Well this is my first fanfic so be nice please. Anyway it is a harry potter one as you can tell and constructive criticism is welcome, if your criticizing and it is not helpful then you suck. Also I based the character kinda on me, its mostly my life, but a different body and the mind set and the way things are worded are uniquely my characters. Well later dayz,
Raelyn!
Chapter 1,
Solitary Existence.
To be Staring Once again at the giant magic double doors of Hogwarts School Of Witchcraft And Wizardry with the sparkling moon reflected behind it I understand again, how very alone I truly am. Hello my dear reader. My name is Raelyn Ravenscroft I am 5'4 with permanently charmed black hair with red streaks. I hated the brown color, full lips, slim frame, but as most people would say I am just the right size and this is my story of how I, lonelier than the werewolves that reside here (who won't come near me by the way) fell from the graces of the wizarding world.
And it is all do to one boy, one Draco Lucian Malfoy. You see he used me as a pawn in his twisted little game of keeping out of the dark lords grasp. Come, follow me to see how I cam to be in this hollow solitary Existence.
Short I know, the first two are, but I couldn't really add more you know? Anyway please tell me what you think.