Yeh i re-did the first chapter to make it more appealing to readers because i thought that the other chapters were just to good to be introduced with what I had written. Hope you enjoy.
Littlefoot, Cera, Ducky, Petrie, Spike, Ruby and Chomper were all walking along a path on the outer side of one of the Great Valley walls, they were exploring and did so more often since they were older and bigger even though they all seem a bit small for dinosaurs of their age.
As they walked on Ducky stopped to look over the edge and saw a sleeping bladeback. She gulped just as she was about to keep walking but before she could move on the ground under her feet broke away. She let out a loud scream as she slid down the wall.
"DUCKY!!!" the others screamed all at once with Spike just making a noise which suggested that. The others quickly began to make their way down a path while Petrie flew down. Ducky landed with a thud and rubbed her head as she tried to get her bearings but then she froze as she heard a low growl, she looking down and realized that she had landed on the nose of the blade-back. She got up and slowly back away.
"I am very sorry, I am, I am" she said as the sharptooth stood up and got into a hunting position and set its blood red eyes on her. The bladeback stared at her for a while as she scanned his face with faer evident in her eyes, he had dark blue skin with and even darker shade a blue running down his back, he had two front teeth that stuck out of his mouth when it was closed on either side of his jaws which gave him a more menacing look and his eyes were like usual sharptooth eyes instead of Chomper's leaf-eater like eyes. The sharptooth snarled as he crouched lower, when she saw this she let out another scream and quickly ran, the scream had distracted the sharptooth for a few seconds but then he began the chase. He gained on ducky and began to snap at her tail with failed attempts then Petrie flew up to Ducky with a look of fear on his face as he spoke.
"You no outrun him ducky!" he shouted but he then ran into a branch since he wasn't looking where he was going. Ducky realized Petrie was right and thee as the sharptooth's jaws were just inches away she turned into a small gorge that she had luckily managed to see, the sharptooth stopped and turned around to regain pursuit of her. Ducky kept running till she got to a dead end, she turned around only to see the sharptooth slowly advancing towards her ready to attack but just then Chomper came from behind and pounced on the sharptooth knocking it to the ground. The sharptooth got up and snarled has he locked his eyes on Chomper, Sharpteeth and Bladebacks were natural enemies and for some reason Chomper had a feeling like he really needed to win this fight, not so much for his friends but for something else he couldn't think of. The bladeback made a hateful hiss that Chomper understood as 'Sharptooth' before he lugged at the purple sharptooth, they brawled in a flash of claws and jaws until the bladeback pinned Chomper to the ground by putting its foot on his head and snarled at him. Before it could finish the job with a bite to the throat a swift kick from ruby sent it flying with a painful howl, before it was could fully rise to its feet Littlefoot used his tail to knock it against a wall. The sharptooth fell to the ground and then got up looking rather dizzy and incapacitated.
"Chomper are you ok?" Ruby asked as she helped the Sharptooth to his feet. He gave her a quick nod before strutting towards the dizzy bladeback.
"If you ever come near my friends again…" Chomper began to threaten in sharptooth but then he was cut off when the bladeback spoke.
"Chomper? Long time no see" the bladeback stuttered still looking dizzy.
"You know me?" Chomper asked with a surprised look on his face, the bladeback stretched out his hand and the others thought he was going to slash Chomper.
"Don't tell me you forgot your friend Fang…ooof" the bladeback was cut off as Petrie dropped a rock on his head and he slumped to the ground.
"Hey guys, I think he knows me" Chomper said to the others as he looked at the unconscious bladeback. "Maybe we should take him back to the valley" Chomper suggested.
"Are you crazy, he a sharptooth, he'll eat us!" Cera shouted before getting a mean look from Chomper.
"Chomper's a sharptooth too and he's our friend, maybe we could give this one a chance" Littlefoot said trying to reason with Cera.
"There's a hole in the great wall, maybe we could keep him there for a while" Chomper said with a smile.
"Fine. But I'm not carrying him" Cera said then stormed away.
"Do not worry Chomper I'll help carry him" Littlefoot said then used his neck to put the bladeback on his back and began walking towards the great wall with the rest of his friends.
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