Here is my Twilight fanfic about when Bella and Edward tell Charlie they're getting married. Please review:)
I was about to die, right there in my own kitchen. I tried to breathe evenly as possible. Charlie was sitting there waiting for me to tell him the big news. Edward squeezed my hand reassuringly. I took a deep breath. "Dad... Edward and I are getting married." There I said. I sat there waiting for him to lash out in an angry rage. But instead he sat there looking confused. "Married?" He said dazed like he couldn't believe it. Heck I couldn't believe it! "Did you ask my permission?" He asked Edward. His eyes were wide with surprise. "Mr. Swan may I marry your daughter?" Edward ask in a voice like melting honey. Hopefully Charlie woudn't say no. I'm eighteen aren't I? I can make my own decisions can't I? Can I? I started sweat. What would Charlie say? Why am I asking myself all these questions? I'm losing my mind. Say some thing Charlie Swan! Charlie began to clutch his chest. He's having a heart attack! "Bella, call 911." Edward said calmly. I rushed to the phone. I didn't think it would be that bad.
I sat in the waiting room of the hospital. Edward was holding my hand. I didn't know this would happen. Oh God! Me getting married has killed my father! Carlisle came into the waiting room. "Good news Bella, it was just a panic attack." Carlisle said satisfied. I put my hand over my heart in relief. "He still won't tell me what happened before this happened." Carlisle said with a laugh. "He wants to see you two." Carlisle added quickly. We walked into a tiny hospital room barely big enough for the four of us. "Carlisle, did you know your son is going to marry my daughter?" Charlie said irritated. "Did he ask your blessing?" Carlisle asked Charlie concerned. "That's what he was doing when I had the panic attack! So Edward I'll let you know you have my blessing. I'll let you marry my daughter." Charlie said softly almost embarrassed. I began to cry and hugged Edward tightly. "Not in front of me." Charlie said disgusted.
I know it's short. But what do you think of it?