This story is based off of Maximum Ride by James Patterson, in case you didn't know. I don't own Max, Fang, Nudge, Iggy, Gazzy, Angel, or Dylan. There is a "bathroom scene" in the first chapter, but it's nothing bad. There is some language, but not much.
I wrote this two weeks ago and had some people read it, and they liked it, but when I read back over it, there were things about it that I didn't like so instead of erasing the parts I didn't like, I re-wrote it. But I didn't want this to go to waste, so I'm writing what I have and will put up the revised edition later. Tell me what you think of this story so that I can keep them in mind when writing the other version. Here's what it's about.
Max is dreaming about talking to Fang and Dylan before the first day of their freshman year when she finds out that she's dead. She wakes up suddenly and Fang explains to her that she has been in a coma. For two years. She has never seen her house while awake and she doesn't remember that she and Fang are dating. And then she discovers feelings for Dylan.
This is as far as I have gotten writing this story so please let me know what you think and keep an eye out for my other story!
-blackdiamondwings14