Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto, or any of it's copyrights, but the Oc's are mine
Special thanks to one of my friends that gave me a plot and some characters for this story. I would say his fanfiction penname, but he doesn't have one. :-(
Oh, and a note to my readers, this story doesn't really introduce the Oc's, they just kinda pop up, so let me tell you the main Oc's names (only the main ones) that are listed in this chapter: Otaran (the main character of the story), Asuka (one of Otaran's team members), Shinbu (the other of Otaran's team members), Sesiro (some idiot from the Moon Village. He's a bitch, and I'll repeat myself alot throughout the story,and will eventually kill him), and finally Shabumi ( the main antagonist of this chapter ONLY ). Yes, I will do this every time I introduce new characters.
Naruto NG
Episode 1: Hot Blooded Hybrid Vs. Shabumi!
"Now the final round of the Chunnin exam prelims is about to begin. Will Otaran and Shabumi please take the stage." Rock Lee announced.
"Finally, it's my time to shine!" Otaran yelled and jumped to the arena
"Hmph." Shabumi said as he warped right in front of Otaran and Lee.
"Well, these two sure are eager," Lee said to himself, and then announced "Begin" while jumping back.
"Okay stay focused" Otaran thought to himself, but then Shabumi took an umbrella off hi back and placed it on the ground opening it.
"Something isn't right," Otaran thought to himself.
"Well, this match is already over" Tai said.
"You don't know Otaran like I do, Tai. I wouldn't count on him losing this early in the match." Shinbu added to Tai's remark
"Well, we'll find out then won't we?" Tai said.
Otaran id some hand signs and said "Katon; Hosenka no Jutsu!" All of a sudden, fireballs spewed out from his mouth.
"No way!" Shabumi yelled.
"A fire jutsu! But how?" Tai said in amazement
"Man that Otaran is full of surprises" Sesiro whispered,
As the smoke released, Otaran saw Shabumi standing there with barely any scratches on him.
"Is that it? I thought you could do a lot better than that." Shabumi scoffed.
"You wish, Sharingan!" Otaran yelled as he ran up to Shabumi.
"You fool," Shabumi said and then yelled "Rising needles of Death!" Then, all of the senpon from the umbrella fired at Otaran, and he managed to dodge them, only getting a few scratches on his face.
" Phew, that was too close." Asuka said with relief
"You missed, and now you die, Katon: Hosenka no Ju….."
"Falling needles of death!" Shabumi interrupted. Almost every needle that flew off Shabumi's umbrella hit Otaran.
"Ahhh!" Otaran gasped as he fell to the ground in pain.
I'm such a loser, I couldn't see that one coming, even with the sharingan, Otaran thought to himself.
"Get up! Otaran, you can't lose here, you almost had him beat. GET UP!" Asuka yelled
"Otaran, you had better not disappoint me." Sesiro said.
Otaran slowly rose from the ground and opened his eyes, showing fatigue. "Byaakugan!" Otaran yelled.
"What?!?!? A byaakugan and sharingan user? Amazing." Tai said.
"Showoff." Shinbu said unimpressed.
"Go get'em Otaran!" Asuka shouted.
"Let's go, 8 trigrams: Palms of Pheonix!" Otaran yelled as he ran at Shabumi. Then, his hands combusted into flames and hit Shabumi in the stomach causing him to cough up blood.
"Now you've made me mad, Otaran. I'll kill you now. Crushing needles of death and destruction!" Shabumi yelled.
"8 trigrams: palm rotation!" Otaran said. A huge hemisphere of chakra appeared around him and deflected every senpon that was thrust at him.
" What? But that was my strongest jutsu!!!!" Shabumi whimpered. Otaran then warped in front of him and said "Now DIE! 8 Trigrams: 4 palms, 8 palms, 16 palms, Thirty-two palms, 64palms jutsu!" Otaran said as he landed every hit on Shabumi who, as a result, passed out.
"Shabumi can no longer fight, so I guess that means Otaran wins." Lee announced
"Yeah! Go me!" Otaran shouted with glee.
"Wow, he actually pulled it off. You know, he was kinda hot while he was down there fighting." Tai said as though he really meant it.
"Dude, I know you did not just say that." Shinbu said with disgust.
back in the arena
"Will all of the finalists please report to the arena." Lee said. "In two months, report to the final arena, but until then, train and learn some new techniques so you can impress the judges, surprise your enemy with new attacks that they haven't seen yet, and maybe even become a chuunin. Now to announce all of the finalists: Sesiro of the moon village, Shinbu of Frozen Lake village, Otaran of volcano village, Asuka from the Volcano village as well, Tai of the Darkness village,Asuya of Darkness villate and last but not least, Zephr of moon village. And remember, train as much as you can in the next two months until the finals."
"Alright, let's go already." Shinbu said in a lazy tone.
Asuka: Wait a minute, who's this new girl, and what's up with Otaran, he seems different.
Next time on Naruto NG: Otaran's affection and Molly's deception.
Otaran: Sounds sexy. (Asuka punches Otaran)
Asuka: Shut up you loser.
Ok, first chapter complete! I've got a bunch more chapters to go, so reveiw, or I'm not gonna post anymore stories. I'll also hunt you down and whack you with a rotten two by four with rusty nails on it. And this is my worst chapter yet out of 8, so I'm sorry if you didn't like it. The chapters get better as they go on, so please keep reading. I've noticed that most people just read the first chapter and stop, so KEEP READING for god's sake.