A/N My hopefully better recreation of my friendly neighborhood spiderman seres.
The friendly neighborhood spider-man
In the night skies of New York city swings a young red and blue hero "wwwwwhhhhhgaaaaaahhhhhoooooooooooooo" 'hey there peter parker here, your friendly neighborhood spiderman patrolling the city as usual, it's been about 3 months since my science class went to oscorp for a field trip my friend harry set up; where an escape test spider escaped and bit me and we all know that leads to this kind of nonsense!' He stops his internal monologue when he sees a familiar thug trying to break into a best buy "ah come on quentin beck…. Really this is way too easy, isn't this starting to get old?" 'Lunge, swing crowbar, desperate right hook, fly backwards all webbed up!' After he was done with the routine he made his way home to his kindly, middle aged aunt may so that he could actually get to school tomorrow. 'Since no one knows I'm spiderman and I'm a straight A science student I'm kinda the schools biggest nerd that doesn't really have friends beyond a few exceptions: harry osborn; richest kid around and son of oscorps CEO Norman osborn, then there's Gwen stacy; she lives on my street, I've known her since she and her father; captain George stacy moved here when I was 10 when she helped me when local football jock flash Thompson was picking on me as usual. Harry always speculates she has "a thing" for me and I'd have to agree; as weird as that would be I can't say I have a problem with it.' Later that night at captain stacys precinct "quentin beck, you've been in and out of here 10 times in the past three months! Now your bail has been paid but before you just walk out again you're going to answer all my questions…!" After 45 minutes of no progress he was let out only to big cut off by an expensive limo." please get in I'm the kingpin and I've got a proposition you can not refuse." At fisk tower where quentin beck was brought "whoa! Fisk what is the meaning of this, what do you want from me…?" Fisk gestured to three people standing around in a kind of circle one with white hair, and a light brown vest over a dress shirt with jade green eyes and glasses, another a white lab coat with a burgundy tie and glasses the last of the three was a skinny,dark haired man in a green dress shirt. "Allow me to introduce you to phineas mason, spencer and alistair smythe. They are going to give you the power that you have so long desired." The next morning at midtown high peter arrives with his fellow neighbor and friend close by, peter and Gwen often arrived to school together but for some reason people began to taunt "nerd love" a lot more lately 'I wouldn't be surprised if harry has been encouraging this' "you know pete everyone already thinks that we're together and I know it's a little weird but I really really do like you peter so maybe we should just make it official…?" 'Well that was unexpected… this has been going on for a few years and she'd always shake it off…? She must really want to…! But what's so bad about that pete? You like Gwen, you've known her for years and she's always been there for me so what's with the hesitation…? Oh yeah my "extra curricular activities" no one can ever get close enough to find out, but then again that's an awfully lonely life and it's not like anyone would ever believe "the king of the nerds" peter parker is the friendly neighborhood spiderman…' "yeah it might be a little weird Gwen, but that doesn't mean I have any problems with it" as he gave her a flirty smile "did I hear you right peter parker…? The self isolated science geek is actually willing to go out with someone other than his genetics homework…? I'm shocked!" "Hey I spend time with you and harry all the time! I can't believe you'd think I had some kind of crush on science" he said in mock offense "besides I'm not the only science geek here miss stacy…." it's true Gwen was also really interested in science but not nearly as much as peter "well yeah we ALL hang out a lot, or use to until you got so damn busy but it's always been the three of us! If we're gonna do this there will be a lot more you and me. Without disappearing every 5 minutes!" Gwen had really started to get mad with peter having to constantly leave her and harry randomly if he even made it to them at all. "Sorry Gwen I know I've been all over the place lately but after uncle ben… aunt may really needs my help and there are only so many places that will hire a 16 year old with my…. qualifications but believe me I'll definitely have time for you!" As he kisses her lower cheek "I'm holding you to that mr parker…. hey can I come by around dinner? I heard your aunt is making her famous lasagna and banana cake for dessert?" 'Who told her that?' "Wow news on my aunt's cooking sure travels fast….'gwen should be gone before my nightly patrol' yeah sure no problem, I'm sure aunt may would love to see you and so would i…." a playful smirk appears on her face "now when did you get so flirty peter parker….?" About an hour later at Fisk tower the tinkering trio were building beck some kind of green suit. "So uh guys how exactly is this suit here supposed to give me power…? I mean even with the suit I'll still be just a normal guy." Kingpin is clearly annoyed " this here enhancement suit is designed to increase your strength and has a variety of special tools. While be it is a suit with all these vigilantes popping up like spider man meddling with my business I'll need everything I can get to use against him! That smart ass little bug thinks he can outsmart me!? No matter how intelligent he is spider man is finished!" Over at the parker house peter is desperately trying to hide a large mosquito bite on his nose in ways that are laughably dumb "uuhhhhnnn there's no way I can this stupid thing..!" But he was caught off guard when he heard the voice of an angel "why hide it pete? A little blemish doesn't change the amazing person you are inside and out. And besides your whole face was full of them when we were younger" "you sound like you've wanted this between us for a while…?" Gwen looks almost disappointed by how oblivious he is "peter… I've been in love with you since we were 12…." then Gwen passionately kisses him while unbuttoning his shirt. 