Lucanis

Theo Telshalla

Prologue

A small pup sniffed near the entrance to the cave that it was in. "Mama? What is that bright stuff?" It asked.
"That, my dear Lucanis, is sunlight." Lucanis' mother replied.
The baby Lucanis stared at this 'sunlight' for a bit. "Why is there green stuff under it?" She asked.
"That would be the grass." Her mother said softly.
"Who is that?" Lucanis asked urgently.
Lucanis' mother looked closely out the den. Her blurry eyes could barely make out a slim figure of a wolf coming towards them. "I don't know..." She whispered.
Lucanis cuddled closer to her mother. "Mommy? It's running now."
"Yes, I see that, sweetie." The mother said, very nervous now.
Lucanis closed her eyes then opened them, hoping that would make the wolf go away, but instead she saw it leap straight towards her mother.
"MOMMY!" Lucanis shouted, running towards her mother who had been knocked back by the skinny wolf.
The skinny wolf turned around and looked at the pup. Just as quickly, the wolf leaped out of the cave and ran so fast, it was like a cloud in the air.
Lucanis looked down at the bloody corpse of her mother.
Lucanis felt a presence behind her, but before she could turn around, she was being lifted up by the scruff of her neck.
"Now how did you stay so long with your by-lang mother in hiding, malcadh?"

Chapter 1

The gnaw wolf Lucanis was flung across the ground onto a rock as three other wolf pups snickered. "You look funny!" one of the pups shouted at her.

How do I look funny? I was only born too early, it's not like I have some deformity like the other gnaw wolves. Lucanis thought to herself. She never understood why she needed to be treated as a gnaw wolf just for being born at a different time then the other wolves. It just isn't right! She thought. She had said that to herself a lot. What's wrong with being born too early? But she knew the answer to that. "Pups born too early are a sign of bad luck." She had heard it a million times before, but she just thought whoever made that rule was cag mag.

The pup that had flung Lucanis walked up to her. This pup was burly, Lucanis wondered how it was so strong. "That's for being born and coming back from your tummfraw, gnaw wolf."

(Not end of Chapter)

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