ok so here goes nothing. My first fanfic. Please be brutally honest, do you like it? hate it? any advise? No beta right now, so sorry! Read on
Sunsets and Car Crashes
I see a sense of wonder
Deep inside your eyes
As we're sparkling and twirling
In the twilight
And after three long years
I think that we both need this
So we seal the deal
In the parking lot with a kiss
And in case you
And in case you were wondering
You are like a sunset to me
You're all kinds of beautiful
As you end my day
And you sweetly retire
As stars chase you away
I'd collapse to the grass
With your notes ringing in my head
Let the rain fill my mouth
And in a couple of hours I'll be dead
But all the while my lips
Are whistling our tune
But the beauty lies in how
You will revive me soon
And in case you
And in case yo were wondering
You are like a sunset to me
You're all kinds of beautiful
As you end my day
And you sweetly retire
As the star chase you away
And in case you're wondering
You are like a hurracaine to me
Your violence is beautiful
And your center sweet
Now tell me this
Do you know how we'd meet?
And in case you were wondering
You are everything to me (to me)
Everyday had always been the same to me: long, meaningless and screwed up.
I had always wondered what it would be like to have someone love me, just for me. Knowing every dark path in my mind and not caring if I'm broken, if I'm not complete, just some one that could make me happy, and that would just be happy to see me. But how can you love, if haven't been loved, ever?
I'm not beautiful, or extraordinary. I'm plain and very broken. My mind filled with fear and rage for things beyond my control.
My only wish in life is to know what it's like to be someone's world, someone's everything. But my life is an endless twilight. Never sunrises, only car crashes.