My name is… hmm what is my name?
Also, where am I and how did I get here?
Why is it so dark?
Why do I have some weird pit in my stomach? Oh, I remember I am scared. Of what though
WAIT, it all coming back know. Well, not a lot. I was on a ship but not just any ship a starship. But it was a bad ship with bad people. I don't remember the why I deemed them as bad but I did. Then there was the feeling of falling out of midair then pain, horrible pain.
It was so bad I wanted nothing more than to die but of course I did not. Then, I hear footsteps walking towards me. I tried to open my eye but could not and I really did not want to. I just wanted to lay there and die. Finally, one of the voices spoke and said something to the effect of "Leave her there, she no good to us now." For some odd reason the voice horrified me.
What felt like years but was really only a few hours I hear new set footsteps. It sounds like 3 pair of footsteps and they are walking slowly and softly toward me. I don't think they know I'm there yet. "Damn it Jim! What the hell are we hear?" One of the pair of footsteps says. "Calm down Bones." Apparently the one that called Jim says "I just want to see what the crash site looks like and how long it been here." "It appears that the crashed happen around 3 to 4 hours ago, Captain." The last pair of footsteps says. "Thank you Spock I can always count on you." Jim says in a slight sarcastic tone in his voice. I want to cry out for help but I cannot, I can't even move I just have to lay there and hope they find me.
Finally, I manage to make some type of choking sound (Not really what I was going for but hey it something.). I can hear them stop but that all I hear before ever thing goes silent.
~ hope you guy like this. this is my first fanfiction so please be nice. and I would really like review and tell me what I can do to improve this
also I hope Spock sounds like Spock he hard character to get right,