Chapter 1 the two new exorcists
In a small alley a kid was running away from two level 1 akumas but until he was in a death end and turned around horrified looking how the akumas were aiming at him and another that was a akuma level 0 (the ones that only a metal skeleton) came in front of him
-mama……..why??!!
Asked the kid looking how the soul of the akuma tried to stop from attacking the little boy but in that moment the akuma blew up and the two other akumas turned around and the last thing they saw was a fist full of black energy
The kid was surprised when he saw a young man but because it was dark already he couldn't see him very well
-thank you sir
Said the kid
-no problem since it's my job as an exorcist
-------Later on----------
It was around 10 pm on a train that was heading to a unknown destination were Allen Walker a new recruit trained by general cross was heading towards the exorcist HQ along side his masters golem timcanpy
-this is great I can't wait to arrive to the exorcist HQ
Said Allen to his little companion
On his left there was a young man around the age of 17 who had black hair with a raven hair style and his eyes where as black as two beautiful black pearls heard what Allen said and looked at him
-are you an exorcist?
Asked the young man
-yea I'm going right now to the HQ
Answered Allen who looked surprised to see the guys clothing since he had a short opened gray jacket that barely reached his hips with a symbol of a flame on the back that revealed a black t-shirt under it with the symbol of a white diamond and blue jeans that had two belts around both legs
-cool looks like were going to the same place since I'm a exorcist too
-really??!!!
Asked
Allen surprised looking at the young man getting up of his seat and
walked towards him and sat down close to him
-I'm Jin Mirouko nice to meet you
-Allen Walker the pleasure is all mine
-so you are new in the order?
-yea I'm going to introduce myself
-looks like were going to be good friends since I'm new too my master just promote me to a exorcist
-are you Japanese? By the way you look like it but I'm not sure
Asked Allen
-half Japanese half American
Answered Jin while a little red Chihuahua dog with devil wings came out of Jin's belt
-what in the world!!??
-Jin I'm sick being inside that chain will you give me a break?
Asked the dog and this shocked Allen
-shut up hankosha that's what you get for being such a pervert now….BACK TO THE CHAIN!!!!!!!!!!
Yelled Jin and the little dog turned into a chain that had the shape of a happy face but this one had the shape of a little devil
-what was that?
-oh that's my guardian hankosha
-guardian? That dog?
-well there I'm from a kind of people who are born with a guardian that its always with me just like that golem you have but this one isn't like a golem at all since he is a big pervert that has put me into trouble hundreds of times
-pervert huh?
----Some time later-------
-you have to be kidding me right?
Asked Jin when he and Allen looked at the gigantic cliff
-there are no stairs around………..do we have to climb this!!???
-seems like it so lets go
-but I never thought we were going to do this
-don't worry you have my assistance
Both of them started to climb the hill and Allen needed help from Jin all the time since he was always about to fall and they climbed for about an hour and finally arrived to the top were they lay on the ground half dead
-I thought I was going to die
Said Jin who was catching a little bit of air
-thanks Jin…
-no need to thank me since we are partners right?
Asked Jin looking at the white hair boy
-yea……
-lets go its getting really late and I'm kind of sleepy
-right…..just look at the place
Said Allen and Jin looked a little surprised looking at the main base of the exorcist that looked more like a dark castle for demons instead for exorcist
-I head about it before from my master…..quite the atmosphere is it?
Asked Allen
Both of them walked through the road were the fog would make anyone blind and black winged golems looked at both the newcomers
---Inside the HQ----
Some of the personnel of the science department and the girl exorcist lenalee were looking at a big crystal cube were many screens surround it showing Allen and Jin walking towards the HQ
-who are they?
Asked Reever Wenhamm
-they climbed the mountain with no problems
Said one of the scientist
-who are those kids? Outsiders aren't allowed in here why didn't you stop them on the cliff?
Asked the chief of the HQ and lenalee's older brother komui lee
-they are not outsiders brother they have general cross golem with them
Answered lenalee
---Outside-----
Both of the exorcist arrived to the entrance and Jin was a little curious about the giant face they had on the center
-excuse us I was sent here by general cross Marian y humbly request an audience with the leaders here I'm Allen walker
Said Allen to the gates
-I'm Jin mirouko I was send by the general Kevin yeeger to do the same as this kid
----Inside-----
They said that they were sent here, have you heard anything about it Chief?
