RL Note-I wasn't happy with this so here's the updated version
My Characters (NO you can NOT use my Characters)
Talia
Leo
Saiya
Laduma
Duchess
Zara
Marie
Azela
While flying towards Priderock Zazu saw a white lioness not sure if she was still alive Zazu gently touched her leg she moaned causing Zazu to immediately fly to Priderock to alert the King of this situation
Zazu: Sire
Mufasa: What is it Zazu?
Zazu: I saw a white lioness but she was unconscious I think she may be hurt
Mufasa: Take me to where you saw her
Zazu: Of course sire
Mufasa stood over the lioness and began carrying her PrideRock
Simba: Wow dad you found an lioness
Nala: A white lioness and she's so pretty
Mufasa laid the lioness gently down on the cave floor and Sarabi walked over to him
Sarabi: Mufasa where do you think she came from?
Mufasa: I don't know probably from some distance land I wonder how long she's been out there
Sarabi: That is also a mystery she looks so young
Mufasa: I know well we will get answers when she awakes
She took in the sight of the it was massive the biggest cave she ever seen or been in compared to the cave she grew up in this one was double its size. She jumped when she heard a mighty yawn.
Nala: Hi I'm Nala and this is Simba
Duchess: Hello I'm Duchess
Mufasa: Hello I'm Mufasa and this my wife Sarabi
Duchess: It is very nice to meet you all Sarafina Do you know where I can get some water?
Sarafina: Of course at the water hole I'll take you to it
Nala: You're really pretty Duchess
Duchess: Thank you so are you
Nala looked at the lioness with awe to Nala she was the most beautiful lioness ever
Simba: So do you like it here Duchess?
Nala: Simba she just woke up why would you ask her that?
Duchess: Well from what I've seen the cave is really nice and warm
Simba: Its not all that great
Nala: Simba's only saying that because he was grounded and had to stay inside for a whole week
Zazu: Hello madam I'm Zazu I'm the King's advisor
Duchess: Hello Zazu I'm Duchess
Simba: Zazu was the one who found you that's what my dad told me
Duchess: Is that true Zazu?
Zazu nodded his head very proudly and smiled
Duchess: Thank you Zazu you saved my life
Zazu: Your very welcome madam not to be a bother but the king and queen would like a word with you
Simba: She's not in trouble with mom and dad is she Zazu
Zazu: Of course not young master
Simba: Ok then bye Duchess
Duchess: Bye you two
Sarabi: Duchess where are you from?
Duchess: It's kind of a long story
Mufasa: Well do you mind telling us if that's okay
Duchess: Oh okay I didn't come from a big pride it was just me my mom, dad and a couple of lionesses I was the only cub in the pride my life changed in an instant
Sarabi: What Happened?
Duchess: Rouges they invaded our territory and killed my parents I escaped with my mother's best friend and she basically raised me
(Flashback)
My father fought against four rogues he tried his hardest to fight them all off but they were too strong for him even though my mother and the other lionesses helped. They fought off the lionesses and my mother and that's when I saw my father's body laying on the ground I knew that he was dead. Mother saw one of the rouges run towards me and she knew if he got to me he will kill me and before I knew it I was in my mother's mouth and she was running away from our home the rouge instantly caught my mother I saw a white rouge on my mother's back and she was trying her hardest to get him off. I screamed at him to let her go but he wouldn't and with that he snapped my mother's neck and her body fell to the ground I knew my mother was dead I began to scream and cry. I ran to her body and curled up against her and I begged her to come back to me I then saw a shadow over me and I looked up and that's when I saw the rouge staring down at me I got scared so I quickly put my head under my mother's chin and hoped he would go away but he didn't so I looked back up and tried to run but he instantly grabbed me I was on my back staring at him.
Laduma: What's your name rat?
Duchess: My name is Duchess and I'm not a rat
Duchess: What's your name?
Laduma: My name is none of business Duchess
I saw the rouge turn his back on me and saw this as my chance to run and I did I ran as fast as I could back to where the lionesses were I made it unharmed but didn't notice that the rogue was right behind me, I ran to a lioness with a light yellow coat and light blue eyes named Saiya I ran right into her arms and cried
Saiya: Oh Duchess it's going to be alright I promise I won't let them hurt you
I knew Saiya was telling truth after all she was really was close with my mother she was like a second mother to me I remember my mother like this morning her beautiful white coat her sapphire blue eyes I then saw that same shadow that surrounded me when I was with my mother and knew it was the white rogue I buried my head in Saiya's chest and wished he just go away
Saiya: Go away
Laduma: Make me
I looked over the big male he was bigger than my father he had a white coat and mane with ice blue eyes that pierced my spine when I looked into them. I gasped when I realized he was staring at me and quickly buried my head in Saiya's chest. I then heard a sound that relieved me him leaving us alone I then began to fall asleep the sun was finally setting after everything that happened to us that happened to me when I awoke we were in a new place a safer place atleast I hoped
Duchess grew into a excellent hunter thanks to Saiya who patiently trained her she heard a dark chuckle that made her sick to the pit of her stomach she quickly turned and saw a very familar face the same rogue that destroyed her home and family almost 2 years ago she gave him an evil glare and he just looked backed with that same look from when she was a cub
Laduma: I guess patience is a virtue
Duchess: What do you want?
Laduma: I'm here to claim my prize
Duchess: You have no prize here now leave
Laduma: Oh you don't remember do you?
Duchess: Remember what? What are you talking about?
