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(Misa's POV)
I walked up to Ryuzaki, who was in his normal slouching position.
Okay, if I want to get this done and get my way, I need to work hard on this... Okay...
"Hey Ryuzaki" I smiled and rested my hands on his armrest, bum out and biting my lip. My flirty pose.
"I see what you're doing Misa" he didn't look from his screen "and you are only like this when you want something. So, what is it?" Ryuzaki asked. I pouted.
"Fine... well, my friend Yuki is in a bad situation at home and wants to stay with me for a while since I'm her only friend. Well, I'd normally say yes without hesitation but I have to ask you so..." I waited.
"And why would I say yes?" He asked. I grabbed his hair and nearly lifted him off the chair to look into my raging eyes, and with my other hand I grabbed his crotch. Hard.
His eyes squinted shut and his mouth opened in pain, but he made no sound.
"Because if you don't, ill pop your balls" I said menacingly, squeezing tighter. He squeaked and nodded, tears forming in his eyes.
I let go of him and he curled up in his ball tightly.
"I was going to say yes, Misa! You did not have to handle my... personal places... like that to get what you want. I only wanted to know why you were so certain you were going to get your way" Ryuzaki rubbed his crotch to release some of the pain.
"Well I just did, didn't I. You know, Yuki and you are very similar for some reason... I just can't put my finger on it..." I said.
"Oh well, I'll just go call Yuki and tell her to bring some clothes" I skipped away
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(Ryuzaki POV)
My penis hurt. Badly. Ugh, damn Misa.
An hour ago she called Yuki to invite her here, but Misa and I also agreed that myself and Light could watch, just not in the bathrooms. I agreed due to privacy for the guest.
She had gone to pick up Yuki and should be back any-
There is the bell.
The entrance was unlocked by Light, who came and sat down.
"Ryuzaki, prepare" Light smiled evilly.
I wondered why until I saw the two girls walk in.
Yuki had natural short black hair with hair sticking out every which way and it hung in her eyes. She was wearing a white skinny long sleeved t-shirt that showed that she was about an a cup. She wore light blue long jeans and no shoes.
Misa and Yuki stared at me. I stared at Yuki.
"Oh now I remember why you two are alike! You look like a female version of Ryuzaki!" She poked Yuki's side.
