Okay. So this is my first ever fanfiction. This is going to be multichap and maybe a bit mature but not terribly. This is the preface, so please give it a chance. Please review my writing style. I really want to know what people think of it. Thanks to all,
Amy xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
She was running. She couldn't stop running. He was following her. She could tell but she daren't turn to look. If she did he'd pounce on her.
She passed trees and houses. She opened her mouth to scream. Silence. She couldn't scream. Nobody would know what was happening.
The pressure was building. She had to get out alive. She needed to see him, to know where he was so she could make an escape.
She craned her neck to see his position, still running. Her legs were hurting, she couldn't stay in this way for long, she needed to see his location. But he wasn't there. He'd vanished.
How long had she been running from nothing? She slowed down to a steady halt and surveyed her surroundings. Where the hell was he? She was panting wildly, stretching her arms down to legs, regaining her breath. Just then, he appeared behind her and brought a gun to her neck.