Laduma: Well let me help jog your memory I told you that I will make you bare me cub's when your older do you remember now?
Duchess gasped and began to slowly back away from him
Duchess: I thought I was a rat
Laduma: Who now has grown into a beautiful structure for baring cubs
Duchess: NEVER
Laduma: OOh Who's going to stop me? You
While Laduma began to laugh Duchess took her chance and ran with Laduma hot on her heels he chuckled while his eyes stayed locked on her. Duchess saw a cave in the distance and ran for it she was breathing heavily from running so far once she made it in the cave she realized she was trapped and the only way out was being blocked by her captor, Duchess cowered into the corner with fear in her eyes
Duchess: I don't even know your name
Laduma: My name is Laduma and this is my territory I don't know how you found it but I'm glad you did
While Laduma headed towards her kill Duchess looked over her shoulder at him and bolted away when she looked back she saw Laduma running full speed at her, not watching where she was going Duchess tripped over a tree branch before she could get up Laduma was dragging her back to the cave, the cave was filled with roars of pleasure and cries of pain Laduma felt he was very close to his climax he kept his pace fast and powerful, as he let loose a guttural roar that vibrated the cave floor, Duchess cried herself to sleep morning felt like it came in an instant the sun shined in the cave brightly waking Duchess with tired eyes and a sore aching body Duchess tried to stand but found it impossible from the pain she saw blood and shot an evil glare to Laduma who licked his lips seductively and chuckled
Duchess was in the cave alone when Laduma returned with two lionesses following him with a cub in each of their mouths. One lioness had an orange coat with emerald green eyes the cub in her mouth had the exact coat color but with light green eyes the other lioness had an honey colored coat with amber eyes the cub in her mouth had a milk chocolate coat with amber eyes.
Saru: Hello Duchess I'm Saru and this Amber
Duchess: Hello
Saru: So do you have any cubs?
Laduma: She will very soon
Amber: Oh
Duchess: Where are you two from?
Saru: Amber and I are from the same pride
Duchess: Really what's your leader's name?
Saru: His name was Leo he and his mate were killed
Amber and Saru left the cave to go after Duchess but not before Saru gave Laduma the most disgusted look ever
Amber: Duchess what's wrong
Duchess: The pride that you came from was my father's
Amber: We all thought you and Saiya were dead
Duchess: Saiya is dead
Amber: What are you doing here with Laduma?
Duchess: He kidnapped me that's why I'm here
Saru noticed Laduma was still in the cave and was glad he was because she was ready to chew him out over his treatment of Duchess
Duchess sighed with relief that her cubs would be here any day Duchess gave birth to six cubs Laduma had a huge grin on his face making Saru give him an angry glare he shot one back to her causing her to leave the cave he quickly followed after her
Laduma: What's your problem Saru?
Saru: Like you don't already know
Laduma just shrugged his shoulders
Saru: You killed her mother you forced her to stay here but to make things even worse you got her pregnant
Laduma: What happened did and there is nothing you or anyone else can do about it or change it so get over it and yes I am happy I have Duchess and my cubs just like I said I would
Saru: You bastard all you care about is yourself you don't even love Duchess or those cubs
Laduma: For your information SARU I do care about MY FAMILY
The next morning Duchess awoke feeling a little better she nudged her cubs but they didn't move she did it again and began to scream Saru and Amber ran to the cave and knew right away the cubs were dead after the cubs were buried Duchess swore to herself she would never let Laduma touch her again and she will be free no matter what that night Saru told Duchess that Laduma was dead due to the poisonous fruit juice she poured over the buffalo kill and that she was finally free to leave
(Flashback End)
Duchess awoke with someone falling on top of her she jumped out of her sleep and saw Simba and Nala playing around her
Duchess: Good morning little ones
Simba/Nala: Good Morning Duchess
Duchess watched as the two cubs messed with the King while he was asleep Duchess knew how males got if they were woken up out of their sleep, so she took them outside to practice hunting techniques
Sarafina: Who taught you how to hunt
Duchess: Actually I'm self taught mostly
Sarafina: Your mom didn't teach you
Duchess: Uh no her and my father were killed when I was a cub, but my mother's friend took me in and basically raised me as her own
Zara: Oh what a sad story please like anyone here is gonna believe that lie
Duchess: I have no reason to lie ESPECIALLY ABOUT LOSING MY PARENTS ZARA
Sarafina: Duchess please calm down, ZARA LEAVE HER ALONE NOW
Zara: Or what
Sarafina: Don't try me you know you can't hold your own against me
Zara: You know what Sarafina fuc-
Sarabi: ZARA THAT'S ENOUGH!
Mufasa found Zara far from Pride Rock
Mufasa: Zara Why are you being so rude to Duchess?
Zara: She doesn't belong here that's why
Mufasa: Well she is here whether you like it or not and she is staying
Zara: Whatever
2 Days Later
After Sarabi's burial Simba stayed in the cave too saddened by the lost of his beloved Mother Nala tried talking but he was just too downtrodden to even play with her
3 Months later
Duchess laid exhausted but happy after giving birth to twin cubs a white cub she named Marie and a gold cub she named Azela
3 Days later
It was a big day the cubs would be presented to the kingdom today, after the presentation was over Duchess put the cubs to sleep she was really overjoyed she couldn't believe how her life have changed in an instant from that one terrible day, she now had a pride a loving son and husband and a kingdom all ready to defend her with their lives if they needed she wouldn't change this for anything in the world this was her home and new life and she loved every bit of it
Hoped you enjoyed this edited version :)
-RL