Jon: IM HERE WITH THE REMAKE for hopefully the last time so i hope you guys enjoy this and send in your oc's. Also people who had previously who had read the last version make sure to read this one. Also my instagram where i have a lot of my drawings is called jon_draws_1

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And the characters and background and all look like adventure time because thats the art style its in

episode 1: welcome to the new age

The new age. Its a time where anything can happen magic, monsters, advance technology, really its like a fairy tale. Now your probably wondering how this all happen, well it all started in 2320 Ad where there was a disease that broke out and everyone fought to stay alive as the disease made a unbearable ringing in your ears and it got to the point where people committed suicide, then war broke out and soon earth fell into its own hell, but then there was a alien race that came down and save earth and made it into this new age where we are able to visit new planets and do anything we can dream of but then there was a thing call the great walk where all parents had to go to war but then all of them died some how and most kids were raise by 18 year olds and the rich and the important people didn't have to go to the great walk so some people still had there parents. Now after all these year of joy now NA 3022 is turning into another dark age soon and everyone is soon going to need a savior. Im Jonathen Lara and this is my story.

Jonathen was a 13 year old human who had black shaggy hair( like Finn's hair in the show when Susan put his face under water then he took off his hat.)( his body is also like Finn's because Finn is a bit chubby so unlike everyone else in the story.) pale skin( when i mean pale i mean like Finn's skin) black eyes,( like adventure time style) he wore a red hoodie with the hood down and sleeves rolled up to his elbow a white undershirt that you couldn't see cause it was covered by the hoodie, white sweat pants, and red and white sneakers. He was a optimistic with Adhd and was happy a lot, he did have friends but a lot of times they were distracted or to busy talking to recognize him and alot of times thought he was annoying most of it did int get to him as he was int sad or angry at all most times. He hated getting angry and was the kind type but also hyperactive and it was hard for him to stay still most of the time. He was lonely sometimes and no one really listen to him so he was a drawer with amazing cartooning skills, and he also played games to so he didn't get bored. He was a easy target to bulling because his weirdness and craziness but he still found his life good and worth living no matter what, he also loved french fries a lot and was a picky eater some times.

Raygerard was a 13 year old human who had combed black hair that was kinda down so it covered his forehead, tannish almonish skin, black eyes, gray tinted glasses, a white undershirt with a blue denim jacket with the sleeves rolled up and the jacket opened, with blue jeans, and blue and white shoes. He was skinny but was in shape he like movies and was Jonathen's closes friend as the two lived together, Raygerard or Ray liked to make movies and books but was a bit crazy sometimes and could start up the most random conversations. He was very smart to and invented things to.

L.a. 10 am

La was now very futuristic like sci fi and is still the most famous place on the world where most celebrities live and a lot of the house are like sci fi houses to just like the one Ray and Jonathen lived in like a lot of there friends." Im just saying if a robotic elephant vs a robotic narwhal the narwhal would win." Jonathen said as the two ate one of the food courts at the mall as Jonathen ate his favorite food which was french fries with chicken nuggets." No a elephant would totally crush the narwhal." Raygerard said eating his food." Well who said the Narwhal cant fly and shoot lazers from its wings." Jonathen said back." But the elephant is so big it would crush it." Ray said putting his hands in the air." Wait why did we even come here to eat and why did you give me two large fries and.. wait what are you not telling me?" Jonathen asked.

"Alright you caught me, were going to a party." Ray said." WHAT! No you know i dont like to go to random people parties." Jonathen said." Well at least you know them.. but its Skyler." Ray said rubbing the back of his head." WHAT you mean the snobby rich meanest girl that always bullies me along with her boyfriend colt who BEATS ME UP!" Jonathen said." Well when you put it like that way it sounds bad." Ray said." Look im not going no matter what." Jonathen said crossing his arms.

