The Eclipse
Disclaimer:
Don't own anything! All rights on this manga and all it's Characters belong to Masashi Kishimoto-sama!
I'd appreciate constructive criticsm. Flames'll be used to roast my marshmallows; maybe sausages too but I don't know about that yet...
Why is this ONE chapter called The Eclipse and not as you would maybe expect the Sun the Moon and the Sky or something like that? Why is it not after the other 4 that already existed? Well I wanted to remake the Moon since like forever! ...and ever and ever. It literally felt like "...and ever and ever!" because I just didn't get to it! You can even underline that! Oh wait... Did I actually accidentally do it for you? What a coincidence right?^^
I didn't like how I did it back then. This is also one of the first stories I ever uploaded on ! This chapter is the rewritten version of it and additionally all other chapters molten into one including No Eclipse and the additional Sky and Eclipse chapters! The Sky and Dreamer are the "good" endings so to say. The previous existing parts of this chapter are the ones that already existed before! Logic yes. That made total sense... And they lead to the "bad" ending!
I made some pretty big changes in all already existing chapters too! Oh and just to let you know: I let Hinata die by suicide to get Narutos attention in the first chapter to get the story rolling. Yes I know I am horrible! I apologize to everyone! I accept the fact that you blamed me for it. But let it be known. Hinata is my favourite character in Naruto and I never intended to "bash" her as some people seem to have interpretet it...
And just so you know where to place this:
Yahiko (god realm Pain/Nagato) kills Hinata while she is protecting Naruto and does not get revived. It does not work on her! With the slight difference that I until this day am of the certainty that she died for Naruto and only came back because of Nagatos jutsu. You don't explicitly see her die though so it is not confirmed if she theoretically survived the fight with Yahiko or not. Probably no. And Naruto later loses and dies against Sasuke... You will have to find out what the rest in this story is by reading it^^
In my opinion a more logical and less depressing setting than just killing herself to get Narutos attention if you ask me...
The Moon
Dear Naruto
I hope this letter reaches you
I always wanted to tell you this
But I probably never could and now...
I will not be able to anymore
How ominous this sounds
But I want you to at least know indirectly what I thought about you
I was never able to express my feelings
If I actually did I am happy
If I did not then you will find it out like this
I always went unnoticed
Never having courage...
It is really bitter always going unnoticed
You are always looking at someone else
Either Sakura or Sasuke
For you I was like the Moon never getting shined upon by the Sun
And you are my Sun
Always shining brightly
I wish I could be where you are someday
At least once
At least once I would like to have you watch me
I want to show you that I want to protect you
What I wish for the most
To help you
When you need it
To be noticed by you
Just once in forever there is a chance
When the Moon and Sun cross each other
Because the Sun and the Moon are normally not meant to meet
But although this is true I still wish for you to be the Sun
So I can see you shine
To be the people's hero
Just maybe next time I wish I can be the Sky
Then we can shine together
In another life
Or another plane
I just hope you won't forget me
No matter what
In Love
Hinata Hyuuga
Your Moon
The Sun
Dear Hinata
I am writing although I know you can never read it
After all you are not under us anymore
But knowing that you died because of me
I have amends to do
Not just to you
I want to write this down to let people know after I die
My deathwish like yours so to say
For having you die for me
Trying to protect me
No, not just trying
You did protect me
Saved me
And it was your demise
Your end
But I don't think I was worth it
For you I might have been the Sun
But I am actually not that good
Noone else would look at me like that
I am a stupid idiot
But I will make it up
Soon I will probably have to fight the man you say I am chasing all my life
I will honour your wish and pull it through
I will not falter
I will win this battle
I will shine and defeat his darkness
And I will get him back
No matter what it may cost me
Even if it is my life I lose
I don't want to give up now
I can't give up now
I will win
And save him
Not just him
But everyone
I will protect all
And when everything ends
When my life is over
I will finally save you too
We were not meant to be in this life
But I promise when I die I will make it up to you
I will come for you
But for now I have to put this aside
But I promise you I won't forget about you no matter what
After all I love you too
But that is just why I am a stupid idiot
Never realising it
In love
Naruto Uzumaki
Your Sun only
The Irony
Where am I?
What darkness
Oblivion?
