Hey guys! Wow, Im finally doing this mock-sue fic!
So, Im writing this fic without any bad means, just to have some fun and put all of the Mary-Sue kind of things in this story! All spelling mistakes and such are made on purpose! I hope you have fun while reading it!
Catastrophe Gorgeous Gardenia Raven Spears opened her eyes in an unfamiliar room. She couldn't remember anything but memories of his past about her trying to help a somehow depressed young man bit him betraying her and leaving her in the streets. Any other memory was gone. She stood up and fixed her clothing which was completely soked because of the pool of water she was in and practically see through. She had a black stripless corset top with red upwards lines decorating it. Her skirt was ripped majorly and her red lace panties were almost showing. Her fishnet soks were ripped as well, revealing her long legs and her shoes were lost. Her white hair was shining because of the water and her black and white eyes hurt. She was majorly injured on practically everywhere but she managed to walk.
Just when she was about to collapse after walking 3 miles, strong hands grabbed her and pulled her into a warm chest and she lost consciousness.
When she woke up, she saw a really handsome man over her, stripping her. She screamed "KYAAAA! HENTAI!" But she was badly injured so she had to lay back and her throat hurt from screaming so she just let the man strip him and ruffly turn her over whispering "I shall devour you" and putting his oversized thing in her and taking her virginity. She wanted to scream for help but she couodnt so she just cried as the man raped her.
The next morning she woke up and she felt nausius so she ran to the bathroom and puked. She was naked and she was in real big pain. Suddenly she remembered an old lady telling her about watching out for rapists or she could get raped. Her eyes widened and she started crying as she realized she was pregnent.
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