hello, my fellow readers who have clicked on this story for some reason that I cannot fathom :)

I wrote this poem for my creative writing class and the theme was personification. I love TID and I love Will so much that I just couldn't stop my hand from writing this poem.

I will admit, the tone I used for this is more of a modern style than I would have hoped for, so I don't think I captured Will's voice that well.

Well, losses are losses and to be honest, who but Cassandra Clare (goddess) could capture Will perfectly?

I still hope you guys like it (mostly because I am really shy when it comes to sharing a poem that is probably badly written) :)


My dear comrade,

My memory is still vivid

Of the day when I first laid my eyes on you.

Your twelve year old face was so incredibly pallid,

Your fingers, so terribly slender and fragile.

You brown hair was tainted with sleeks of ivory

And your even darker eyes were mixed with silver.

I must say,

When I first saw you

I scoffed internally at what you were.

Remember when I even said it out loud?

And yet you smiled.

I swore at you more; insulted you even

I compared you to one of the rotting corpses in the graveyard.

And yet you smiled.

You laid the news on me that you had only 2 years left

Until you left this world

And me.

~.~

My dear friend,

Such joyous days we have lived together

When I bragged about even the most idiotic thing

And you sighed with tease.

I should have seen the signs when they had arrived

The grim reaper was finally ready to rip.

Your hair turned into the color of the moon and

Your eyes silvered to no end.

Glistening, shining, emitting the aura of the beautiful midnight fog.

And yet you smiled.

Comforted me when I should have comforted you.

You told me you just had to refrain

A bit more

From drinking the poison that had contaminated your veins.

I looked everywhere for a cure,

Even willing to scorch my hand on fire

To find your remedy.

And yet you smiled.

You told me that it was time to let go

And enjoy the time we have left.

Becoming one

With two hearts that beat together.

~.~

My dear other half,

It is time to make my leave

And save the love of our lives that

Have been torn away from our grips.

My burden is too great for you to carry now.

This is my journey,

My journey that I must conquer on my own.

Believe me when I say this;

You have been the anchor of my existence since the day we met;

You have been my savior.

And now,

It is time for me to save yours.

I love her as much as you do;

Maybe even more.

And I know that she will not love me as much as she loves you,

But this is the least I can do,

For you have given me part of your soul

And I have given you part of mine.

Remember my dear brother,

I love you.

Please smile at me again.


So, did you guys like it?

If so, review!

If not, review and tell me why! Constructive criticism never hurt anyone, right?

Well then, that is it for now!

Mikki is out! Peace!