Note: Test idea, introduction to a possible story.
As usual I own neither Zoids nor Transformers.
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Rock and dust fell away to reveal a bleak and soulless desert. In all directions the sand beckoned, calling to be explored under the beaming gaze of a bright sun that baked the landscape. Behind a massive sculpture of dinosaurs and other animals was carved into the massive cliff face that towered over head. Only the hole that had been carved as an escape rout disturbed the monolithic sculpture. All around the massive desert smelt of dearth and destruction, lives wasted and futures destroyed in an instant as though some unseen terror had raped the land sucking all hope from those it had left behind. Or were those just horrible memories of a distant past. The fine dust started to cloud the vision as the wind picked up. Turning towards the side of the massive dark rock, a path lead to the top where a possible vantage point could be used.
Vines snapped and fell to the ground all around as the dense forest came into the vision. The sleep had been far too long and painful. Shattered dreams and past glories all culminating in one humiliating defeat. In all directions the dense foliage had blocked any possible calculation of position. Only a bleak empty jungle and memories to be a companion until help arrived. A dull series of thuds gradually drew closer, eventually revealing a small red creature came into sight. The Rev Raptors eyes locked onto the being as it started hissing and growling. Its blades extended and lasers firing to no affect. Raising his arm to fire, the orange barrel lit up only briefly to fire a single shot through the raptors head, it collapsed instantly before exploding, leaving only a crater to signify its demise.
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If you could guess, and considering my vague details I wouldn't be surprised, that was supposed to be Optimus Prime and Galvatron.
This is a basic idea and any comments would be greatly appreciated, especially considering I cannot decide which age to base the story in.
Yes, No, Stupid, already done. All are appreciated.
As usual I own neither Zoids nor Transformers.
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Rock and dust fell away to reveal a bleak and soulless desert. In all directions the sand beckoned, calling to be explored under the beaming gaze of a bright sun that baked the landscape. Behind a massive sculpture of dinosaurs and other animals was carved into the massive cliff face that towered over head. Only the hole that had been carved as an escape rout disturbed the monolithic sculpture. All around the massive desert smelt of dearth and destruction, lives wasted and futures destroyed in an instant as though some unseen terror had raped the land sucking all hope from those it had left behind. Or were those just horrible memories of a distant past. The fine dust started to cloud the vision as the wind picked up. Turning towards the side of the massive dark rock, a path lead to the top where a possible vantage point could be used.
Vines snapped and fell to the ground all around as the dense forest came into the vision. The sleep had been far too long and painful. Shattered dreams and past glories all culminating in one humiliating defeat. In all directions the dense foliage had blocked any possible calculation of position. Only a bleak empty jungle and memories to be a companion until help arrived. A dull series of thuds gradually drew closer, eventually revealing a small red creature came into sight. The Rev Raptors eyes locked onto the being as it started hissing and growling. Its blades extended and lasers firing to no affect. Raising his arm to fire, the orange barrel lit up only briefly to fire a single shot through the raptors head, it collapsed instantly before exploding, leaving only a crater to signify its demise.
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If you could guess, and considering my vague details I wouldn't be surprised, that was supposed to be Optimus Prime and Galvatron.
This is a basic idea and any comments would be greatly appreciated, especially considering I cannot decide which age to base the story in.
Yes, No, Stupid, already done. All are appreciated.