Asked Reever
Komui took his time to think while he took a sip of his coffee
-nothing
He answered
-take the gatekeeper motive examination
Said Reever
Jin and Allen hearing this from the speaker looked at the giant face waiting
-nice to meet you
Said Allen but in that instance the face got extremely close to them with its eyes almost coming out of his eye sockets scaring both Jin and Allen leaving them completely white
-X-ray examination to see if you are akumas or humans
Said the gatekeeper looking at both of them
-this thing is creepy
Said Jin
the gatekeeper was shocked when he saw allens mark on his left eye and started screaming like a maniac scaring jin and Allen even more and all the people inside were surprised
-get this guy out!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yelled the gatekeeper terrifying both of them
-One of them is cursed!!!! The pentacle is the mark of an akuma an ally of the millennium Earl!!!!!!!
Yelled the gatekeeper confusing Allen and Jin and everyone inside from the science department was shocked
-hey hold up I don't know what's going on here but if you are going to kill this kid fine with me but at least put attention to me at least
Said Jin
-that's so
mean!!!!
Yelled Allen
The gatekeeper didn't put attention to Jin even after he tried to call him many times but this annoyed him and closed his fist from his left hand
-shut up already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yelled Jin punching the gatekeeper who could have been send flying if it wasn't for him being attached on the wall chocking the people inside even more
-he punched the gatekeeper with his bare hand!!!!!
Yelled one of the scientist
-ok now that I got your attentio……..
-THE OTHER JUST ATTACKED ME HE IS AN ENEMY TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yelled the gatekeeper crying annoying Jin even more
-have you alerted the exorcist inside the castle?
Asked Reever
-kanda is already there
Answered lenalee while on one of the screens a guy was falling from the sky
Kanda the samurai of the black order fall on top of the gates looking at both Jin and Allen
-you have guts to come all the way here by yourselves
Said kanda pulling out his sword scaring Allen
-W-Wait a second!!! There's been a misunderstanding!!!!
Answered Allen nervously
-that won't work……his eyes…..they are as cold as ice
Said Jin on his head
-with my Mugen I'll……..kill you
Said kanda who jumped from the gate and he was about to strike both of them but Jin grabbed Allen and backed away
-stop it you heard him it is a misunderstanding
Said Jin letting go of Allen
-and who do you think you are?
Asked kanda
-were are exorcist and as I can see so are you so you should calm down a little
Said Jin
-yea right you are a human why are you protecting him?
Asked kanda
-his my friend and I feel no dark presence inside of him so calm down or else ill have to fight you and when I say ill fight you ill kick your ass
Answered Jin in a very serious tone and kanda felt like laughing
-you fight me!??...ill deal with you later after I kill the other
Said kanda who at an incredible speed ran towards Allen who couldn't see him coming until the last second and kanda was about to strike but a fist hit the blade of his sword making the attack miss Allen
-you!!
Said kanda looking at Jin who was the one who intervene
-you gave me no choice…..ill fight
Answered Jin throwing another punch to kanda that was so fast that kanda barely block it and because of the force of the impact he was send back to the gate but he stopped before crashing to the gate
-Fine with me then------ "he has really incredible strength"
Said kanda who saw who Jin put himself in his fighting position
-what is this? He doesn't have any weapons?...that idiot thinks he can beat me with a little bit of martial arts!!?? Don't make me laugh!!!
Said kanda on his mind while he touched the blade of his weapon and it started to glow
-ill slice you in two with mugen!!!!
Said kanda charging against Jin
-come and try!!!
Answered Jin who did the same
When they were both close enough kanda attacked Jin with his sword but he dodge it easily and throw a combo of kicks and punches so fast that some of them kanda wasn't able to block and he furiously attacked Jin directly but Jin blocked it with his right arm
-impossible my mugen didn't cut your arm!!!
Said kanda surprised
-You just had hit something as strong as your sword----"my clothing is as resistant as the strongest metal in the world"
Answered Jin kicking kanda on the stomach and them a combo of three punches but kanda dodge them and he throw a punch at him but Jin blocked it and counter it with a kick on kanda's face
----Inside--------
-that Jin guy is giving kanda a difficult time
Said lenalee surprised
-are they really our enemies?
