This is my first Mummy fanfic, so go easy on me

This is my first Mummy fanfic, so go easy on me.  I would like to know what you honestly think though.

Disclaimer:  I don't own any of the movie characters yadda yadda…  You get the picture.

Forever May Not Be Long Enough

            For as long as Evelyn could remember, her brother Jonathan was always the clown of the family.  Even as their parents would take them along on their archaeological excursions, Evelyn would be enthralled at the opportunity to be among the places of the past, Jonathan would be forever trying to scare the heck out of her.  She had to hand it to him that he could always make her see the humorous in the morbid.  He was the living among the dead, forever interjecting his well-spoken opinion or wise cracks on the issues at hand.

            One day, when she was only twelve years old, her father had taken them into the Egyptian Museum of Antiquities.  This had not been the first, nor was it the last time that Evelyn would find herself in the museum.  She had taken a book off of one of the shelves in the library, in which she was thoroughly absorbed, as her father and Jonathan went God-knows-where into the behind-the-scenes structure of the museum.  Though she was extremely bookish and would more-than-likely be a librarian or an author when she grew up, she soon tired of turning pages and took the book and shelved it as the curator had taught her.  Suddenly she paused and listened… A thumping sound came from behind the bookshelf behind her.  She spun around in time enough to dodge several books that slid off the shelf thudded at her feet.  She stared at the place from which they came, dumbfounded.  She quickly stooped down and gathered the books in her arms.  As she was doing this, two more books fell from their positions, one nearly hitting her head, the other skimming the back of her left leg.  She reeled back in shock.

            "Hey!  That hurt!"  She exclaimed.  A moan permeated through the bookshelf, causing Evelyn to drop the books that she had been carrying and flee wide-eyed out of the library.  She ran right smack into Jonathan.  He reached forward and snagged hold of her arm as she careened by.

            "Evy!  I say, what's the hurry?"  Jonathan was clearly struggling to keep a straight face while eyeing Evelyn's pallid face, but Evelyn paid it no mind because she was too busy trying to pry herself from his steady grasp.  Evelyn didn't want to answer him, but after looking into his face, which had changed to be creased with worry lines, she spoke up.

            "Just received a bit of a fright."  Evelyn finally said.  After taking a second or two to calm her nerves, she composed herself, straightened her shirt and the brown and tan, Egyptian print skirt that was a little too big for her as it was their mother's, and took a step away from her brother.  "It was nothing, really."  Evelyn walked over to a nearby torch stand and took the torch.

            "Nothing?  Books practically throwing themselves down off their shelves at you are nothing?"  Jonathan asked as he followed her into the ancient artifact section of the museum.  Evelyn turned on him, her face flushed red.

            "Oh."  She glared at her reflection in a display case, not wanting to even glance at her prankster brother.  The torch cast a flickering, eerie glow over her childish, heart-shaped face.  "Where's Dad?"  She abruptly changed the topic, not wanting to let Jonathan have the opportunity to laugh at her tendency to be a bit flighty.  But then again, he knew it all-to-well as he had scared her out of her wits on more than one occasion.

            "He's downstairs talking to the curator."  Jonathan explained, watching both his and Evelyn's reflections in the display case.  Then his eyes drifted past the reflections and settled on the gold bangles that were housed within the case.  He didn't see Evelyn light the torch next to him with her own and walk away towards the mummy display.

            "I say, Evy.  You are the easiest person to scare."

            "Mmm hmm." Came Evelyn's answer.  She was busy looking at the mummy of a pharaoh.  Suddenly Evelyn's torch, that she had set down next to where she was standing flickered and died.  Evelyn let out a scream as someone grabbed her from behind…