Contains spoilers!
DISCLAIMER: I typed down pretty much what is actually said in the game during the party, for the most part, and it will be like that in the first 3 chapters.
This is my first fanfic that I have ever made and personally I don't think I would like using (Y/N) and all that stuff in my stories...So besides what MC will look like (as she is the default 4 profile picture in the game), everything about MC will be my own OC character. That means birthday, real full name, age, background, etc. will all be what I want it to be. That being said, "Nixie" is tanned skin, she has fairly short brown hair and honey brown/gold eyes. Her height is fairly short, 150 cm or 4'11". MC's height is based off this art by hanatsu04 on tumblr: post/150747155933/hanatsu04-i-like-mc-4-so-heres-some-yoosung-x
By the way, the art used for the cover is not mine so, ART Credit to cherryicmad on tumblr: post/152162040487/you-cant-climb-up-the-ranks-in-lolol-if-youre
Anyways, I hope you enjoy my fanfiction and if you don't, oh well. I already plan on basically writing a book, having this be like maybe 20 or so chapters long. I would appreciate and welcome any feedback you have, whether it's positive or negative! Thank you. ^/w/^
~Updates~
Please check here every so often, as I might have updates on old or new chapters or little things like work progress!
9/13/16 (1): The more I try to write the next chapters, the more I'm not liking 2nd person point of view...I'll see how I feel when I get chapter 2 up, there is a possibility I might just change it to 3rd person, as that's the point of view I use for my stories (and roleplays) that I'm most comfortable with. If I do end up changing it to 3rd person, then it'll be "Yoosung X OC" instead of "MC/You", because at that point the girl will be based on my own character.
9/13/16 (2): So I decided to keep the story in 2nd person, but changed the tense to past instead of having it in present. I found that to be the most easiest for me. I had also revamped Chapter 1, fixing the tenses and adding more details into the conversations.
9/15/16: Wow. It's a little hard to get V, Jumin, and Jaehee's personalities down... ^-^;; Like I don't really know much about V yet from playing and finishing only Yoosung's route, so I can't get a good feel for creating his character. I feel like Jumin and Jaehee are on pretty much the same wavelength when it comes to speech patterns, as I think they tend to be professional for the most part, but they're still hard to get remotely right for me at least...Zen, Seven, and Yoosung on the other hand; I believe I have them down. They all have the characteristics I usually have for my characters in roleplays, so it's a bit easier to do them. But then again, I don't really know what all the characters are like since I've only done Yoosung's route...
9/16/16:I'm currently having writer's block due to slight character difficulties mentioned before. I reread chapter one and added the tiniest of detail to the part where "you" are getting ready for the party, being that "you" have bangs. As in all the MC fanarts and what is show in the game, she has bangs.
9/22/16: Okay so finally a new chapter is out! I will apologize in advance, as I said "hinted" Jumin is my weakest character in this story, so sorry if his personality is off compared to how he is in the game. Jaehee is also going to be a weak character from her in game appearance. But luckily, they really won't be in the story much after the party is over. Neither will Zen or Seven, as this is a fanfic about Yoosung and MC.
9/28/16 (1): Ugh...Sorry guys, I would of had the new chapter out by now, but I accidentally closed the tab to what I was working on and lost everything...I'm so mad at myself, I was so close to finishing...Hopefully I can remember what I had typed (that wasn't in the game that I copied) and get the new chapter out sometime later today.
9/28/16 (2): Alright! I got the new chapter up! I decided to make it shorter than originally planned because of loosing the content I was working on before. So the next chapter will all be 100% original content! Which I might actually have up tonight, since I have time to write today \^o^/
10/3/16: Haha, just as I said I had time to write, I got writers block XD But I powered through after much needed rest and figured out where I wanted to go with chapter 4!
10/4/16: Okay! I replaced chapter 4, changing and adding to the end of the chapter. Also, I was just wondering but..Do you guys who are following the story get notifications or something that indicate that I posted a new chapter? And if so, what about if I update an existing chapter, do you get notified?
10/12/16: Wow. Coming up with speeches is not my forte...I'm trying to write up a closing/thank you speech from V at the end of the part and I got nothing...It's honestly not necessary to have one actually written out, but I feel like it would just add to the story. Other than that, the chapter is progressing smoothly, but slowly due to work and school (and maybe a little procrastination ^-^;;;).
11/02/16: Alright! So ConCrunch is done and Con is over! But I have a midterm I need to be studying for *insert crying Yoosung emoji* So I'm still not able to really work and focus on the next chapter until after Tuesday when my test is over. Although, for a little break I did go back and change a few things once again.
1) So I decided to change MC's appearance. Yoosung's MC is the default 4 profile picture. Tanned skin, short brown hair, honey brown/gold eyes. She is super short, 150 cm or 4'11". MC's height is based off this art by hanatsu04 on tumblr: post/150747155933/hanatsu04-i-like-mc-4-so-heres-some-yoosung-x
2) In doing so, the cover art for this fanfic changed. ART Credit now goes to cherryicmad on tumblr: post/152162040487/you-cant-climb-up-the-ranks-in-lolol-if-youre
3) Here is a list of chapters and paragraphs/lines that have been changed: Ch. 1 par. 3; Ch. 2 par. 2, 4, 6 & 30; Ch. 3 par. 6 & 7; Ch. 4 par. 1, 24, 31 & 44
4) Also, I decided to make this fanfic (and all other MM fanfics) with my own "story" and such for MC. So besides what she looks like, everything about MC will be my own OC character. That means birthday, real full name, age, etc. will all be what I want it to be.
2/10/17: Oh gosh! It's been 3 months since I've logged on! I apologize to all of you who enjoy my fanfiction and are waiting for more! School and work have been piling on and I haven't been finding any time to just type n Although it does look like I had most of chapter 5 done previously, so I don't think it'll take too long to finish and get it posted. Everyone please just be a little more patient with me!
