Chapter 1 (Rewrite)
Warframe: Frost
Skin: Regular
Color schemes: Black and Red
Energy: Red (Red colored ice attacks)
Helmet: Zastuga
Sword: Krohkur
Rifle: Tiberon
Pistol: Magnus
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50 days later, in the Second Dream
In the very distant future, yet evil, and corruptible. The solar system stores of planets full of Corpus and the Grineer, conquering and colonizing each planet for power. Lotus, the daughter of Hunhow and friend of Tenno, against her father's wish to purge all Tennos. She formed a group of Ten zeroes to hide from the Orokin and fight, break the cycle of corruption, and bring order to the solar system. The Warframe, Frost, the protector, the most skilled and talented honorable warrior, and hunter to each Corpus and Grineer. Stinting as a savior to each planet the Tenno travels, Frost is determined to save the solar system and restore humanity by joining the syndicate faction called: New Loka. The cold Warframe will never show any signs of defeat, as he will stop major threats soon. Flying towards the moon, Frost has many knowledges of fighting, observation, upgrades and weaponry to fight whatever stands in his way. His goal is landing on the broken moon of Lua. In the middle of his quest to rescue the reservoir before the Shadow Stalker gets there first, or else his demise will lay on the Shadow's hands. It will not happen to the Warframe.
Arrived at the moon but similar to the Void, Frost has arrived to rescue the reservoir, but it will take less time to reach the location in a fast pace.
"We've saved the moon from a void collapse, but Hunhowcan now attack the reservoir directly. He must not reach the sacred place." Lotus said when Tenno is on his way to the place they kept the reservoir until Hunhow can be heard in his communicator.
"Shadow, bleed the reservoir until it is desert dry." Hunhow ordered his hunter. Frost is moving the gates as quickly as possible to get the reservoir fist. In his communicator, Hunhow spoke, "Lotus, join with me. Destroy your shame. Become the one I loved, become Natahonce more." Lotus ignored her father's words. Passing through the gate, Frost can hear the female's quiet voice in his head.
This will stop the voices from taking hold. You will have to dream, my angel...
Ignored the voice from his head, Frost has to focus his objective and not let anything to distract him while doing his mission. In the exact same palace like the void, the cold Warframe has not seen any enemies in his way. Getting through the dark palace with dim lights while sprinting, another quiet voice can be heard again.
...So shame on you! You Orokin, so perfect on the outside but you're rotted through and through!
The female voice sounded angry but ignored it. Going to the old and ancient stairs by bullet jumping, The Warframe heard a different voice in his head again...
Seven hands raised! For your apostasy, the judgement is...death!
Margulis, why?
Freerunning the palace, Frost has reach another section of the golden and old palace. Parkouring through boulders and wall running, the Warframe is somewhat close to his objective. Another voice can be heard again...
...It's about the other rejects we consigned to Lua a few years ago. They're calling it...Transference.
Why is he hearing those voices? Why? None of those matters, he must hurry to get to the reservoir. Passing through the door to the other dark palace where he can see the view of the dark cold space. Yet, another voice began to be heard.
...I know we are desperate, Executor, but these aren't Dax soldiers. These are golems possessed by devil minds.
Hoping those mysterious voices can never be heard again. Frost is close to reach his objective when he reaches the door. In a quick sprint, the door opens and in front of him. It is a place where a small water fall with a small pond. The whole area is filled with radiance, vivid sightings, and the whole palace is peerless. The brute Warframe slowly walking towards down the stairs while gazing the beautiful environment. Heading down the stairs and reached his objective.
In the waterfall, there's over seven pods spreading to let one particular pod to come through. A pod emerges out of water slowly towards the Warframe. The golden shaped pod slowly opens up to reveal what's inside the pod.
In front of Frost, it's a person wearing a black suit covered to head to toe and wearing a mask.
The pod carries out a chair and slowly hovering down. The person in black then dump in front of Frost and receiving flickering and screeching. Breaking up, the Warframe goes limb and blacked out.
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Dream.
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Not of what you are.
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But of what you want to be.
