Hi this is my first fanfiction so constructive criticism would be great.

In this jac is about 5 months pregnant and janny are together... for now. i have no idea where this is going so any ideas would be much appreciated. in this they know the baby has CDH

"Miss Naylor" Mr Hanssen spoke across Darwin towards the couple sat together looking at something in their hands."I hope I am not disturbing anything."

"no, no, not at all. we were just discussing when would be the best time to start going on maternity leave. It won't be for a while but we need to arrange a time in which i should go as i will most probably be expecting about a month earlier than usual as you know for other reasons" she looked at Jonny to make sure she had covered everything then back at Hanssen

"oh alright, how long to you expect to be off for Ms Naylor?" he asked not expecting her to be off for very long and him having to fight with her to stay off for longer

"Well i was thinking 3 weeks off then a fortnight of part time work then Jonny can have time off to look after the child following that." Jac said sceptically

"of course, as long as you need although i have to admit that's longer than i was expecting. no matter we will make an appointment in the next few week to arrange everything." Hanssen replied as he turned on his heels to leave but Jonny stopped him by saying

"while your here Mr Hanssen, please would you look at a patent for me. 24 year old male, suspected heart attack but he's complaining of stomach pain..." the two of them walked off leaving Jac to her thoughts

i hope that when you survive baby girl, daddy will stay with us and so we will be a happy family but i don't think that will happen, we will just have to hope that he loves us enough to stay.

i wonder what would have happened if i had gone with Joseph in the first place, i wouldn't have met jonny but i might have had more children. anyway thats all in the past now.

wait is it, i recognise that voice, only two people in the world sound that anoing and thats Jonny and...

"Joseph."

"Jac, i was passing through and well, i thought i'd say hi and find out how you were keeping up."

Joseph was facing her and he could see the colour drain from her face in shock as her mind raced with so many questions.

"what are you doing here? you can't be here. you better start explaingin yourself now."

"i told you i just can back to see how you were doing then i'll be off again."

"right in my office now, i assume you know were it is, i'm going getting someone. it's the original password from donkeys years ago."

Joseph walked off to wait for his doomb to come.

Jonny had taken the patient into theater with elliot after complications so she went into theater 2 finding them just closing up.

"i need both of you in my office now, elliot please i can't do this you need to help me and Jonny i want you to meet the worst idiot ever to walk the earth." she looked into Jonnys eyes and he realised that she was genuinly scared of what was waiting. tears started welling up in Jac's eyes as she walked away to wait in the nurses station for them to gome out and help her.