Yay! First English ff. And first Doctor Who ff. So please be nice :D And sry for my bad English.
With a loud "vwroop vwroop" the TARDIS materialize in the middle of a rainy and wide landscape. the Doctor pops his head out of the door and grin wide. He steps out in the rain and turns around to the red haired woman which follows him out in the cold air. "Oi! Spaceman! It´s bloody could out here and it´s raining!" She put on here hood and made another step. "Donna, this is the amazing planet Raxalon! The rain is the cleanest rain in the whole galaxy", he put his head back and open his mouth. Some seconds later he spits the rain out. "Ew! What has happen to this water?" He starts to wipe his mouth and tong with his sleeve. "The cleanest water in the galaxy?" Donna ask with a smile. He grins back and looks around:" Maybe not. But it´s also the only planet with eternal rain." "Eternal! After this you owe me a trip to the best spa in the galaxy!" The Doctor grins wider and star to sonic the area. "I going to take my jacket!", Donna says and went to the TARDIS. Sometime later she steps out of the time machine now with a long brown rain jacket. "What ya thinking?", she ask and show him here jacket. He looks at here and suddenly his face falls. "What is the matter?", Donna ask worried. And suddenly she knows. The TARDIS start to dematerialize with a loud hum. "NONONONONONONO!", the Doctor shouts and ran to the place where the TARDIS have stand before. "What happened?", Donna ask, "what should we do without the TARDIS?" The Doctor just stand at the same place like before, the fists clenched. "Doctor?", Donna ask carefully. His hands relaxed and he turns around. With a smile he says:" Don´t worry Donna. We just need to walk to the next town. The TARDIS has done this before. Every time I have found here in the nearest city. So: Allons-y!" He point in the direction behind Donna and starts walking. "Spaceman! How you know which way we need to go?!" "Time Lord, I just know it!" Donna rolls her eyes and follows him.
The walk for some hours when things began to turns out bad. The Doctor starts to walk slower and stumbles over his feet. "Oi! Are you drunk?", Donna ask with a smile. The Doctor just shakes his head and says with a weak voice:"We need to walk to the city, quickly!" Abruptly he falls into a coughing fit. "Are you alright?" He smiles a fake smile: "I´m always alright." Donna just put one here I-am-fully-believing-this-face and they walk further. Donna looks with a worry full view on the back of the alien. He falls in another coughing fit, but when she pat his back, he only smiles. Donna don't believe this smile, not for a second. But she don't know what to do. Every time he stumbles she makes herself ready to catch him. But he made it for another thirty minutes. Then suddenly he stumbles again and lands with the face first in the mud. "Doctor!", Donna screams and hastened to come to him. He doesn't move. "Come on spaceman!", she turn him around. His face is muddy and pale. His eyes are closed. "Doctor! Wake up!", she shakes him. But there is no response. Donna sits next to the unmoving body of her best friend and try to calm down. "Ok, Donna! You don't know what to do and you never have seen a sick alien before. But don't panic! You have seen all episode of Scrubs, something of that just need to be helpful in this situation!" She looks at the wet and dirty face of the Doctor. She really didn't know what she could do.
(The Doctor)
(Some time before)
They land on one of his favourite planets. It was wet and could, but on this planet he just feels happy. After he has stepped out of his blue box, he suddenly knows that something was wrong. The air smells wrong. It has never smell like this before. But then Donna step out of the TARDIS and he urged this thought away.
(After the TARDIS has dematerialize)
Damn! This thought describes the situation perfect. He has drunk the water. And he has tasted that it was poisoned. Maybe not for Donna, but definitely for him. He was hoping that Donna wants to go back in the TARDIS and he can metabolize the poison somehow. With some help from his time machine it wasn't complicated. But now... Suddenly a wave of pain was going through his body. He has clenched his fist and was trying not to scream. Donna was saying something. He takes some deep breaths and smiles. He doesn't want that she see him like this.
(Some time later)
The poison was making a really good job. He was barely feeling his legs. This is not good, he thought. And then he suddenly wasn't feeling his entire body. He was falling and before the blackness swallows him he only think: Sorry, Donna. I'm so sorry.
Wow...first chapter completed. And my feet are asleep now XD Next chapter will be uploaded when it is finished ^^