Title: With You

Author: JMBarrie

a/n I watched the notebook today (actually yesterday it's 12:00 right now) and it was soooo good! So I wrote a poem about it lol! This is from Ally's point of view and it takes place in the middle of the movie during the rain scene. Please Review!!

Please hold my head

while you kiss me

I want to feel you knead

my numb skin

and watch raindrops

suspended on your lashes

I brush back your hair

and trace the fine features

on your face

Tasting the mixture

of lips so soft and tender

and falling glass

seeping into our souls

we gorge ourselves

on passion and desire

It is only with you I feel

truly complete

with no emptiness in my heart

I want to touch your face

I want you to hold me tight

I want to bottle this moment

and savour it's sweetness

in small sparkling sips.