hi I'm nym this is my fittest fic here so constructive criticism is appreciated. I hope you enjoy this is a femslash fic
"Annabeth" i called as I threw the fleece to her. I tried to distract Polyphemus while she ran and percy fought Kronos. As Polyphemus turned to annabeth I picked up a stone and threw it. it hit its mark. Right in the back of his head. "Hey stupid, you want a fight, come and get it." I yelled trying to give her some time to run. The giant cyclops turned to me as it headed in my direction I heard a giant explosion. I looked to see percy, on the ground looking startled, as the pieces of Kronos returning to the golden sarcophagus. I saw the blonde mop of hair known as luke, that bastard, fly over-head. Polyphemus caught sight of him and ran after luke's flying body. As I turned to look at annabeth, time seemed to freeze. I screamed as the pit scorpion crept up behind her. Before she could turn around to see what was behind her the scorpion's stinger was buried in her back. I felt white hot anger course through me and I had cut the scorpion's head and stinger off before her body hit the ground. When the scorpion was dead I fell to my knees before annabeth. I pulled the stinger out of her Back but the light was leaving her eyes. I grabbed the fleece from the ground beside her and laid it over her chest. I took her face into my hands and looked into her unfocused eyes.
"You, can't die. You remember what you told percy, you can write your own destiny. You have to live. Percy needs you. I need you" I whispered that last part almost to myself. A moment later her eyes glazed over and her skin lost all color. As her breathing ceased I let out a sob and laid my head on the stone beside hers. In that moment I realized deep in my cold, stone hard heart I had fallen in love with annabeth chase.
She took a breath and her eyes shot open