Asked Reever
-I don't know……but that Jin guy is fighting kanda without a innocence
Answered komui
-----Outside--------
-you are good
Said kanda who sounded exited while he dodge and blocked multiple punches and kicks from Jin
-ill protect my friends at all cost so prepare yourself kanda
Said Jin pulling out a weird black glove that had four metal balls around a green crystal
-darkness come to me
Said Jin while he put on the globe and the crystal began to glow
-what is this?!!
Asked kanda who was blinded by the light
Allen who was looking at the fight was surprised looking at this
-did he just called darkness?
Asked Allen surprised
-I don't know what are you doing but ill kill you right now take this Hells insect's first illusion!!!!!!!!
Yelled kanda throwing bunch of weird insects with many red eyes from his blade but they were destroyed when they got close to the light
-what!!????
Asked kanda when he saw Jin who had black colored energy on his hand
-that attack wont work on me
Said Jin throwing that energy at kanda who easily cut in half but for his surprised Jin was already in front of him and punched him on the face with his right fist that was filled with black energy
-----Inside-------
-hey I found this on the chief's desk it's a letter of general cross
Said one of the scientist who came running the to komui but he didn't say anything
-what's wrong?
Asked the scientist looking at everyone who couldn't take their eyes away from the screen's
----Outside-----
Jin dodge the hell insect attack and throw a arrow shape energy beam from his right and left hands but kanda dodge it and charged against Jin and so did he
-this is the end for
you!!!
Said kanda
-stop!!!!!
Said the chief from the speaker and both of them stopped and kanda was shocked when he saw that his blade wasn't even close to Jin who had his fist a centimeter away from his face
-I have more experience fighting hand to hand so don't be so surprise I dodge your attack
said jin
-we have approved your entry Allen walker and Jin mirouko
-is this komui? What's the meaning of this?
Asked kanda who backed away from Jin and Jin put his hand down and walked towards Allen
-sorry we were a bit hasty but this kid is general cross's pupil and timcanpy's being with them is the unmistakable proof that he is our ally
-tha…tha.ss right
Answered Allen who could barely speak seeing all the fight
-are you okay?
Asked Jin
-what is that!!???
Asked Allen surprised looking at the glove
-well this is a special globe that lets me use my inner power the proper way
Answered Jin
Kanda was enraged seeing how a total stranger had almost defeated him even if he didn't use all his strength against Jin
-ill slice you in half
Said kanda who charged against Jin but he stopped the attack with his right hand
-stop it already its over
Said Jin
-what!!???
-you are a little hyper today I have to send you to sleep the easy way
Said Jin and kanda was surprised when he saw a black aura around Jin and he backed away while Jin was putting all that energy into his right hand
-take this hell insect……
-KURAI AME!!!!!!! (Japanese meaning dark rain)
Yelled Jin throwing a punch with his right hand and thousands of arrows-like black energy beams came out of it and they all hit kanda sending him flying and leaving him unconscious when he fell to the ground
-sorry but it was the only way to stop you
Said Jin and Allen was terrified
-you killed him!!!!
-No he is just unconscious let's go Allen----------"he wasn't using his full power maybe I was just lucky"
Said Jin grabbing kanda and walked towards the gate that opened itself
---Inside-----
Everyone was shocked after seeing the conclusion of the fight
-he………defeated kanda….
Said komui
-is he really a rookie?
Asked another of the scientist
Jin and Allen arrived to the main hall and looked surprised at how big it was
-wow it's huge
Said Allen
-I never………
Jin was interrupted when he got hit with a clipboard and he looked behind him and it was lenalee
-what you did was mean you know
Said lenalee and Jin blushed a little seeing at the cute girl in front of him especially because she was wearing a miniskirt
-a cute girl with miniskirt she reminds me of somebody (see note after the end of the chapter)
Said Jin on his head
-well it wasn't my fault he attacked me even after they told him to stop or else I might had died he was to hyper to stop him………..but even if I'm kind enough to carry him he doesn't seem to appreciate it that well
Answered Jin who duck and dodge the attack from kanda
-YOU BASTARD I'LL KILL YOU!!!!
Said kanda enraged
-hey calm down already
Said Jin and he was surprised when he saw lenalee grabbed him from the shoulder
-stop it already kanda
Said lenalee and this annoyed kanda and he walked away
-he didn't even let me introduce myself
Said Allen and this made kanda stop for a second
-I don't shake hands to someone cursed
Answered kanda returning to his cold voice
-you think you are so cool or something?