" Look this party is important to me and for a lot of people to." Ray said." Whats so important about it, its just some glowing colorful falling stars are something that scientists have been studying for a long time and have been waiting for this moment for a long time." Jonathen said. Ray just started at him, Jonathen looked to the ground." Oh." Jonathen said to himself." Now you see why this is important to me, and the whole city is invited to see it happen, her family is like the richest in the city and they have to have some kind of good equipment to see it, so that means ill be able to update my movie ideas im working on." Ray said.

Jonathen thought about it for a moment before answering him." ALRIGHT well go but im blaming you if i get harassed in any way." Jonathen said getting up." Alright lets get ready the party starts around 7 pm and its in the finco park so we better hurry up and get ready." Ray said." But its in like 9 hours." Jonathen complained." Thats barley enough time to get a spot." Ray said walking ahead." Im going to regret saying yes to this aren't i." Jonathen said to himself.

Once the two were at the park there were already people setting things up." Wow is this event that important that they prepare this early in the morning?" Jonathen asked." Ya its really a special event that a lot of people have been waiting for." Ray said carrying the advance telescope." Hay look that's a perfect place to set up." Jonathen said pointing by a tree with lots of shade." Ya here take the blanket and set it up." Ray said handing him it.

Jonathen laid the blanket on the grass and laid down on it putting on his ear phones and putting his hood up and pulled out his O-phone and started to watch videos. His eye lids became heavy and he yawned. He sat and saw Ray setting up the telescope." Hay Ray which medicine did you see me take this morning?" Jonathen asked." Which ones the two morning ones or the blue one." Ray asked adjusting the telescope." Ya those." Jonathen said." The blue one." Ray said." Why is there a problem with tha..." Ray was cut short when he turned around to see Jonathen knocked out on the blanket." Oh yea that one makes him sleepy." Ray said to himself.

7:30PM

Jonathen slowly opened his eyes to see Ray and there two other friends Tim and Noah. Tim was a 13 year old human boy who was tall for his age he had skin like Rays, black slicked back hair, black eyes, a purple hoodie, blue jeans, and purple and white shoes. Tim was the more of the brave and cool guys who could do anything and not be afraid to do it, he also was good at sports like basketball and could always comfort someone when there sad. Noah was a 13 year old human boy who had pale skin, dark brown messy puled forward hair, black eyes, a white long sleeved t-shirt with the sleeves rolled up, blue jeans, and black and white shoes. He was also good at sports and basically one of the funniest people you could meet sort of like a class clown, and is also very supportive towards people and would help them do there best.

" So ya that movie was actually more scary and disturbing then i thought." Tim said." Ya but not as scary and disturbing as Jonathens internet history." Ray said. Jonathen quickly sat up and punched him on his shoulder." Hay im just saying." Ray said." Hay what time is it any ways?" Jonathen asked." 7:30 Ray said." AH MAN i hate missing the day, makes me feel sad." Jonathen said.

"Hay im really thirsty ima go get a drink at one of the tables set up." Jonathen said getting up." Alright try not to get yourself hurt." Ray said. Once Jonathen was out of sight Noah said." You know you just jinxed him." "Yaaaa we should probably go see if he's alright...Right after we talk about his internet history." Ray said.

Jonathen walked up to one of the refreshment tables and poured some lemonade. Jonathen then left to go back to his friends before he tripped and accidentally spilled it on someone. He looked up to see who it was and saw the one and only Skyler Night. She was a 13 year old human girl with blond hair in a pony tail, pale skin, black eyes with make up ( basically the girls in this story have the same eyes like boys but with eyelashes and if they have make up there is two eyelashes i hope you get what i mean.) a green tank top, blue skinny jeans, and light brown fur boots." AH LOOK WHAT YOU DID TO MY TANK TOP!" Skyler yelled angry at Jonathen." Look Skyler im sorry but just not tonight ok." Jonathen said." What do you mean not tonight COLT!" Skyler yelled. Uh oh was all Jonathen thought.

