If you notice, we started making the chapters longer, though it's getting a little hard to keep that up in a five day span when we're all in different locations at the moment, so we'll be updating every ten days now. Sorry, though at least the chapters are a bit longer now! Lastly, there is no more point of views; it's all going to be in third person.

Ele: Who's that fat guy over there?

Percy: (Pales) That's Mr. D, how could you not know that?

Messy: We haven't done any disclaimers on him yet. She doesn't really care about anyone who doesn't "contribute" to our story.

K9: …

Ele: Well, we should do a disclaimer on him. He's funny looking.

(Mr. D hears and walks angrily over to them)

Percy: Oh gods... Have fun as dolphins (Runs away and jumps in ocean, presumably to hide behind Poseidon's army)

K9:(Face palms)

Mr. D: (Crosses his arms) hello...girls.

Ele: (When Mr. d stopped walking his stomachs jiggled and the wave patterns on his Hawaiian shirt looked like they were moving. This is too much for her and she breaks out into uncontrollable hysterical laughter) [1]

K9: (Looks at Ele) We're doomed, in the meantime we own nothing!

I

It had been a week since Eddie was lost and Nina returned, though everything was still abnormally quite around Camp Half Blood. with Eddie gone, the Anubis kids were depressed, Nico was even quiter than normal (which means he was basically negative ten in the loudness scale) and everyone on the quest was a bit depressed as well. The Hermes cabin stopped being such tricksters after some of the Ares kids got mad at them for playing a prank on Patricia, who was still upset. even the Ares kids were being calm and rational this week, and Clarisse was being nice to Patricia (though she denied it when Piper asked her) Everyone in short was depressed.

It was fairly peaceful that week, as if the Universe felt bad about the eddie's sacrifice and gave them a break from monster attacks, or any impending doom crises, (which was a first) at least until that afternoon. [2]

It was like the Universe decided they had a long enough vacation and just let the sky fall on them to get them up on their feet. Of course, that didn't really happen since Atlas is still holding up the world, though, it was fairly close. The situation was like one of those dooms day movies, or predictions everyone makes every few years, though never come true. A meteor fell from the sky and hit the middle of the forest.

The prophecy kids, Thalia, Nico, and Anubis kids came running over, "Is that a meteor?" Leo asked.

"No, it's a giant meatball that fell from the sky, of course it a meteor!" Thalia shouted.

"Sorry, someone's grumpy today," Leo said. His comment was quite accurate since Lady Artemis gave Thalia that warning she's been on edge. Lastly the usual quietness at camp didn't help either.

"Though, why is it here?" Annabeth asked.

"Because a piece of another planet, star, or just some random piece of rock got caught in our orbit system, was pulled on to Earth, and just happened to crash here," Mara said.

"No, I know that but I mean who did it get past the border?" Annabeth asked.

"What do you mean?" KT asked.

"The border made by Thalia's tree, it protects us from invading monsters, weather, and makes mortals see nothing but a strawberry farm," Annabeth answered.

"Then, why is that here?" Alfie asked.

"That's what I was getting at!" The Athena girl said, clearly annoyed.

"I'm going to check the tree," Percy shouted.

"I'm coming too," Annabeth shouted.

After Percabeth disappeared there was an Iris message in front of the group, Rachel Elizabeth Dare appeared in front of them, "Um, hi is Percy there?" She asked.

"He just went to check on a tree," Nico answered.

"Well get him back here now it's important," The red head demanded, leading to Nico running off to catch the two.

A few minutes later he returned with Percabeth, "I have another prophecy," she said.

"Not another one!" Jerome shouted.

"It's not like I can control when I get them! Also, would you just let me speak?" Rachel shouted, "

Half bloods and magicians must unite

Or the world will live in eternal night

Followers of Ammit's will walk once more

To begin an all out godly war

A traitor hides amongst the dearest of friends

To start the beginning of the very end…"

At that moment Rachel was cut off by someone's hand covering her mouth, spraying some kind of mist which knocked her out, as she was dragged out of the chair the shadowy figure ended the Iris message.

"Rachel!" Percabeth cried.

"That's not good is it?" Alfie asked later receiving glares from everyone, "Ok, sorry,"

"Our friend is gone! What do you think!" Percy said.

"Also, she didn't finish the prophecy," Jerome said.

"This isn't good," KT said.

"That's not all, check the lines, Half bloods and magicians must unite, Or the world will live in eternal night. We don't know any magicians," Annabeth explained.

"What about the Hecate kids?" Percy asked.

"No, Half bloods and magicians, not Half bloods that are magicians," Annabeth explained.