The person in the black suit woke up suddenly and receiving its vision. Crawling in a slow pace, the person in black is getting closer to the Warframe. Next to Frost, the person touches the Warframe's back to giving it its energy. Reactivated, Frost slowly grabbed the person and carried it in a bridal style. In front of him, it's the Shadow Stalker, ready to strike with his deadly War sword. The person in black showed little fear of defense. Shadow then hesitated to strike down his enemy.
"You hesitate, Shadow. But remember your despair." Hunhow can be heard, "This is your only chance to make it end."
The Shadow Stalker slowly looks at his hand and slowly rotating it. The person in black started to do the same thing of what Shadow did.
"Your hatred is too weak, Shadow. Mine is strong. My fragments will finish this." The Shadow Stalker teleported away in front of Frost and the person in black. Hunhow will send something to end them.
"Tenno. Operator. You're awake now. But you're more vulnerable than ever. Get back to your ship, now." Lotus said. Frost carries the person in his arms and trying his best to go to his ship as quickly as possible. "You need to focus your mind to unleash your true power." Lotus noted.
Sprinting as fast he can to leave this place, the sentients shows up in front of them and the person in black suddenly gets scared and raises his hand to unleash his deadly power. The laser incinerated the sentient with ease. The Warframe has to hurry to get to extraction before more sentients come. Sprinting faster and stable for the person he carries, more than five powerful sentiments are coming. The person realize that he could do the same thing of what he did to the sentient earlier, he raises his arm and fired his laser shooting out of his hand and killed a sentient easily. Getting used to its power, he fired another beam and instantly burned two sentients. Only two left, the person in black steadied his accuracy and fired another powerful red beam to kill the last sentient. With that over, the Warframe needs to keep going before more of these coming or else it will the end of them. Passed through the exit, they're in space where they can see the view of Earth. Getting close to the platform, the black and red Liset ship has arrived in front of them to extract them and leaving Lua immediately.
Mission success.
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Far away from Lua and aboard in the Orbiter of the Navigation and Comms segment, Frost is still carrying the Operator.
"I don't know how much time you have. Descend into the heart of your Orbiter, there you will find the Somatic Link." The Lotus ordered.
Obeyed the mother of all Tenno, the Warframe walked towards the ramp and opens coolly so he can enter the bottom part of the ship. Walking down the ramp, he walked passed by his Mods, Foundry, and the Incubator. The egg is still on the platform to let itself warm for him to wait until the Kubrow comes out of its egg. Passed by his Arsenal segment of where he kept his crafted weapons and tools.
Walking down the bottom deck of the ship, there, he found the room that he had never entered and it must be the Somatic Link room. Walking towards it with each normal step, the door automatically opened and revealed something he has never seen before.
The room is large, the white cords are connected which it must be the Somatic Link and around the cords and the device is covered in light blue mist.
His last objective is to put the Operator in the link device and his quest will be done for good.
Heading towards the link and getting closer.
(SHING!)
The Warframe drops the person in black and completely shuts down when he was stabbed by none other... than the Shadow himself.
"Shadow!... How?!" The Lotus is shocked through the communicator.
With the War sword piercing in the dead Warframe and lifting it while examine it carefully, "No self. No sense. No death. Just a metal puppet, dangling on Tenno's strings." Shadow lifted his sword with one hand. "Only the Tenno's death will end your despair." The Shadow tosses the Warframe out of his sight out of his large sword. The broken Warframe crashed at the wall. The Shadow slowly walking towards the frightening person, "All your dread long life you've waited for this moment..." The Shadow kneeled in front the frightening Operator, "...But you're asking yourself... Was I one of these wretched things?" Revealed to the frightening person that he's the real Tenno and the Warframe to be a metal puppet. The Shadow choked Tenno with his hand and lifting Tenno up, "...You know the answer. You still hate them. …You still hate... yourself."
The Shadow Stalker threw Tenno where the Warframe is laying down. Right next to Frost, Tenno is not sure if he can defeat the Shadow Stalker. Pointing his large powerful sword at the Tenno, Hunhow will say his last words before leaving.