I guess this means it is over
I have lost in the end
I died before I could win the fight
The darkness has won
What a fitting place to be in then
I could not keep my promise
I am very sorry
I failed
I am nothing
I still have things left to do
Not even the most important thing I promised to do in life could I do
I guess I can do at least one thing
I can find the person waiting for me here
After all you should be waiting for me
But this place...
It is so void of life
Not a single thing
I feel a lingering scent of life in front of me
Just a tiny feeling
As I come nearer a light appears in the dark
Is that you maybe?
Everything else is just black
I don't have the feeling of moving at all while I go there
No I am wrong it is that I am not moving at all although I am walking there
The light seems to be coming to me
It comes in my reach but I can't see anything else than the lightball
I reach out for it
Shortly before I can touch it though it just disappears
As if it was never there
Only darkness remains
Who was I even waiting for?
Why did I come here?
I remember that there should be names that are important to me...
But as I try to remember them they disappear
Like the light
I try to recall my own name...
But nothing...
I forgot everything
Everyone that was important
The only thing I still remember is that there was supposed to be someone here
Waiting for me
Maybe she forgot about me too
This person who died
Did she just forget me?
Wasn't this supposed to be the place where we should meet?
Maybe this is punishment
For the hope I had
For losing
Just like this that little glimmer of hope I had disappeared
Ironic
I fight in my life for someone who forgot me long ago?
Is that what you are trying to tell me?
Wow...
So I will also end like her?
Sad alone in this darkness with noone here apart from yourself
Forgetting everything about my previous life like I am just now
Just ironic
The Sky
I finally see a new light
But how is this possible
I pretty much despaired
Gave up
I mean I still had a slim hope that I would still be alive someday
As strange as it sounds
In fact where was I even?
I can hardly remember anything
It all seems like a dream to me
And before it I had legitimately died
I am certain
And if I am alive...
Maybe so is Naruto?
Did he survive after that?
I hear someone sleeping beside me...
And he really is there!
Wow
Oh my god
Just sleeping there like he has no worries in the world...
IS it actually him?!
Well I guess I will let him sleep a while longer
When he wakes up I can still ask him about it
NOW I am just happy that I can be beside him
And noone else but me
Noone who can be in my way
That I can see the Sky
Under which we are together
I guess we really are the Sky
Oh he wakes up...
"Hello Naruto...
Are you okay."
Still sleepy...
"I guess I am.
Strangely.
If you are Hinata tell me...
Didn't we two die?
Shouldn't we be dead?"
"I guess so.
But it seems my wishes and dreams were fulfilled.
We are alive again."
"It seems like it.
Hinata?"
"Yes?"
"If this is the same world we were in before we died...
Then there is still something I need to do.
Would you please help me?
And maybe NOT die while you are at it..."
"...
If it is what you wish for I will do anything for you.
What do you need to do?"
"I need to defeat Sasuke!"
"Does this mean you will leave me again?"
"No I will not.
That is for sure.
We are now bound together I guess...
I am sorry though...
We can't live in peace YET!
This I still have to do...
I need to fulfill the promise I did in my previous life.
I need to protect everyone.
Before we can finally achieve happiness."
"For you I will go to the end of the world my dear.
Even if it meant eternal war!
Let's do this."
"We sure will.
But first let us bathe a bit in the Sky's light.
After all we have waited very long for this.
I hope it will not be the last time though."
Even though he died once
Even though I died for it too
He did whatever he could
He has noone to make amends to
But he still continues on
For the sake of all
This is why I love him
And now I can FINALLY be at his side
We are still in the same world as before but now everything is slightly different
We won't lose
I won't lose
No matter what
We are the Sky
Vaster than the Sun and Moon alone
The Dreamers
We are finally getting married
How I have wished for this for so long
Naruto won against Saszuke with his new found determination
Sasuke does not wish to fight anymore
Obito is dead
Oroshimaru is gone
Kabuto too
Nagato even helped Naruto after I died
But died while doing it
So did the Pain (Yahiko) that killed me
He put his hope in Narutos hands
After eternity everything is going well
As he promised
Finally the Eclipse can take place
Just as I wished for it
Maybe Dreams really do come true?
Please leave a review, I'd appreciate it for my future work.
A/N: This thing is extremely long and I hope you like it just as much as I did in case you actually read everything. Easily my longest work and will probably always be. An excellent ending for Naruto, Hinata and Sasuke too. Let's not forget him!