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hi if you could tell me if i should continue that would be this is my first fanfic

TWO YEARS AFTER KISHKIN

The Kishkin defeting group of Spartoi were just coming back from a mission and were walking through the desert when..."Ummm guys?"Tsubaki started nervously,"What is that?" The group turned"Oh that a twister?"Liz asked."YUP~it shure is sis~!" Patty stated."So not cool"Soul said baring his teeth"I should tell father"Kid said getting worried,"I-i dont kn-know how to deal with th-this...w-well at least not the tw-twister part"Crona stuttered(BTW CORONA IS A BOY IN HERE)"Shouldent we run?"Maka asked starting to backup""NO!THE GREATBLACK*STAR NEVER RUNS FRO-!"This was the last thing everyone heard befor the twister came up on them and every thing went black.