Hey guy it's Phoenix here, this is a little fanfic idea that I was hoping you could give me suggestions about, I came up with the idea and tried affiliate it dark souls. Not sure how good it'll be and I NEED suggestions. I'm going to try to make my own plot while still using some weapons, creatures, and such from dark souls 2. Likewise I hope I can create original own areas and bosses. Again some reasons why suggestions are EXTREMELY helpful. Some dialogue directly taken from FromSoftware.
All his life Jackson had wanted to find something that made him special and different from other people. He always thought he would be extremely smart or find something unique, he was even naïve enough to hope for so called "super powers". Though as it turned out that the only thing that made him unique was his insanity.
Everywhere he went he saw disturbing images and heard voices inside his head. His parents were getting very worried and had taken him to almost every psychiatrist in town. No one could explain the sudden occurrences, except for one person. It was in an old building that they had never even heard of before. It was very dilapidated with a rotten wooden "therapy" sign hanging by only one side. The supposed "therapist" was an ancient looking lady in a red robe; she was probably older than the building. Jackson's parents had probably never been more skeptical about something but they were very desperate.
"Well you've met a terrible fate haven't you? Heheheh" her laugh and her voice made it sound like her lungs were filled with dust.
"Ooh my, Sisters! Have a look at this boy." two more women in identical clothing came in, along with someone who looked like somewhat of a maid.
"Heh heh heh… What seems to be the ruckus? Ooh, my! Your face, the face of the curse. It's an Undead. An Undead has come to play. Heh heh… the curse has returned, "said the first sister.
The second finished, "And along with it will come the chaos, Heh heh… You're finished. You'll go Hollow." They both turned back to the first woman
"Unless you somehow stop the chaos. At the rift, they always end up there the ones like you."
His mother was furious " my son is not going anywhere! And he's not going to bbe 'hollow' or whatever you called it. He only turned 18 last month!" as Jackson's mother stormed out of the building and got in her car the old woman just laughed.
In unison they said, "You must go, on a journey without rest. If your will is yet unbroken, then you may return here. Heh heh. Now, go along, go along… Heh heh"
That night Jackson thought about what they had said. If he really had a curse and that place, the rift, had a cure then he would have to find it before… well wasn't sure if he even wanted to know what a hollow was. He decided he would visit them again in the morning.
SO let me know what you guys think! I wanted him to go back to the fire keepers in this chapter, but I finally decided to put it in the next one instead. Hope you guys liked it! Remember this is only a rough draft and my 2nd time only writing a fanfic so it WILL NOT be perfect IN ANY WAY.