Colt came up he was a 13 year old boy who was pretty in shape and a bit muscular, he had pale skin, black eyes, spiked up blond hair, a blue long sleeved shirt with the sleeves rolled up, dark blue jeans, and blue and white shoes." Well if it is'int Jonathen, my fist were getting a bit lonely." Colt said before punching Jonathen in the face as people gathered in a circle" That was the worst line i ever heard." Jonathen said back regularly in between punches. Everyone was cheering on Colt, as Jonathen didn't fight back cause he felt he shouldn't cause he thought it was wrong. Colt punched Jonathen in the stomach making him fall to the ground in pain before kicking him repeatedly" Come on you gonna fight back PUSSY!" Colt said kicking him harder.

Skyler then snapped her fingers and Colt stopped people then started to cheer for Colt as people booed for Jonathen." Make sure not to do that again or ill have Colt do even worse." Skyler said as Jonathen slowly got up. Jonathen didn't say a word as he walked out of the park with his head held down as people booed him and even threw food at him. God what is wrong with these people Jonathen thought to himself. He could hear Ray, Tim and Noah come after him but he was already out of the park and onto the street alone cause everyone was at the park.

He walked until he made it onto the beach and fell to the ground and laid down on the sand as he watched the night sky as he was all alone on the beach." God apparently no one likes me besides my friends and even they have gotten mad at me once." Jonathen said to himself." God, can you please just give me a sign of what to do cause all my life i've just been misunderstood and yelled at." Jonathen said with his hands together. He then saw the colored stars started to fall from the sky. Now he understood why people have been waiting for this they were breath taking.

He stared at them until he saw a red one getting awfully close to him he then realized it was coming straight at him. He quickly rolled to the side trying not to scream in pain as he barley dodged it and what was standing where it fell was a red crystal with a flame inside it." Whoa." Was all he could say. He picked it up slowly as he got up. He studied it until it started to glow in his hand and soon disappeared." Why does everything i touch break." Jonathen said to himself. He then saw that his hand was smoking then it lit on fire, he started to panic as then both his arms lit on fire as he fell to the ground and soon all he could see was red and fire, he then heard a feminine voice say." this is your gift and only yours use it wisely." then everything turned black.

He woke up and it was still night time. As he got up there was some pain in his stomach and he held onto it as tight as he could." Argh i fell like a restroom at a gas station." Jonathen said as he slowly made his way back to the street. When he reached the street he threw up onto the sidewalk."Ok Jonathen you can do this just get yourself together. He then lost his balanced and leaned up into a near by wall. He then looked at his hand to see no burn marks or any sign of Colts attack earlier.

He then put his hand back down only to feel he was holding something he looked at it to see he was holding a flaming tomahawk or more of a flaming look. He instantly dropped it before having it reappear in his hands. Then it vanished." Well i can do that now." He said to himself. He then found himself back at the park now fully healed. He then heard someone yell." Look who showed up again." He heard Colt say." You ready for round 2." Colt said cracking his knuckles." Leave him alone Colt!" Ray yelled trying to get to the two but were blocked off by Colts friends and the crowd circling the two.

" Colt i don't want to fight rite now." Jonathen said." To bad because looks like the crowd is wanting more." Colt said as the crowd cheered for him. Colt then threw a punch at him but Jonathen grabbed it before it hit him. The crowd gasp as there was a moment of silence. Colt then threw another punch but Jonathen grabbed it with his other hand He then flipped Colt over onto the ground. Colt got back up to kick him but Jonathen grabbed his foot and smashed his knee with his other arm making Colt scream." Hay a little help!" Colt yelled at his friends.

His friends started to approach Jonathen. Then one threw a punch but Jonathen dodged it making the guy hit the other henchman in the face then Jonathen put his hand on the back of the two and slammed their heads together making them fall to the ground. Jonathen punched one in the face then uppercut him making him fly a bit. Jonathen roundhouse kicked one of them then turned around to perfectly dodge a punch before punching the guy himself. One grabbed Jonathen from behind but Jonathen pulled himself forward to make the guy fall on the ground with him. Finally Jonathen grabbed part of a tree branch and spun on it to kick the guy in the face.