Asked Jin annoyed
-you are Jin mirouko
right?
Asked kana
-yeah
-we both weren't using our maximum strength back there
-I know but that's no excuse for loosing or don't tell me you even let yourself get hit by my dark rain
-next time ill kill you
He said leaving the place
-ill be waiting then
Answered Jin
-don't put him much attention he just came from a mission and I'm sorry for hitting you
Said lenalee
-no problem it would be impossible for me not to forgive such a pretty girl
Answered Jin and this made lenalee blush a little
-I…I… well I'm the supervisor's assistant lenalee nice to meet you please follow me ill show you around
She said referring to both Allen and Jin
The three of then walked around the dark halls of the castle while some of the guards were looking at them
-are those newcomers?
-they are just brats and look at the white hair one he looked like an old geezer
-he seems to be cursed
-and the other one what's up with that clothing? (See note after the end of the chapter)
-----Some time later-------
-this is the dinning room
Said lenalee showing the place while they walked
-damn this place reminds me the dinner from my school
Said Jin annoyed
-this is the lounge there is also de sanatorium, the library, and everyone's own room ill show you later
Lenalee and the other two arrived at the dormitories
-exorcist all leave here for missions that's why some of them called them home
She said
-"home"….like their house?
Asked Allen
-of course idiot
Answered Jin on his mind
-but there are those who go but don't come back on purpose
She answered and Allen knew she was referring to his master
-you and general cross where at India?
Asked lenalee who stopped walking
-it was three months ago but……..
Both lenalee and Jin were shocked when they heard how his master told him to come to the HQ and when he got hit by a hammer and ran away
-he knocked out his pupil, and when he was out ran away?
Asked lenalee surprised arriving to the floor of the science department
-your master must have some kind of mental problem
Said Jin
-yeah…….
Answered Allen
---Some minutes later on the science department----
-hi I'm the supervisor of science komui lee I welcome you Allen walker and Jin mirouko that was quite the fiasco back there eh?
-and whose fault was that??!!!
Asked the other scientist while they were working annoyed
-and it was impressive what you did back there mirouko-kun you defeated kanda making it look easy are you sure you are a rookie?
-I have two years of experience fighting against akuma alone but I didn't come here yet until now
-an experienced rookie eh? Interesting coming from general yeeger
Said komui
----Some moments later------
-what are we doing here?
Asked Jin looking at the place that was more of a operation room
-may I see your hand?
Asked komui to Allen
-what do you………
-some time before kanda attacked both of you your weapon got damaged right? You don't need to take it
Said komui and Allen remembered before meeting Jin he fought against many akumas when he met the millennium earl and used his arm to protect a kid (read chapter three from the manga) so he shown his deformed arm that looked really damaged
-looks like the nerves got damaged as I expected Jin do you have an injured arm too? I couldn't see your anti-akuma weapon
-I don't have any
Answered Jin
-what do you mean by that?
Asked lenalee
-I don't use the power of a innocence to fight, the power I used is called spirit power or simply SP
Answered Jin and komui was shocked
-you mean……you are from the triangle order??!!! (Read notes after end of chapter)
Asked komui
-yea I was one for them for four years but I decided to retire and join the exorcist to help to defeat the earl
Answered Jin
-what is the triangle order?
Asked lenalee
-the group that rivals our organization……..people who can unlock their true power inside of them and they can fight without the use of the innocence and they fight against the earl and other threats
-that's right and my hidden power is the use of darkness and other technique I don't like to show but since some people cant control their power properly I need to wear this globe every time I fight or else the power inside me will eventually destroy me
-that's something really interesting
-but I'm not from that order anymore I'm a full pledge exorcist
-ok I get it now Allen can you activate your weapon?
-sure…………summon…
Said Allen summoning his white gigantic arm and Jin was impressed
-so you are a parasite-type?
-you mean those who use their bodies as weapons? The rarest anti-akuma weapons?
Asked Jin
-correct and as I see I have to fix it
Said komui pulling out some equipment and one of them was a weird drill and he put a yellow helmet on his head
-what is that equipped for?
