hey guys this is my first story on here I'm kinda nervous so this might be disappointing to some of you there is probably going to be a lot of errors like spelling, spacing, punctuation etc. ok here we go ("disclaimer: I don't own anything from unfabulous.")
addie singer was known for hating thunderstorms there was never a reason she did she just like the flashes, and the booms and all that.
well addie was in her room, her parents went their grandparents, while ben was at juice. She was on her laptop, tv on, laying in her bed just relaxing. "servere weather heading around this area" addie had heard the weather man say this and instantly looked up. the storm was coming to her.
She started to hear the thunder and dove under her covers. Soon the power had went out and by this time she was scared to death.
After a little while addie had decided to call jake. She picked up her phone and dialed his number "hello?" she heard jake say groggily "jake" addie said in a whimper.
"addie? are you ok? whats wrong? are you hurt?" jake replied worriedly "j-jake I'm s-scared" "what is it addie what are you scared of" "t-t-the thunderstorm" "ok I'm on my way just stay there" "ok" addie replied in a small voice
30 minutes later jake had arrived. He ran through the front door and up the stairs to addie's room. "knock knock" jake said as he opened the door. He walked over to her bed and pulled the covers off of her head. Next thing he knew addie had latched onto his torso just sobbing. "awe addie it's ok it's just a little storm " jake soothed as he stroked her hair but she just held onto him.
"Here come on let's go lay down" jake said as he led her back down onto the bed. She snuggled up to his chest as he wrapped his arms around her. "I love you jake" addie said softly "I love you to addie" jake replied to her as he kissed her head.
The next morning came into addie's room and saw the couple in each others arms. She smiled and took a picture and that's how she left them.
("so how did I do for my first story?)
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