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Like many have already said before this is my first time writing a fan fiction on this cite, I look forward to your review both positive and negative, though I don't appreciate trash talking for I will not answer you. Feel free to e-Mail me. This chapter is a teaser; I plan on my story to have at least 10-paged chapters.
Destination: Submission
It all started with a bang, a large explosion, but if you think about it doesn't everything start with a grand entry or show of power, for example like the Big Bang, a very controversial topic, or what about creation and life but unfortunately I'm not here to talk about that topic. I am here to discuss a story, one that begins with another very controversial topic. Demons. In a land, unknown to me and unknown to you. A land of fantastic people, beliefs and pursuits. In a village of steam and mountains and lush forest, believed to be the heart and blood of this fine land named fire resided people, protected by shadow warriors of magnificent power. However, their power was about to be tested, both now and many, many years to come.
The man was running and panting breathing in every breath liked a constricted plan, like the one springing in his mind. He had done it, he had solved all their problems but he whimpered with his grin at the though of the pain he was going to cause.
"I must do this for my people, for Kushina, for my son, I cannot fail them" he though
Through his mind as his legs began to shine with yellow, the color of rays from the sun matching his long spiky hair as well as his persona. Golden sunshine. His entire body now shone gold as he leaned forward and in a flash was gone, leaving a tail of sunshine were he last stood, in the now desolate, and barren city, as dark stormy clouds loomed over head.
He entered his office, which currently did not resemble an office but a hurricane's leftover dinner. He ran over to his pathetic looking desk and rummaged through the drawers when he found a scroll, and you wonder what so great about that, well just listen.
He unrolled the scroll and got a pen out and applied it to the vein of his wrist were it began to absorb blood and caused the pen to turn red, as he began to write. In blood. Word after word, symbol after symbol as the paper began to glow he drew a quick spiral and magically the scroll rolled itself as the man put on his robe of golden flame and his black finger less gloves. His hand opened up as he looked at the glowing scroll.
"For My People" he said with a face of stone as a gust of wind blew the office into even more of a mess. The man was gone.
"Fire style: Grand Fire Ball Justus!" "Lighting Style: First Strike!" "Fire Style: Phoenix Flower Justus" the cries of the battlefield. Death was stagnating in the air as ten's upon hundred fell. You wonder what type of opponent they were facing, was it there tactics, or do they just plainly suck. NO. No. and...no the moon reflected the current events. alone figure in the darkness shining the only light for large space's of distance, the ironic thing was that the figure wasn't really shining but using another figure's sunlight. ..Tick. You here that, the is death on your door. May he come in?
"Sir, it's getting bad" a man said in a haste as he was bent down on a knee as a sign of respect.
"Do you have the child?" the man with Golden Hair asked with a stern voice "Yes, but Master are you sure this is a wise decision?"
"Kakashi you can not imagine how many times I have tried to change this, but this must be done" The man bowed his head in regret, as he placed his hand on his students shoulder.
"Protect him," The man said with a golden gate smile as he leaped a defining height
"Minato-Sensei!!" Kakashi cried as fell to his knee weeping in silence as war went on around him, blissfully ignoring him as if he himself was an insect to the Stained glass mirror of the world.
He could feel the wind in his air, waving rapidly as his robe flapped wildly from the wind, and then his eyes snapped gold and shining as they peered at the god-forsaken sight of the gigantic Black and orange stripped Baboon destroying everything insight, as it screeched an ungodly scream that destroyed anything and everything. It looked with its dark orange eyes at the yondaime, or fourth leader of the village as it jumped in the air ready to kill him.
"Goodbye my son" The Yondaime pulled out the small glowing scroll holding it he began making a rabid array of hand symbols with his hands as he neared the beast. In a mere second, he clapped his hands together "Done!"
A blinding light filled all of fire country, blinding white light erasing the gigantic creature. When the light finally vanished all was left was a baby giggling frantically in a 2 mile diameter crater. A figure appeared next to it, Pipe in hand smelling of cherry, and a large hate with a three on it.
"My boy, oh my boy...What has he done" said the third Hokage As he peered at the child giggling with very sharp teeth for a 5 month year old baby, especially with his very disturbing eyes The left was Dark golden color with a black iris, and his right eye a Dark Blue. and his hair was in a Black and Gold striped pattern, you were unable to tell even the dominate color. "My Boy My boy, what have they done to you?"
Next installment: Life in an Onion