-~ Ok, so I kind of wrote this song and I would like some reviews on it so I know if anyone likes it. Im not so sure of it myself but please read it and review it!

Can't cha see me standin' there?
I'm just like any other girl,
Except you can't see the reason behind my tears.

I'm sick it ain't goin' right, I might not make it through the night,
But I just wanted to tell you that I love you.
And theres nothin' in this whole damned world that could ever change my mind.

Your my everything,
My heart belongs to you.
Why can't he see?
That we were meant to be.


From the moment our eyes first met,
We couldn't stop what happened next.

And I just wanted to tell you that I love you,
And your my everything.

Theres nothin' in this whole damned world that could ever change my mind.

It was an instant attraction,
and there were complicated reactions,

But I don't mind.

But I just wanted to tell you that I love you,

And your my everything.

- ~ Ok so what do you think? Did I just make a fool out of myself? I think the song is lame myself but I wanted to see what other people thought. This is the first time I've ever posted something on here so If you like this I might try to post some