Ok, this story is just fun to write. I own the story line, and no I did not copy anyone. I'm new on fanfiction.
CHAPTER 1- RUN AWAY
Kyle Montez stormed out of the Montez' house for the 3rd time that night. Gabriella was left in the living room bleeding, bruised and crying. She got off the ground and went into the kitchen to get cleaned and fixed up. Each time she lightly touched herself, tears fell in pain.
"Gabi, are you alright?" a voice came from the hall. She turned around and saw her 7 year old sister Annie, and her 11 year old twin brother and sister Andrew and Kelly, who looked like they were crying. Gabriella nodded.
"Ya. I guess. I can't stand seeing you guys hurt, I rather take it on my own" Gabriella confessed.
"Gabi, I'm scared. What if it gets worse?" Annie cried as she walked closer. Gabriella hugged her tightly not caring about the bruises.
"I know. I think we should run away." Gabriella suggested. She, Andrew, and Kelly talked about it for the past week. They didn't tell Annie because she was too young. They all nodded in agreement
"When?" Annie asked. Andrew and Kelly nodded at the 15 year old Gabriella
"Tonight" they all ran upstairs to pack as fast as possible. Gabriella ran into her mother's old office before she died, to get the passports. Every single one of them (besides Annie) knew what happened 6 years ago to their mother. Gabriella signed them all up for school by phone, got an apartment for them and got herself 3 jobs, which starts in September.
It was a day before school started and Gabriella worked at the diner, book store and the music store in Albuquerque, New Mexico. Andrew, Kelly and Annie sometimes stayed home and they went with her when they wanted to. Gabriella worked Mondays and Thursdays at the diner, Tuesdays, Fridays and Sundays at the book store and Wednesdays and Saturdays at the music store. For her shifts is always the same for each job, 5-11, and if lucky 5-9.
Gabriella, Andrew, Kelly and Annie got their story straight that night so if they really had to, they would lie to whoever that person was. Their story is that their dad was on a business trip and he always gets sent away. And if they had to talk about their mom, it was that she is out of the picture. Now that school is tomorrow, they are excited yet scared, and now their secret keeping is now put to the test. Hope it works for them all.
Ok, so that is the first chapter. I hope you understand it. Gabriella is 15, Kelly and Andrew are 11 and Annie is 7. Their mom is dead and Kyle (their dad) is abusive. I hope you get it. I just found out that it is kind of like "Feel This", but I wrote this story when I was 8, and that was in 2001. So no, no one copied each other. The author of "Feel This" and I didn't copy each other and ya. I love that story because it is really cool but it came out after mine. Mine is just something I was feeling and I didn't read it back then obviously. So, please review