Everyone stared at Jonathen then Skyler came running into the circle to knelled by Colt." Look what you did now!" Skyler yelled angry at Jonathen." Hay he attacked me first i was just protecting myself for once." Jonathen said." Just let him go he'll pay for this later." Colt said with a angry look at Jonathen. People then went back to there own business and enjoyed the rest of the party. Jonathen's three friends then ran up to him." Dude that was amazing how did you do it?" Ray asked."um... i guess i always had it in me." Jonathen said." Well we better get home now its already midnight." Ray said getting the blanket and telescope." Ya im heading home to night you guys." Tim said." Night." Noah said as the two walked off leaving Jonathen and Ray.

"Hay ill meet you at home im gonna walk instead." Jonathen said." You dont even like taking walks." Ray said." I know." Jonathen said from far way."Well looks like im driving alone." Ray said to himself.

With Jonathen he was jumping from one rooftop to another as he jumped to a window of a tall building and started to move along the sides testing out his new skills he had. He then started to climb up grabbing onto the ledges and pulling himself to the top. He then made it to the top of the building. He stood up and looked at the breath taking view that he saw. He turned around to see a glowing white Crystal but with nothing inside it. He walked to it on the vent and picked it up this time his hands caught fire but there was no pain, he felt empowered. He felt a rush in his body from it as flashes of him forming a flaming hook shoot to grapple and swing on stuff.

" That felt...AMAZING!" Jonathen said to himself. He looked to the edge of the building and had a idea." This is going to be AWESOME!" He said running then jumping off the building as he was free falling. Before he hit the ground he grappled onto the side of a building as he swung to safety on the ground but knocking over some tables at a out doors cafe. Good thing no one was there he was int sure how people would react to him like this.

The next day 10am

" Im pretty sure the movie was at least a six out of ten, not a 9 out of ten!" Ray said as him and Jonathen walked down the streets of La as the two decided to go to the science shop to find parts for Ray." Dude the actions scenes were amazing it was just to good to be true!" Jonathen said." Well its not true c.g.i remember most movies use that these days, and the movies score should not be based off the visuals but the story and i found it to not be very interesting." Ray said.

"Well i found the story interesting but i guess everyone just has different tastes." Jonathen said. As the two made there way to the shop Jonathen spotted another of those crystals with nothing inside them but just glowed in a nearby ally ( this is the future people so its futuristic to.) " Um ill be rite back go ahead ill catch up with you." Jonathen said." What ever you say." Ray said before entering the shop.

Jonathen made his way to the crystal, when he picked up the crystal it started to glow and soon the same thing happened last night with his arms catching on fire. Flashing images of him spewing out fire like a flamethrower from his hands flashed in his eyes." Cant wait to try that." Jonathen said as he was about to walk away but was interrupted by a shriek. Jonathen went towards the yell and found a man trying to steal a purse from a women." Classic robbery." He thought in his head.

Something inside Jonathen clicked and it was either from the powers or playing to much action games that made him use his hook shoot to pull the guy towards him holding out his fist so the guy would be punched as he was being pulled. Jonathen's fist slammed into the guys face as he was being pulled leaving him on the floor as Jonathen shot some fire at him making him tied to the ground.

Jonathen grabbed the purse and gave it to the women. But she quickly ran away because of what she saw Jonathen do." I don't even get a thanks." Jonathen said to himself as he headed to the shop before he heard a girl call him." Do you think you can get away that easily hurting my boyfriend." She said. Jonathen turned around to see the one and only Skyler." Skyler can we just put that aside please i really dont want to fight ok...Wait whats that around your neck?" He asked pointing at it.

" This oh its just the most valuable thing ever, something you can never have, Colt gave it to me last night, he found it." Skyler said. It was a ability Crystal made into a necklace." Um you wouldn't mind if i can like hold it would you?" He asked." Are you serious, like i would let you touch this, this thing is more expansive then you and your 3 friends combined so there is no way your gonna..HAY!" Skyler said as Jonathen gripped it before it started to glow and soon his hands caught fire as he had images of him doing a fire dash that only took him a few feet it also let him go through vents.