"I'm afraid your life ends here, Tenno. Do it, Shadow. Destroy this ship." Hunhow ordered.
Shadow obeys Hunhow's command and unleashes his energy wave attack everywhere in this ship with his great sword. The room started to cause mini explosions, fire, smoke, and alarms. The whole room became dark red as blood. The enemy and the hunter of all Tennos has successfully killed another Tenno.
"Two Tennosdown. More to go." (Referring Loki in the first cutscene) "Farewell." The Shadow teleported out of the room and the ship. The room is filling with fire and smoke, Tenno is now terrified of meeting his demise. There is nothing he can do about it.
"This can't be happening! Operator, your ship! You're going to -DIE-!" Ordis instantly cut off through Tenno's communication. The Liset ship's hyper drive went off and activated it due of the malfunction. Tenno wanted this to be over and cuddled with his Warframe. He thought everything will be all right and now he accepted his fate. Outside of space, the ship went off in light speed and somehow exited out of the solar system.
Everything went white for Tenno.
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Somewhere in the unknown location...
Lotus saw and heard everything what happen, saddened of another Tenno murdered by the hands of Shadow. She will ensure that Hunhow will pay for his crimes. Ordis contacted Lotus, "Lotus. Operator. I cannot able to detect his heartbeat. I can'tbelieve I'm saying this, I think he's-"
"I know, Ordis. We cannot allow this to keep going. His death will be a martyr. Contact another. He will take his place to be destined to save this system." Referring another Tenno and concealed her emotions for the loss of the previous Tenno.
"As you wish, Lotus." Ordis obeyed and cut off.
The mother of all Tennos cannot let her children die by her heartless sentient father. She must wait for this nightmare to end. She will not let another Tenno die and hope nothing bad happen to her children, herself, and the rest of the Origin System.
The Lotus then wait until another Tenno wakes up.
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Somewhere... Far beyond the reach of the Origin System.
An undiscovered planet found...
...Remnant
Faction: White Fang, Grimm, Huntsman and Huntress, Atlesian military
Level: Unknown
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The shattered moon shines the planet of Remnant to share some light in this dark night as most of the people are resting. The continent, Sanus. There, a large island called Patch, where it contains many forests that is green and grey. In addition, there's a school called Signal Academy: A school that teaches many students to design their primary weapons and a set of skills to hone. The overall island is a nice place to raise a family.
There is a particular house that is located in the forest, and that house is the Xiao Long-Rose Family. A two-story cabin that features wooden walls and a very comfortable indoors.
At night inside the house, a room on the second floor, there is two young little girls sleeping on their beds while one is not having a good night sleep. The only kid that is not sleeping well tonight is Yang Xiao Long.
The little blonde girl with pigtails kept moving around while trying to get comfortable to go to sleep. She suddenly stopped for giving up going to sleep. After what happen to her dad upon hearing the news about her stepmother was gone missing during her mission, her father has gone to an emotional breakdown of losing another love. Her little half-sister is torn up for hearing that tragic news, right now Yang is seeing her little sister sleeping peacefully.
Little Yang sat up and looked at her window to her right, a shattered moon shares its light to the room. Little Yang began to feel thirsty, maybe that will help her go to sleep. Yang went out of her bed so she can go at the kitchen to drink some water.
Tiptoeing the stairs silently and slowly, her foot touched on the wooden floor when it made a creaking sound. Yang knows that she has to be quiet for not waking up the puppy called Zwei. She tiptoeing silently towards the kitchen with each quiet step.
In the kitchen, she turns on the light switch and walk towards the sink. Yang grabbed the glass cup out of the sink and turn on the sink to let the water drop. She put the cup towards the water while the water is filling the cup. After that, she turned off the sink and drank the water quite fast. The little girl then put the cup at the sink and turned off the light switch as she's returning to her room.