Asked Allen
-oh shit is going to hurt
Said Jin covering his eyes with his right hand but his curiosity made him want to see when he pulled out a camera and started recording
-repairing….its a bit shocking but so if you don't want to get traumatized you might not want to look
Said komui who turned on the drill scaring Allen
-W-Wait hold on……
In a matter of seconds everyone on the castle could hear Allen screams of pain but some minutes later Allen's arm was fixed
-lenalee can you take Jin to his room I'm taking Allen right now will deal with him later
Said komui
-sure brother
Said lenalee
Jin was about to say something when komui grabbed him and took him outside and close the door
-listen to me you brat I know right now you are happy to be alone with my sister but I warn you……..YOU DARE TO DO SOMETHING TO MY DEAR SISTER WHILE IM NOT WATCHING ILL KILL YOU AND STICK MY REPARING DRILLS ON YOUR ASS DO YOU UNDERSAND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????
-su….sur…e
Answered Jin who was a little nervous
-well then I hope you become a good friend with lenalee it's been so long since she had a friend around her age
Said komui in his normal tone and this totally surprised Jin
-kanda is to old but you are barely a year older and I'm just happy since she has always been alone and her comrades that most of them are grownups are their only friends
-ill do my best and don't worry I'm not like that but what if for some reason she……..
-EVEN IF SHE IMPLORES YOU TO DO IT ILL KILL YOU IF YOU TOUCH HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-ok ok I get it…….
Said Jin and lenalee came out of the room
-should we go now?
Asked lenalee with her sweet voice
-sure
Answered Jin who followed her looking at komui with his repairing tools in his hand making sure he got the message
-----Some minutes later------
-so this is my room? It's a little depressing
Said Jin looking at the room that had only a bed and a window
-you can do whatever with it so you don't have to worry well see you later
-wait lenalee
-what is it?
-thanks for being so nice to me and Allen I hope we become good friends
Said Jin
-your welcome and of course we will be
Answered lenalee leaving the room
Far away from the HQ three men who were being covered with capes to cover their faces were heading towards the exorcist base
-how much farther is it?
-not far I can't believe they have their base on top of a cliff
-and not to mention the fact that that place is full of exorcist
-it doesn't matter he is in there and we have to make him pay
New Character Biography 1
Name: Jin Mirouko
Age: 17
Nationality: half Japanese half American
Place of Birth: Japan
Description: black haired raven hairstyle teen with black pearl eyes, white skin, almost as the size of kanda he is a very energetic young man who has a great will to protect his friends but he falls to almost any pretty girl with mini skirts and he loves to be In areas where there is many flowers since it reminds them of someone very important to him
Anti-akuma weapon: he doesn't have any since he fights using his hidden power but he needs a glove to use it or else he will die
Most priced possession: the diamond that's on the globe (reasons will be explained later)
Powers: use of darkness as a weapon and the devil eye and others
Likes: Pizzas, sushi, pretty and cute girls, read mangas and watch anime, train and fight against powerful enemies
Dislikes: cowards, evil and his worst enemies specially the earl
Love Interest: unknown
Equipment: his clothing that is as strong as the hardest metal in the world it's extremely heavy but for Jin it weights like a feather, his special globe that has a diamond attached and his guardian hankosha
Special ability: eating three complete pizzas in less than a minute and beating five level one akumas in one second
Story: he is one of the three main characters of this fic, he comes from the triangle order a organization that fights akumas and other threats without the use of innocence instead they use their hidden power that they awaken but jin like many people his power will destroy him if he doesn't wear a special glove to control his powers he is the heir of the clan mirouko one of the ten most powerful clans in the world
I hope you liked the beginning of my fic this is my second fic in English and I know I need to improve even more but I hope you can understand the story since this is sort of a remake adding up a modified plot, new exorcist (the main plot will take on the perspective of Allen, lenalee and most important the new main character jin) new enemies and of course our old characters too please review and tell me how its going (I don't hate kanda he is one of the coolest character but in that part he was a jerk and I just wanted to teach him a lesson)
Notes
1 if you want to know what Jin meant by remembering someone else with a miniskirt read my other fic Gundam Seed Destiny EX
2 Jin's clothing is more like for the modern days but I ignored it since watching the anime that shows lenalee on a school uniform (she looks really cute with it), robots that look like mazinger Z and little golems that are like surveillances cameras
3 this fic may have many tributes to my past fics since Jin has appeared around four fics two published here including this one and I'm using him from my oldest fic "triangle order" that was published in a forum"