" Where did it go WHAT DID YOU DO TO IT!" She yelled at him." Ummmmmm HAY LOOK ITS A 80 PERCENT SALE ON ALL SHOES!" Jonathen yelled pointing behind her" OH WHERE!" She yelled excited, she turned around to see Jonathen gone." JONATHEN ILL GET YOU!" She yelled. Ray then came out of the shop with a box full of random gadgets." What happened with you and Jonathen?" Ray asked." He did something to my necklace it started glowing then it was gone!" She said in a angry tone." What did your necklace have on it?" Ray asked.

" It was one of those things that fell from the sky last night Colt gave it to me and Jonathen just made it disappear i swear im gonna kill him!" She said. Ray thought for a minute before he realized that old legend IT MIGHT ACTUALLY BE TRUE." OH SHOOT I GOTTA FIND HIM!" Ray said running off leaving Skyler behind. Ray made it home to see Jonathen drawing on the table." Jonathen we need to have a serious talk rite now!" Ray said putting his stuff on the table." Ive told you before i am not going to sign up on a dating website even if its a Catholic one the answer is still no!" Jonathen said crossing his arms.

" What? no, im here to talk to you about what happened with you and Skyler earlier." Ray said." Ya what about it?" Jonathen asked." Well do you just happen to have super powers." Ray said. Jonathen was silent for a second." FINE I DO but its no big deal." Jonathen said. Ray just starred at him with a face that said 'are you serious' " Im just kidding ITS A REALLY BIG DEAL." Jonathen said.

" Do you know what this means!" Ray said." DOES THIS MEAN IMA BE A SUPER HERO AND YOUR GONNA BE MY SIDEKICK AND WERE GONNA FIGHT CRIME TOGETHER!" Jonathen yelled excited with big eyes." Pretty much." Ray said." Ok so where's your weapon?" Jonathen asked." Well i have been making a glove that lets me make blue holograms of small objects that become real things but leaving them looking like a hologram like bows or baseballs bats so that can work." Ray said.

"Ok now all we need is where are we going to do our first heroic dead?" Jonathen said rubbing his chin. The news then came on as the lady reporter said." There has been a robbery at the galler bank the criminals are reported to be riding in a black truck as Cops are in the building helping the hostages we will switch you to what are helicopters are seeing on the highway." She said. The video feed showed the truck speeding on the highway as cops were after it.

"Hay we can help them with that." Jonathen said." Dont you think that's a bit dangerous?" Ray asked." Hay we are heros we never fear danger now come on and get in the car." Jonathen said tossing him the keys. Once the two were off and on the high way they were behind the cops chasing the criminals to." Alright Jonathen i need you to jump out the car and basically play leap frog on cars jumping from one car to another, when you get to the truck find a way to make the truck stop got it!" Ray said. Jonathen just stared at him." You better hope i dont die." Jonathen said as he started to stand up on there roofless car ( or the ones you can put up the hood up and down.)

Ray drove up to a nearby cop car as Jonathen jumped on it trying to steady himself out. Then guns started to shoot at him as there were 4 thugs in the bed of the truck. Jonathen took a few bullets up before realizing he was int really getting hurt and that he was healing him self." Alright that is way to OP!" He said to himself as he jumped to the next cop car dodging the bullets then jumped onto the edge of the bed before it opened leaving him dangling from the edge pulling his feet up trying not to let them hit the road.

One of the guys came up to the edge as they pointed one of there guns at him. Jonathen grabbed his leg trying to pull himself up but instead threw the guy out as he hit the front of the cop car then falling into the road." Ohhhhhh thats gonna hurt in the morning!" Jonathen said to himself before he lifted himself into the bed as one guy started to shoot but Jonathen shot fire at him making him pat the fire out of his clothes but tripping over the edge falling into the road. The next guy try to hit Jonathen with the butt of the gun but Jonathen grabbed it forcing it back at him making it hit him in the face before Jonathen tripped him over making him slide off the truck to.