Entering her room, little Yang went to her bed and pulled her blanket towards her. Pulling out something under her pillow, it's a photo she got earlier before she and Ruby went to bed. The photo she is staring at is some sort of location that can potentially lead to her real mother. Determined to find her real mother, Yang's plan is to have her dad leave the house so Yang can take Ruby to go out an adventure to find her real mom. Tomorrow will be the day for her to meet her mom in person. When she looked at her little sister, Yang smiled and looked at the shattered moon. "I can't wait to see you... mom." Yang put the photo under her pillow and yawned as she lay down on her bed, and then she closed her eyes with a small smile on her face.
The view of the shattered moon shows a shooting star.
But it's not.
The burning meteor entering the atmosphere of Remnant while going down fast. Heading towards Patch, the Orbiter is getting closer towards the island in a matter of seconds. Its armor is covered in heat but its durability is very strong. Coming in hot, the aircraft is getting closer to a deeper and darker forest. Finally crashing through trees, the Grimm creatures run out of the way while others met their fate by being ran over by a new visitor while birds flew away from the trees. The Orbiter is getting slower when it's pressing the ground hard and in that moment.
It finally stopped.
Inside the Somatic Link, the Tenno got push away from his Warframe while the Orbiter stopped with some force. Gets clobbered by a wall, the Tenno is still knockout since the ship entered a wormhole beneath the Origin System. The room is still covered in dark red that resembles dark blood while the electricity is popping.
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Hours later...
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(Flickering)
Tenno's eyes behind his hooded mask has unclear vison.
(Flickering)
His eyes trying to get a better vision by his tunnel vision eyes.
(Flickering)
His vision can almost a spark of electricity and light.
(Flickering)
Tenno's eyes became clearer now. The room is filled with dark red lighting but he can see light flickering with short electricity. Wait a minute, Tenno realize, something is not right. He sat up quickly, slowly rotating his hands and flinched from his right sore shoulder. Why is he still alive? Did he survive? He should be dead. Something isn't right.
The destroyed room he's in is now is completely destroyed, excluding the Somatic Link. Since he survived somehow, what about his Warframe? Looking around to see his Frost Warframe. He saw his Warframe laying down flat with no major damage. He needs to be linked with his Warframe to find out why. The link is surprisingly not damage and it's his opportunity to use it.
The Operator crawled towards the link device to activate it. His ship needs to start the power. He sees the blue energy sphere at top of the link to refill the energy. Knowing what to do, he once tried using his void energy beam to incinerate the Sentients.
The Operator raised his slowly while shaking to get a better aim and accuracy. Exactly aiming the blue sphere, he fired his raw and powerful energy beam to feed and share his energy to power up the link. The device needed more power so the Tenno offering some more. Seconds of restoring power, the link has finally become functional.
The room became light blue as it replaced the dark red lighting. The cords became white as snow as it gave the ship enough power to function the Orbiter properly. But the ship is still heavily damaged on some parts. The floor is even more damaged of the ship capabilities.
The Somatic Link device has opened for the Operator to enter.
The Operator crawled again to get inside the device to link with his Warframe. Finally reached the Somatic Link, he climbed on the link while having trouble to get in. Using every effort to climb, he finally entered the Link. With the legs rested and him sitting very comfortably. The device closes the shaft and the Operator focuses the device to be linked with his Warframe. In the state of transference,
He has now linked with his Frost Warframe.
The optics glowed in bright red for being awakened from being unconscious and linked by the Operator. Fully operational, the Frost Warframe stood up once again and ready to begin. Through his communications, Frost is trying to contact Ordis and what's really odd is that he's not answering back. Doing it again, there was nothing. Feeling a bit worried, he tried contacting Lotus and she didn't respond. In his optics, it says 'out of range'. Something is odd.
Needed to check outside, he exited out of the transference room to check if any part of his ship is damaged and to see what's outside. Looked both ways of his Orbiter, the infected infirmary room and his personal room and it seems none of them is damaged on the outside but he will check them later if he has the time. Walking normal to go upper deck, the machines are seemed to be broken: The Foundry, Mods, Arsenal, and the Incubator. Speaking of the incubator, the Kubrow egg is been misplaced on the surface of the incubator. Worried, the cold Warframe placed the egg in the right position and activating the incubator machine but somehow it starting to process the machine in a slow rate. After it finally turned on, the machine is starting to make the egg warmer for the right temperature to hatch. Relieved that it worked because he needed to have a Kubrow on his side. Looks like the other machines besides the Incubator is damaged but it can be repaired and he will do it later. Right now, he needs to check the navigation segment.
