AU: Hey guys, I just wanted to start the rewrite of my just started fan fic Doctor You. You may notice this is not the original deal, well that is because I didn't put my full strength into it. No joke, full effort is 3 page short stories which college professors says is amazing, and I am an 8th grader. Any ways enough with thoughts onto the intro
GT: we are back and ready to be like the one ring and rule them all
Alex: this isn't lord of the rings, ok I guess I should state setting and such for the first chapter. It mostly takes place at one of the top 50 schools in U.S. Classes SAS which is located in Oklahoma city area.
GT: I know,anyways I don't own doctor who BBC does. I just own Alex. No to the unknown length chapter.
Alex's POV
"Well I guess my 3 page short story reading would have been a little less confusing if I read it." I tell my friends Rider and his cousin as we walk to German class "the idea was actually based on a story my friend is having me write."
I was talking about my friend Ben, he was amazing, but kinda acted crazy at times listening to poles and fences. At this time, I just blamed his jacket though, and didn't known the real truth (which may be forgotten to be included, he may be an important character later if I remember).
A sat though German and near the end of the hour when we were doing busywork I walked up to my teacher, Frau Lohmeyer. "I decided to play my copy of pokémon Y in German since I already beat X in English." "well that sounds fun" she replied but she probably had no interest whatsoever.
Then the bell suddenly ringed. I decided to see my old science teacher, mr. Rider who isn't related to the rider above. "hey, Mr. Rider, you want to check out my 3 page sci-fi story?"
"Sure" he replied. "I do have time to read." A few minutes later he finished "Well that was confusing, what was it based on? Could it have been doctor who?"
"Nope, a story my friend is having me write for him. Though they are similar, but it's not like the silence, daleks, or time cracks will appear in it." I walk down the sidewalk to my mom parks where my friends carpool with us. I start to feel a little queasy though. I loose my balance and trip.
As I get up I see a piercingly white blind jagged crack in the sidewalk that looks like a sinister smile. Weird, I know there is a lot of students who go to classes who are whovians, but this crack is a little to well done. I quickly touch it and nothing happens though so I figure I am safe. But as my foot lands on it, I get whisked to my doom.
The last thing I see the cloudiness of the time vortex. I blacked out. I wake up in on the other side of the world eight years before, though I don't know till I hear these words.
"hello is anyone there" said the female voice. Then my sense fully kicked in. I am in a department store basement, and rose is about to meant the autons.
GT: I assume this is a lot better written, though there was a bunch of filler based on potential story points and my real world events for me.
Alex: why did you mention Pokemon x/y
GT: to explain to my readers the major cause of procrastination that might occur. I will just be playing those games for a between every season random crossover plan between this story and a game or show, maybe even book.