Hi eveyone, this is my first story so its not that great, but i would love some tips and reveiws, next part of the story wll continue depending the responces i get. thanks :)
Dr Who - Rose's secrets (intro)
I jumped in suprise when the silence of the TARDIS was broken by the high pitched sound of my phone reciving a message.
i went to check it just as a man with a blue suit and great hair, burst through the door with un-expected energy.
"got the shopping" the docter exclaimed with a big grin on his face.
i put the phone in my pocket and smiled back, "did you get the good stuff"
"rainbow gummie bears? only the best!" he replied with bigger grin.
we sat on the TARDIS floor pigging out on the gummie bears and deciding where we were going next.
"what about visiting the Ood?" he asked as he concentrated on picking off a bears head.
" no way, they creep me out!" i said, remembering our incounter on the meteor.
" well then how about a trip to 1970?" he replied still looking down.
"you mean flower power, free love, hippie peace, 1970?" i asked "yeah"
"sounds...perfect" i sqeaked.
"good" the docter said, springing to his feet and smiling widely.
He walked around the TARDIS flicking switches and pulling leavers randomly.
I got up and followed him.
"ready?" he asked face inches from mine.
I gave a quick smile and he pushed in a lever.
The TARDIS jolted alive throwing us to the floor and then stopped with an sudden bang!
"Thats strange" the docter said, getting up and looking at a data screen.
"What happend?" i said, curious to why we weren't moving.
"The TARIDS seemes to have-" he was cut off by the TARDIS beaming to life and throwing us to the floor harder than usual.
It spun and shook madly gaining speed, the main controlls burst in to flames and with a huge crash the TARDIS came to a stop.
After a few seconds i sat up rubbing my head, "what he hell was that?" i stressed.
The docter got up and put out the flames with a blanket.
He ran to the data screen, "no...NO" he shouted "What is it?" i demanded "But thats... but its..." he stumbled "Its what?" i pushed He looked up at my face in horror, "impossible" he whispered.
I looked at him completely confused and reached for the TARDIS door......