Walking in a normal pace, the ramp lowered and cooled when it fully opened. Walking up the ramp to check, the scanner is not turned on somehow and he activate to check if any radio transmissions is called so he can contact them for help. While the scanner is turned on, there was nothing. Trying to make sure is not broken; he changed the frequency to get a better signal. After many tries to change the frequency, there was not a single radio transmission.
Something is quite off.
Looking to his right side, the window of his orbiter is cracked, and outside its foggy. The Warframe gets a closer look, seeing a dim fog where he sees trees from his left side. Needed answers of what this planet is, he decided to check outside. Opened the window wide, he exited out the Orbiter. Walking towards the tip of the ship, he jumped and landed on the ground with both feet smashing the leaves and dirt.
For the first time stepping his foot in this undiscovered planet, the point of view through his optics is seeing fog and big trees. Wondering if this planet is inhabitable or nothing, Tenno needed to know and to find some clue of what planet he's on. But one thing he needed to check is his orbiter, Frost walked normally to check the side and behind. From the side of his ship is nothing, when he is almost going to the back of his aircraft.
The back of his orbiter is worse than he thought it would be. The wings are on fire and beyond heavily damaged, he fired his ice blast from his palm to stop the fire from spreading. After stopping the fires, he's not sure if he could fix it but at some point, he will try. Frost looked down while being ashamed and losing a bit of hope of returning to his system. It's his entire fault for having guard down from the Shadow and blamed for being stranded by his enemy. Blaming himself is not going to help, he's a Tenno, and Tennos don't give up. Determined, he will return and it doesn't matter how long it will take, even if he's having trouble.
Doing nothing while standing and looking at the damaged ship, he decided to do something. Tenno needed to check and wanted to know this planet better, he placed a waypoint to his ship of coming back soon. Looked in the other direction of a dim fog, the Warframe will ensure he will never let his guard down again and being cautious in case something or someone causing harm to him. Without wasting his time, he walks peacefully through the fog and begin to start his journey.
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Time passed by...
Somewhere within the island of Patch where its grey and dim fog, the tires of the wagon is making creaking noises while pressing the ground in a slow pace due of Yang being hurt and exhausted. Willing to find her true mother through the muddy path, she has taken along with Ruby while sleeping on the wagon. With every breath she has taken, she is not giving up. The cuts and bruises on her knees and her grip pulling the wagon is also sore and red. Didn't have the time to eat breakfast when her father left, she just took Ruby to find her real mother's whereabouts.
While walking and enduring the pain, Yang looked at her little sister while sleeping peacefully on the wagon. Yang hoped that nothing goes wrong with her and her little sister. The little blonde girl smiled and continued to walk as she continued her path while stepping the mud.
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Stepping on the cracked leaves of his brute weight, the lone warrior analyzes every path and corner while continuing his journey through the fog as he wandering the whole forest. The forest itself is rather quiet and hoping that this planet has any source of technology and any civilians back on Earth. Still walking the same path, a tiny wet drop touched the Warframe. Stopped and looked up, it's starting drizzling around him and the forest.
With a small and thin rain is not a problem, he continued walking.
Each step further, the solitary warrior stopped himself for stepping on something. The ground he felt is a bit deep, the cold Warframe looked down where his right foot is stepping on.
His right foot is stepping on, is a footprint.
Crouched and examining the footprint, and by the looks of it, it doesn't resemble any creature he had encountered before. The footprint is large, has five long fingers, and very different from the infested. Is it a new breed of the infested? Or something different? It looks like the footprint by some creature has been there for quite a while and it might be around this silent forest.
Whatever this creature is around this forest, he won't hesitate to kill it when it harms him. The space ninja decided to keep going to follow the trail of footprints to investigate this unknown creature. Curious to see, the Warframe walked straight to the trail of the creature's footprint as he stepped on the muddy ground...
