I don't want to sound rude and mean, but come on! I have read hundreds of Hollywood Heights fan fictions, but the ones that seem to bother me are the Loren ones. I'm talking about the ones that make Loren sound like some lonely, sad, defenseless girl. I know for sure that Loren was not that. Loren was strong and independent. Those stories make her seem weak. Loren was not like that. I admit, in the show she had some moments but Loren didn't cut herself, she wasn't depressed, and she wasn't lifeless. Loren was fun, smart, beautiful, and had dreams. She wasn't in a mental hospital, she didn't self-harm, and she didn't depend on others that much like some fan fictions make her seem to be. I agree that some people try to put their own twist on the plot and use their imagination, but still, don't make Loren sound depressing. She was not like that at all.
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Kapi