'Oh uh oh! My suit!' But it was to late she had seen the red and blue spandex suit he had on "hhhhoooouuuhhnn… peter what… what is this…?" The look of horror on Gwens face made him feel so ashamed that he didn't tell her 'but it was for her own safety! Oh right who are you kidding how many times already have Gwen and harry been in danger anyway?!' "Gwen… I can explain…" as she backs away from him " so… you're this… this spider man guy who's been risking his life fighting crime and saving people…?" Through a vain smile "yeah that pretty much covers it" as she now starts to cry "and you just what forget to tell me…? And what about harry? Does your aunt even know?" Not even daring to make eye contact "no no one else knows.. but not because I didn't want to tell you.! Gwen you were the first person I wanted to tell after it happened! But then after uncle ben I couldn't take that chance!" Gwen starting to calm down had her scientific curiosity get the better of her "peter. How did this happen…?" "The oscorp spider three months ago. When it bit me it altered my DNA, combined it with that of a spider, I went to an underground wrestling club to try and win money but the guy swindled me so when a burger robbed him i let him go. I let dennis carradine run right by me and did nothing and because of that uncle ben was killed! I could have stopped it but I didn't!" As he breaks down in tears "oh pete you couldn't have known. So you made a big mistake that doesn't mean you should get yourself killed by criminals.." "uncle ben had said that with great power comes great responsibility. I have this power and uncle ben died because I didn't use it properly I won't let that happen again.!" Gwen starts crying again "but peter you could be killed! Every time you go out there you might not ever come back, and then what happens to your aunt or me…? I couldn't survive if peter parker wasn't in my life!" Peter approaches Gwen and grabs her shoulders "I know this isn't going to be easy for you but I just need to do this. Spider man is who I am… my destiny." A heartbroken look flashes her face "but what about peter parker….? What happens to him…?" Peter cups her face and kisses her "he shares a wonderful life with the brilliant and beautiful Gwen stacy.!" Just then an alert came up on his police scanner "all units we have reports of a robbery at the metro bank by a masked assailant in green weaponized suit." Gwen looked concerned "oh no peter you can't just run into whatever is waiting for you!" "Gwen I can't just ignore it. I gotta go I'm sorry.." "go get him pete and then come back here" as he hastily goes to jump out the window "oh yeah don't worry I'll be fine! I'll be back soon love you!" As he dives out the window to stop this green weapon suit warning prick but the radio forgot to mention this idiot had a freaking fishbowl on his head! "Whoa! Hey there bubble brain! Uh what the hell are you doing?!" But he shot some green lightning "hey I'm strictly a don't barbecue superhero! Wait if you can throw green lightning then why is it you can't figure out a fishbowl is not a helmet?!" "I am mysterio master of technology and mysticism! And I have a strong dislike for spiders.!" 'Is this guy for real…?' "Whoa whoa whoa technology and mysticism…? There is no way those two should ever go together!" 'Alright if it's not magic doing this it's technology tech like that stupid green suit so let's see how can i disable that thing?!' He sees a river near by 'perfect he's got a tech power suit and if it gets drenched than the electronics will short circuit and fry!' "Hey fishbowl if you want me so badly then come on the party's over here!" 'Ok now all I got to do is lure him where he needs to be' as he slowly backs up to the edge of the river dam by mysterio "nowhere to run to now spider man!"' Oh this isn't gonna be fun' "Nowhere to run!? How about swim!?" As he webs mysterio and dives off the edge dragging mysterio with him "aahhhh my suit! What's happening!? I can't do anything!" "Really? Your suit is mechanical and doesn't mix with water! That's pretty common sense man…" 'alright now let's see who's under this bowl' "quentin beck…? Man really!?" After mysterio is taken into custody spiderman made his way back to his home at aunt may's and went to sleep.
A/N In this peter has been having his adventures for about three months and has already begun his jurney when he's first scene, Gwen has glasses, nerdy interests and a quirky persona, this is an attempt at a rewrite of my story friendly neighborhood spiderman that hopefully should make more sense and be less consfusing than my previous version, I also felt like the whole thing where Peter was "forced" into telling Gwen who he was in my other attempt was just dumb but I still wanted her to find out pretty quick so I felt the old parker luck would be more appropriate to where something happens and she sees him waring the suit.