Hello readers! I've edited this story, because I've been reading many stories with unrealistic plots, so I've decided to change my story. The chapters will start disappearing, and new ones will replace them. You'll like it, I promise! Alright, lets get started!
Prologue:
A flame-colored tom wandered around a starry forest searching. He didn't know exactly what he was searching for, but he knew that he was searching for something. Soon, he soon saw a gray-blue pelt in the distance, and he realized what he had been searching for. An explanation.
See, this flame-colored tom wasn't sure what was going on. He knew that he was dead, because he was in StarClan. But, if he was dead, why didn't he get to say something to his mate and kits, or to some cat, like all the other cats did before they died? It didn't seem right. But, he could see the one cat that could explain this all to him, and he felt a strong sensation of relief.
"Bluestar!" he called, padding towards the she-cat.
The she-cat, Bluestar, looked up, surprised. "Why, Firestar. What a surprise it is to see you here."
"Surprise?" Firestar meowed, astonished. "Why? Didn't you see me die?"
Bluestar purred. "Oh Firestar, did you not see? My my, I better tell you, then..."
"Tell me what?"
"Firestar, you're not dead."
"What? How can I not be dead? I'm in StarClan!"
"You were saved from dying. Sandstorm-"
"Sandstorm saved me? How?"
"When Tigerstar was about to kill you, Sandstorm jumped in front and fought him. She was amazing, she pinned him down in a heartbeat, and he was dead the next heartbeat. Sandstorm saved you by killing him."
"Wow...so, where is my body now?"
"It's at camp, Firestar. Jayfeather's trying to heal you, but whether he succeeds is up to you."
"Meaning?" Firestar meowed.
Bluestar lead him to a pool of water. "This pool, Firestar, is a portal. If you jump inside before sunset, you will have your life ahead of you, as it was before the battle. If sunset comes and goes, and you're still here, you will be dead. At sunset, Jayfeather will give up all hope of ever curing you, and he is trying every possible cure on you right now."
"Before sunset?" Firestar meowed incredulously.
"The vigil is at moonhigh, Firestar, and the body must be buried at moonrise. That is the warrior way."
Firestar thought about it. "Wait. Before I make my decision, I must know: is Sandstorm alive or dead?"
Bluestar purred. "Oh Firestar. Did I say anything about her being killed?"
Firestar then knew what he had to do. He had to return to ThunderClan, and live out the rest of his life with his mate, kits, and Clan. He turned to jump into the pool.
"Wait, Firestar," Bluestar meowed. "Before you leave, I have a message for you."
"A message?" Firestar turned to face Bluestar. "What message?"
Bluestar's eyes then started to glow with a strange aura. "The silver cat, along with the ever-changing aspen, shall rage against the darkness." she meowed. "Good bye, Firestar, and good luck."
And that's the chapter! So, the prophecy is in there and Firestar being ressurected. That should be better than the previous prologue. Hope you like it! R and R!