"Shouldn't we be more worried about the traitor in camp, you know the one who's going to end us!" Jerome shouted.

"What about the followers of Ammit? I though she was gone?" KT asked.

"We thought so too," Fabian said, "Though remember the last prophecy?

To save a friend, The Earth's servant shall rise again, The world will tremble at serpent's power, For all souls to be devoured, The six shall travel towards the jackal's home, Where one shall be lost in stone. Serpent must be Ammit, since she devours the impure souls in Egyptian mythology, then the first line we saved Nina, a friend, though that means Ammit is rising," Fabian explained and looked over towards Nina.

Nina, who was now hanging her head down with guilt, "I'm sorry this is all my fault, I got captured, Ammit is rising, Eddie is gone, it's all because of me! I'm a terrible Chosen One!" By now she was starting to cry a few tears.

"No, no, it's not your fault, I mean Ammit is only rising, meaning she can be stopped, she still needs her followers to rise this can work and as for Eddie we'll find a way to bring him back," Fabian said.

"Fabian, thanks," Nina whispered while hugging him.

"Ammit's not our only problem, we checked the boarder, and the tree's fine though we have something else to worry about the mist still keeps it a secret, though the border is in reverse basically. We can't get out, though people can get in," Annabeth said.

"So we're trapped here just waiting for Ammit and her followers to pick us off one by one?" Jerome asked.

"Yep, pretty much, though who are her followers?" Percy asked.

Alfie and Fabian exchanged nervous glances, "Sinners are, five one for a different sin, anger, envy, pride, spite, and greed. It's not only that though you can only get taken at noon or midnight, but once your taken your under Ammit's control," Fabian said.

"How do you know that?" Annabeth asked.

"Because Alfie, Patricia and I were all sinners before," Fabian said.

"But how; you're so nice and Alfie doesn't seem mean? I guess I can see Trixie as anger or envy," Percy asked.

"I was a sinner of pride, and Alfie was the sinner of anger since he got really angery when they threatened Willow," Fabian answered.

"Oh Alfie," Willow said.

"Guys, where's Patricia?" Nina asked.

"Probably in her cabin; let's go check," Piper said.

"Right," The Chosen one agreed.

As Piper and Nina went into the cabin they saw it was empty, completely empty except for one note taped on Patricia's bunk, "Now, I'm going to be leaving for a while. I'll be fine. Nothing to worry about, I just needed some space. All I ask is to take care of yourselves. I'll be back soon. So, don't look for me. Eddie wouldn't want anyone else to get lost. Visualize how much of a nervous wreck he would be if someone else did get lost. I'll miss you all. Last night was when I left in case anyone's wondering.

-Patricia"

"She what!" KT asked, as Piper handed her the note.

"She ran away," Nina said.

"Ok, so let me get this straight, Patricia is gone, the border is in reverse so we can't get out though people can get in, Ammit is rising, and we have a traitor that's going to end the WORLD!" KT shouted.

"Yep," Piper said nonchalantly.

Messy: (Starts hyperventilating)

Mr. D: (Puts his hands on his hips, this causes his stomachs to jiggle)

Ele: (Doubles over, laughing)

Mr. D: Now, I couldn't help overhearing your conversation, but, correct me if I'm wrong, it sounded like you thought I was funny looking, hmm?

K9: Not all of us, sir. Only...(Looks at Ele laughing on the ground)

Messy: (Hyperventilating, doesn't remember why she's in trouble, just starts rambling) Please sir, we weren't drinking! I don't even like wine! It is by far the stupidest thing ever invented! I mean please!

K9: …

Ele: (Laughing on floor)

Messy: I mean, what kind of loser would support wine-

Mr. D: Hmmm. Somehow I'm not upset that I'm missed previous disclaimers. Oh well, I'm sure I'll like you better as dolphins!

K9: (Steps forward and waves her hand) these are not the troublemakers you're searching for.

Mr. D: (Blinks confused) No?

K9: No. You are looking for the black haired oaf in cabin 3. [3]

Mr. D: (Eyes unglaze) Hello girls! You haven't happened to see Peter Johnson around, have you?

K9: Nope.

Messy: …and in conclusion, wine is disgusting!

Mr. D: (Gives messy a 'look') Uh huh... Ok, tell me if you do...

Ele: (Laughter fades and looks at K9) What was that?

K9: (Pulls out a blue light saber) Jedi mind trick. You will now say it (Waves hand again)

Mr. D: Thanks for reading and please review!

[1] Did the same thing Ele did, come on visualize that and tell me you didn't at least chuckle or smirk

[2] Happy Ele, I added you edits!

[3] One of my favorite parts in Starwars