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Later...
Kept walking while stepping on mud while drizzling, the little girl is still exhausted from pulling the wagon while continuing her journey to find her real mother. Yang has traveled pretty far despite being exhausted and had short breaks, she somehow didn't complain about it. She has gone pretty far this time, and the area she's at is deeper within the grey forest where trees has no leaves around it. The little blonde girl sighed that her journey is taking forever.
Looked back to see her little sister as she's still sleeping on a wagon and continued walking towards the grey forest. Her feet are very sore that she has been walking forever, Yang looked down as she pulling the wagon and looked up and saw something.
From a far distance, a house can be seen from her sight.
Her tired expression changes to an excited look when she's nearly there. "This is it. I'm here!" The little blonde girl walked in a rather good pace while not shaking the wagon to wake up her little sister. Upon reaching there, she let go of the wagon and took it deep breath for reaching her destination. Finally accomplish her goal, Yang looked at the house and notice something different.
The house is all torn up and looked very haunted, and it felt like is been there for years.
Very confused if the photo told this location is really where her real mother is at. Yang looked at the broken house with lots on confusion but still reached her destination... Until...
A banging and scratching noise can be heard from her ears.
Yang's heart sank when she saw multiple pair of burning red beastly eyes from the darkness. Her heart increased even higher when she steps back slowly and trying not to say anything, not even calling for help. She is now terrified that her life ends here, including her little sister.
"...Yang?" little Ruby yawned while rubbing her eyes.
Little Yang instantly covered her hand firmly to Ruby's mouth and little Ruby is shocked. Little scared Yang tries to not let her little sister speak another word. Ruby realize what she meant as she looked at the red glowing eyes in the darkness of the old house. Now her heartrate increased higher than Yang's as Ruby's silver eyes started to drip with small tears.
Yang can't stand there and doing nothing, she needs a way to get out of here. Looking around the whole forest for an escape plan, the only way to get out of there is her right. Running through the trees is the only option.
When Yang looked and quietly whisper at her sister, "Ruby... On count of three, we're going to run through there.", Pointed at her right. "Ok?"
Ruby nodded of understanding her sister's plan.
"Ready?" Ruby grabbed her sister's hand. "...ONE." The Grimms prepared themselves to pounce on their young prey. "...TWO." The creatures gritted their teeth of wanting to attack and couldn't wait any longer.
"RUUUUUNNNNN!" Yang and Ruby are running for their lives when the Grimm creatures roared loudly and starts to give chase.
Gripping her little sister's hand tight for not letting her go from being chased by hungry Grimm. With Yang still exhausted but she didn't care if she runs out of breath, she won't let her and sister be eaten. "Come on, Ruby, keep going!" Yang and little scared Ruby are trying their best to get away from Grimms. Through the tall thin trees, Ruby looked back as the hungry monsters are still chasing them while pushing the trees away. She looked ahead until...
"UF!" Her hand slipped when her cape is stuck on a tree branch. "Yang!"
Yang ran as she's trying to help her sister to unstuck her red cape. "Hurry!" Trying as fast as possible, Yang looked at the soulless monsters coming; she instantly ripped the cape and grabbed Ruby's hand. "Come on!"
In a very far away distance, a crow is flying through the trees towards the girls' location fast.
Panting while running through the woods over two minutes, the little girl in red doesn't know how long it will take to run while escaping from the Grimm but for Yang, she is wheezing of not getting air for not resting and been walking for a long time and running of exhaustion. Her heart is pumping hard and her lungs is dying out when her vision began to get blurry. With each drying breath she exhaled, her body and legs started to giving up. Running slowly when Ruby realized, Yang instantly passed out of rest and dehydration as her body collapsed on the ground.
"Yang!" Ruby cried out when Yang collapsed. Shaking her to get up, "Wake up, Yang, wake up!" She can't even wake up her own sister when Ruby looked back as the Grimm are coming. With no chance to run, to fight, or anything, she yelled out in case someone hears. "HELP! Someone please Help!" Yelled as loud as she can to let someone hear her shout.
