could to save her."

We stayed there for awhile to make it even more believable. I felt bad for him, but ,well, everyone dies. Even if it's not the type of death you would expect.

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