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Chapter 1: Imprisoned

Reid was restless. He didn't understand why his brother had to take hours to make his ruling while it only took Reid a matter of minutes. He was sure that his brother Augustus just loved to be the one who always had finale say, but of course that wasn't true at all since the Queen had the finale say if she chose to.

He had devoted his immortal life to his creator or Mother, the Queen. She always had a flare for the theatrics which he could never understand and always thought that it was a little to much. He lived and breathed… well lived at least for the Dominion it was so rare for a vampiric coven to own so much, but he guessed having a sibling who was part three big three got the Queen this. He knew that outside the dominion that it was almost taboo for people to talk about it since all the nomadic vampires who crossed our land were killed if they crossed onto our soil in this case it seemed different no one was completely sure why this one had done it he was old enough to know better than this it was just about the stupidest thing you could do.

The decision had already been voted through senate, courtesy of his "cousin" Jasmine who took great pleasure in voting ever thing through to the council.

The dominions government worked this way, it had tree levels that each owned a vote the first; the Senate was made up of about sixty Vampires that lived around the areas the dominion had power over (Greenland, Canada, Scotland, Laos Hong Kong and a few other places) the Senate was Always held in Laos because of Jasmine who practically owed the Senate vote. The second level was the Council which only had three Members; Augustus, Maciain and Himself. They resided mostly in Canada though Maciain had a manor in Scotland. The last level of government was The Lady in Charge, Queen Diathina or to Reid, Mother.

The Queen had started the Dominion about five hundred years ago after traveling the world for two and half millennium. She was turned at around twenty five frozen in her perfect beauty. She had long auburn hair that went to her waist and beautiful Crimson eyes that shown into your soul. She had a very interesting ability that many thought was useless. She could make you love her with all your heart after staying with long enough many newborns fell under her spell and her guard would grow she believed that she would someday rival the Volturi in power, she still hated her brothers for what they did to her. But that matter could wait.

Reid was different then the other vampires in habits and in he no longer longed for human flesh instead he eat that of the animal. He also looked different than many, black wavy hair that reached his shoulders and in the place of the Irises was nothing but white. Reids power overtook the sense of sight and projected auras of peoples powers personalities and the overall character of the person. Not all had gifts but all had auras and he no longer longed to see as he had in his human life.

As Reid mulled over his thoughts on the matter his brother and cousin entered the room arguing yet again.

"You want to let him SPEAK! That is the worst possible solution to this, why do you seem to always want to waste the dominions time Maciain!"

Augustus seemed to be quiet miffed by Macian's proposition. Will Maciain seemed to get even angerer that Augustus wasn't listening.

"Lisen here ye' barmy ol' Roman Tha' lad out thure is got somethin' ta say an' I me self want te hear it!" Maciain's strong Celtic made hard to understand what he was saying. He looked incredibly young to be arguing with Augustus who could pass for twenty any day of the week will Maciain looked fourteen. Maciain had short brown hair with high cheekbones only one word could describe him: cute. Many people commented on it in court. As for his sister Jasmine who was about sixteen when she was turned they didn't look like to people who controlled Most of the Dominion. Their ages varied while they were each from same time period give or take a couple decades.

Finally Reid's lips parted and he spoke.

"We let him speak to the three of us and Jasmine not a pip to the Queen."

Augustus looked sad but gave up to Maciain. As soon as this was said Jasmine walked in. She was elegant in her silk blood red dress that touched her toes. She had straight black hair that was only about half way down her back her lips were full and her eyes looked bored.

"Finally you grew a pair Reid," she commented. Maciain giggled while Augustus just rolled his eyes at there antics.

As they walked quietly through the halls of the castle they kept in a tight group. The dungeon looked like any other in history but newer and fancier tools for torture (thanks to Augustus for those)

There A man sat in a cold cellar. It didn't bother him because of his vampiric nature. He smiled at the thought of his family back home. He wanted to leave so badly but he had to deliver the message, more of a plea for help to the Dominion, they were the only ones that would stand a chance in a fight against the Volturi but with the help of the other covens… they might even defeat the Volturi. Jasper was struggling to fight the urge to escape and go hunt. He had known going into this that there was a large chance that that he wouldn't survive but if they could get the Dominion on there side then had more than a fighting chance.

As four figures walked closer he could feel more than the usual anger and hate. The female finally spoke to him.

"You have been given a gift Wanderer, our time Now tell me why you are here?"

He cleared his throat.

"My name is Jasper Whitlock, and I have come with a plea for help. My coven has been relentlessly hunted by the Volturi for our gifts and for my hybrid niece. I ask that you stand by our side in battle and that you lay down your lives so that on that day those who are innocent are spared." He finished looking around at the audience he had. All four looked thoughtful at the moment until the smallest one; a mere boy spoke.

"We release you to your leaders so that you can bring your people to the palace, the Queen will love this." He said grinning and with that all of shackles were undone and he was free.

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