Somewhere deep in the forest, a pair of legs is sprinting surprisingly fast.
Staying close to her older sister, a pack of Grimm burst out through the trees as they finally caught their prey and there is no escaping from them. A terrified Ruby sit still without moving a muscle when a pack of Grimms stared at her and out cold Yang. This is it, Ruby is going to be killed off be those hungry beasts and there is nothing she can do it about it. She wished that her dad, mom, or Uncle Qrow showed up to save them right now. A Beowolf slowly approached in a scary way when it growled quietly and preparing itself to attack.
The claws tighten on the ground and the Beowolf growled loudly when it pounced high in the air. (Slo-mo start)
Ruby closed her eyes to shield herself and Yang from being to be attacked and eaten by Grimm. When the Grimm is in mid-air...
(SHANK!)
The dark creature's body has been cut in half by a sword strike of a black-bladed Krohkur from the brave black and red Warframe. Came in just in time from a little girl's shout and found the creatures he has been looking for. The Grimm's upper and lower body slammed on the ground when Frost landed in front of Ruby and Yang. (Slo-mo end)
When little Ruby heard something hit on the ground and found something off. In the moment she opened her eyes, Ruby is in shock from her two silver eyes of what she's seeing in front of her as she gasped quietly when the Frost Warframe stood tall. Gazing at the warrior's appearance, the color is black and red, carrying a riffle on his back, a magnum on his right hip. She could not believe it; a hero arrived to save them, just like in the stories of a huntsman. Yes, a huntsman is standing in front of her and Ruby is very happy that huntsman like him does exist in the stories.
The pack of Grimm became furious that a Warframe interfered; they roared and charged towards Frost. The cold warrior sheathed his sword on his back; his palm is covering in red mist and channeling the vapor and moisture. When the Grimm are coming, Ruby is worried that the Grimm are charging towards them. The Grimm are together, perfect. Frost instantly slams his fist on the ground and unleashes a long freezing ice wave. The Grimm has no chance to react, there were caught in a razor sharp, crystallized red ice wave and died. The ice wave dissolved into nothing while the pack of Grimm is nowhere to be seen. These odd creatures are almost as equal as the Infested.
Ruby was amazed that he possesses great ice powers and able to take out Grimm with one blow. Curious of who he is and she spoke shyly. "Um... Excuse me?"
The brute Warframe turned around slowly as he looked at the innocent little girl. Now Ruby can see his full front appearance and feel a bit uneasy of his robotic appearance. His head has rings on it, three red optics; a globe on his head that is glowing red, sharp and big shin guards, mostly his overall appearance has many black and red markings.
Knowing that she's nervous, the tall brute warrior gently crouched to her level so she can communicate with him properly. Ruby felt a bit comfortable when he's waiting of what she's said and spoke playing with her fingers, "Um... Are you a huntsman?"
Huntsman? A term that described someone who hunts someone or something, a hunter is his role too. Is there someone like him who has same quality like the Tenno?
The brute Warframe nodded slowly to the little girl, and Ruby spoke, "C-Can you help me and my sister to go back home?"
A simple request to ask the warrior to go back home, the Tenno gladly accepted to help the poor little girl to back home before it gets dark. Lending his hand to hers when Ruby slowly did the same. Reaching to touch each other's hand.
The Tenno's vision became very static when his whole body began twitching very badly and slammed his fist to the ground for resisting. In Ruby's perspective, she got frightened when he startled her all of sudden and has no clue what is happening to him. "Hey. Are you alright?" She ask with deep concern and doesn't know what to do or help.
What's going on?! Something's happening to the somatic link; the Tenno quickly delinked himself to the Operator.
Back at the Liset aircraft, the Operator has suddenly awakened of his Warframe sudden connection error. He heard loud banging noises and its shaking outside his ship and the whole room is almost losing power. The link itself along with the ship will be done for. He has no choice but to leave the little girl behind. He will promise to himself that he'll be back fast for her. The Operator then concentrated to link with his Warframe.
In a flash, the Operator links the Frost Warframe but Frost's vision has little static but works fine. He stood up quickly and looked the other way; he noticed that someone is coming through his codex scanner.
