Hi :D
Before you read my short poem sort of thing, I want to ask you something. I am planning on writing ANOTHER Makorra fanfiction. So, I need your advice, from which POV should I write? Korra's, Mako's or narrative? Please answer me or suggest, if it's not hard for you. Myself, I am planning to write in narrative form. But I still want to know what you think.
I promise, I won't fail~
She was standing there,
I was near her, pretending not to care.
Her blue orbs that were on me, I sense.
But to look back at her, would not make any sense.
She was angry and sad, broken inside.
Because all I did, was push her aside.
The avatar was yelling and crying,
I needed to stop lying.
It wasn't that I didn't like it,
I was just afraid to admit it.
Thought she will not believe it...
She could push me away,
Like I did everyday...
Soon enough, her cries had stopped.
'If only she is okay...' I thought
The silence hung in the air,
As I grew more aware.
"Whatever..." She angrily muttered.
"Korra, w-wait!" I suddenly stuttered.
The lapiz and golden orbs met this time.
From this moment on, I want her to be mine.
I know, she may not feel the same,
But this time, I promise I won't fail...