I have decided to remove chapters 2,3, and 4 then replace chapter 1 with this note.

What will be fixed :

1. The scene between Gogo and her father lacked intensity so I shall try to fix that.

2. Dreams/flashbacks were failures so that will be fixed to the best of my ability as well.

3. Narration was horrible.

4. More connection with story and characters.

5. Notes are unnecessary. (Should be more description in place)

6. Be more descriptive.

7. Improve grammar and punctuation.

8. Pacing plot.

9. Planning story.

10. Random quotation marks and unclear who is talking.

Things to be noted by readers:

1. The scene between the old gang members was not a one time thing guys. I do plan on adding them later on into the story but in a different chapter...they were never meant to be a one time thing and never will be.

2. Why was her father abusive?: That will also be explained in future chapters...I kinda figured I can't just fit like two whole chapters worth of writing into what I consider to be one chapter.

I have a short attention span and a chapter longer than what I usually write loses my attention (so I figured it would lose the attention of the fans that feel the same way)...which is why I previously wrote such short chapters but have tried making them a bit longer without losing attention.

I'm sorry if that way of writing is not the same for everyone else and I would appreciate it if more people commented on how they feel about that as well.

3. How did she deal with the pain?: That will also be explained in a future chapter.

4. Why would I write a chapter/story about rape if it makes me uncomfortable: I just felt really bad for Gogo because the way I write is getting into the character.

Trying to become one with the characters is another huge factor (along with a busy schedule) as to why chapters can take a long time to come out. I don't like to work with a story without understanding a character as much as I possibly can. I will even have multiple dreams of each new chapter (and different endings, etc.) to help me become one with the character and what I should put up. I don't think it's right to do OOC stuff unless it's appropriate in a way.

Did it become too much? No not really. But I was wary of putting up the chapter because I didn't want anyone to be touchy about the subject and be upset with the chapter.

Important Note:

Someone else gave me advice to cut off my chapters at the right moments to leave the reader wanting more, along with dragging it out.

But I guess I'll leave that to the you guys and if you really want them to be much longer.

To answer Nikco74: "Will you write a story of Honey Lemon (Big Hero 6) completely naked?"

Answer: I don't know actually. I have never written a fanfic like that so that will be a first time thing and I'll have to work with some bumps and harsh edges there. I could work with that in a different story but not this story. If that is a request (for a story) you will have to comment again requesting that though.

Finally:

Feel free to let me know what you think about fixing the chapters.

(For those reading my other fanfics I guess I'll work on those as well. I just won't remove the chapters for certain ones or any of them. I'll figure it out later.)