The next guy grabbed Jonathen from behind as Jonathen tried to break free he heard Ray yell "Dunk!" Jonathen did so as Ray made a blue base ball come flying to the guy's face as he grabbed his face in pain before he tripped off himself. Jonathen looked towards Ray which was the car rite beside the truck as Ray was wearing a white futuristic glove with a blue core on it. Ray gave him a thumbs up as Jonathen did the same thing to him.

Jonathen climbed up on top of the truck but it started to go on the turn so he slid and tried to grab the edge but fell off landing on the hood of Ray and his car but he was able to grab the mirror on the outside of there car." Jonathen you might need to move i cant see the road that good!" Ray yelled but the truck then rammed into them so Jonathen was pushed off the hood as he fell off the highway but quickly shot a hookshot to the truck as he pulled himself up to the truck as he landed on the top as the turn stopped and was back on the regular part of the highway.

Jonathen leaned over the top as his face was rite by the driver seat window. He taped the glass as the criminal looked confused but Jonathen pointed at the thing to roll down the window. The criminal rolled down the window and Jonathen said." Hay you can call me like red or flames or Hoodie just dont call me hot head, get it cause i dont get angry and all, or do you get the reference im making rite now." Jonathen said with a smile." So how about we play a game." Jonathen said." How about we play get the hell out of my window!" The criminal said shooting Jonathen in the face which did nothing and didn't leave any blood." Well thats not a fun game." Jonathen said.

The criminal shoot again but Jonathen dodged it." Ok lets play let me take the wheel." Jonathen said grabbing the wheel still upside down outside the window as he steered into a nearby rail quickly getting out the window but as they crashed the airbags went off and Jonathen was sent flying onto the road. Ray and the police then pulled up as Ray helped Jonathen up and the cops were pulling the the guys out of the truck and also found the money in the back seat." HAY!" They heard a cop yell at them as he approached Ray and Jonathen.

"Who are you two?" The cop asked." Umm well im Jonathen and this is Ray." Jonathen said as Ray waved." Well you two should know that those criminals are one of the most dangerous drug dealers around L.A and they stole the money to pay of the shipment and we are one step closer to figure out where there getting there drugs from, i like to thank you two for helping us out so if you two need anything just give us a call." He said shaking Jonathen's hand." Your welcome officer, now me and my friend here are gonna get some food." Jonathen said as the two of them got in there car.

"Well i would say today was very active." Jonathen said as the two of them drove off." Ya it was kinda fun." Ray said." Oh ya i also learned i dont take fall damage like if i jump off a building ill land on my feet or if like a trip and fall off and land on my back or something i wont get hurt that much." Jonathen said." When did you learn that?" Ray asked." Last night i was experimenting on my parkor skills." Jonathen said." Well im tired so lets just get some lunch now." Ray said." Agreed." Jonathen said leaning back in his seat.

Unknown to the two a flying drone was recording the whole fight as it flew back to one of the largest buildings in La, the Rell tower. It flew into one of the windows which was a office and onto a table with a name card saying." Victor fen." A man who was a 30 year old human male had pale skin, black eyes, dark brown combed up hair, and a black suit and red tie with black shoes. The man opened the bottom of the flying drone taking out some sort of usb, as he plugged it into his projector as it shot into the screen as it showed everything that went down.

Once it ended a women that looked like one of his secretaries spoke saying." Do you think the'll be a problem?" She asked." No, Rell should handle them we are the worlds biggest protection company any ways." He said." But for now we will see how everything plays out." He said opening his draw as he pulled out some files and handed it to the woman." Take this to the lab, the'll know what to do with it." He said." Yes sir." She said walking out the room and shutting the door.

Back with Ray and Jonathen the two were enjoying there lunch." You ever get the feeling that somethings bad gonna happen to you one day and you wont see it coming?" Jonathen asked." No." Ray said taking another bite of his food." Ok." Jonathen said eating a french frie.

So there is chapter 1 hope you guys enjoyed ill try to update as much as i can so i hope you guys look forward to chapter 2.