A/N: Hey guys! I decided to make a rewrite of my first ever fanfiction. I was cringing so much when I read through it so now that I'm a better writer, why not? Hope this is better then it was originally. Here is the link to the original if anyone is interested. s/12082078/1/365-Days Enjoy!
Andre was amazed. He has heard Jade sing before but this time it felt different. She is putting so much emotion into the lyrics. Her softer side is showing and its a nice change. She always has her guard up, trying to act tough but the way she is singing now... she is letting herself be vulnerable. He can't help but wonders why. Why push people away? Why act like you don't care about anything? There is Just something about this side of her. Something beautiful.
Jade smiles when she sees Andre looking at her. The look in his eyes told her that he loved the song.
"You like it?" She asks, feeling a bit shy.
"Yeah. It was great." He answers, mesmerized. Great wasn't a strong enough word but he couldn't think of a better one at the moment.
"Thanks." Jade grins. She glances at the clock and notices that it's starting to get late. Seems like Andre notices too.
"Wanna wrap this up? It's after midnight." Andre complains.
"No, you need to finish the song." Jade answers.
"But we have been trying to finish it for 3 hours." He whines. Jade rolls her eyes.
"Wow, okay, now shut up and sing something." Jade laughs. Andre sighs but does as he is told.
"I, I really wish that I could write the next line, um, my favourite letters J..." Andre pauses. Jade smiles because her name starts with J. "Tuna fish fillet, I'm gonna wash my dog with some blue shampoo."
"That was... not so great." Jade giggles.
"No?" Andre teases.
"No." They both start laughing.
"How about we go with what you wrote. I'm too tired to come up with anything good." Andre asks Jade. She doesn't want to be here much longer either and she promised to help so she agrees.
"Okay. I will sing it again and you write it down." Jade says, picking up the microphone. Andre nods and grabs a piece of paper and a pen.
"Okay, you can sing now," Andre says when he is ready.
"There is no upper hand, I'm giving you mine. It doesn't have to end up wasting your time. There's things that I could say, but hear it my way, I wanna let you know that its all okay." She sings with enough emotion to nearly make herself cry. Andre is again so mesmerized by the goth's singing that he is staring at her.
"Good?" Jade asks.
"Mhm," Andre says, still staring.
"Good, then are you ready to leave?" Jade asks, eyes feeling heavy from being tired.
"Yeah. I'm just gonna tidy up a bit. Go get some sleep. Text me when you're home so I know that you're safe." Andre says.
"O-kay?" Jade says, confused as to why Andre was suddenly so worried for her safety. They have never been that close. She shakes it off and leaves. Waving at Andre as she exits. After she is gone, Andre's eyes widen as he realizes what he said. He too is confused as to why he is so worried about her safety. He just brushes it off as him being a generally protective person and continues what he is doing.
When Jade gets home, she is contemplating on if Andre was serious about the text or not. She decides to shoot him a quick text just to be safe.
"I'm home now." She types and hits send.
Just as Andre enters his house, his phone buzzes. He looks down and smiles at his phone. Jade text him that she got home okay and this one little text makes him feel so relieved but he doesn't understand why.
"Okay. Goodnight." He texts back and heads for bed.
That night, while he is trying to fall asleep, all he can think about is Jade.
A/N: Okay? So? Is it a bit better so far? I know its still short but I don't want to take it to far from the original. Just enough to make it better. Let me know what you think.