The Warframe quickly runs away from Ruby and her unconscious sister and on his way to the disturbance of his aircraft. Ruby is shocked that he's running away, "Wait! Where are you going?! Come back!" Now she's all alone and sad when he disappeared.
"Ruby!" The voice is easily recognizable when she looked behind.
"Uncle Qrow!" Ruby is now relieved that her uncle's here.
Qrow sheathed his weapon to his back and kneeled to hug his niece and Ruby did the same. Qrow felt how scared Ruby was, "Its ok, kid, I'm here." He's very lucky that he made it in time. When he checked around Ruby, "Are you hurt?"
Little Ruby shook her head, "No."
Believed that Ruby is fine, he asked, "What about your sister?"
When he mentioned Yang, Ruby looked back at her older sister, "She was tired while we were running."
Qrow checked on Yang and noticed that she's very pale and still unconscious when he checked her pulse. "She's just dehydrated. Come on; let's get out of here before more Grimm shows up." He picked up Yang in his arm and the clouds is getting darker outside.
"Uncle Qrow-" Ruby wanted to tell her uncle something happened.
"Save it, Ruby. We'll talk later after we get your sister back home. Ok?" Qrow said.
Little Ruby nodded of understanding Qrow's words and its better telling him later than right now. "Ok."
"Alright. Let's get out of here." He picked up Ruby and ran to exited out the dark forest.
While Qrow is sprinting through the forest to take both Yang and Ruby home for wondering out in the deep forest of patch, little Ruby looked back and still confused of why the Huntsman left before Qrow arrived.
Her face formed into a sad expression of whether or not she'll see her hero again and she never get to say 'thank you'.
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The amount of Grimm dust fades away while it started raining harder as the last Beowolf leapt towards Frost but failed when his sword penetrates its skull. The lifeless corpse of the Grimm turns into black dust. Frost sheathes his sword as he finally finished killing off the soulless creatures from harming his ship. Speaking of his ship, the aircraft is now covered in claw marks on the side and the back of his ship. Glad that his ship didn't make a hole for entering there and relived that the Operator is safe.
The clouds are dark and the rain drops heavily on the Warframe, Frost looks the other way and hope that a little girl is safe when someone shows up in his scanner. It's confirmed that humans do live in this planet. Is it peaceful? Is there any Grineer, Corpus, or Infested somewhere in this planet? What are those dark creatures he slayed? Or Huntsman? Just what is this planet?
The solitary Warframe stood still in the rain, while thinking something he should do next...
(To be continued)
Honestly, it took me a while doing a lot of rough drafts of this story. For example, I was gonna have Qrow attacked Frost while interacting with Ruby and Frost freezes his leg so he can get away. Yeah, leaving Ruby like that while the Grimm are attacking the ship sounded a poor excuse but the whole purpose of the plot is having Frost mysterious in Remnant.
For the people who's reading for the first time is wondering why I made a rewrite. To make it short: I wanted to write something original and it sounded cool (no pun intended). Writing some story involves different characters from different anime and etc. being part of Team RWBY It sounded cliché and it didn't seem right to me and I just don't feel it. Do I think those stories are bad? NO. I followed stories similar to those kind of plots and has good writing to it.
For the people who wanted to write those kind of stories. Go for it. I'm sure you have good time writing it.
Overall, I liked my Rewrite and I absolutely cant wait to write future chapters because I have planned future chapters. Yes, in this story there will be no Warframe characters and elements in this story and no RWBY OC's. Just only Frost surviving Remnant by himself because I'm a huge fan involving lone warriors wandering their own journeys by themselves.
What do you think of this rewrite story? Be sure to comment, Fav and Follow this story. Needed questions? Post down the comment so I can answer them in the next chapter or PM me. If you wanted something expected or any scenarios, comment or PM me so I may consider using your ideas. If you found some flaws in this story, you may allow to criticize this story but not too much criticism.
And chapter two will be on its way soon. Thank you for being patient for this rewrite and I hope you can wait for chapter 2. And of course, have a nice wonderful day. Peace!