Hiya. My name's Elaine S. and I'm 13. I've 0nly just joined fan fic so this
is my first ever fic. I've read loads of fics and Jimmy and Cindy fics are
my fave so that's what I've written. I hope you like it; please don't be
too harsh with the reviews. If I get some good reviews I'll write more
fics. Sorry I know I've gone on and on so I'll shut up now.
Intro Jimmy, Cindy and the gang are 14 and they've just started 10th grade at RetroVille high. Libby and Sheen have been going out for a year and Nick and Cindy have been dating since 8th grade. Jimmy and Cindy are still arch enemies or so they think.
Chapter 1 Detention
It was a sunny day in Retroville and Sheen, Libby & Carl were sitting outside at lunch. It was only the second day back after the school holidays but already Jimmy and Cindy were arguing about something. Libby had turned up her music to full blast to try and block out their yelling, Sheen was trying to concentrate on calculating how much his Ultralord collection was worth (yeah even though he's 14 Sheen is still completely obsessed with Ultralord) and Carl was reading about llamas in his new book he'd got from Jimmy for his birthday in the summer holidays. Sheen sighs finally giving up with his calculator and says
"Hey Libby what are they arguing about?" Libby turns off her music and replies
"I dunno, you know what they're like, when they get going they'll argue about anything, I bet they don't know either. So are we still on for our date tonight"
"Yeah of course, your gonna love it."
"So aren't you gonna tell me where you're taking me or is it a secret like that time you took me to an Ultralord convention" She is remembering the time Sheen had said he was taking her on a 'secret date,' she had thought it was going to be dead romantic but Sheen had driven her for miles and miles just so he could take her to an Ultralord convention.
"No you were so boring last time, this time I'm taking you somewhere you'll never be bored. (the bell rings) BBBBBBRRRRRIIIIIINNNNNGGGGGG
"Hey Libby what lessons have we got now" Sheen asked.
"Double chemistry" Libby replied sounding despondent.
"Noooooooooooooooooooo" Sheen almost screamed " I never thought I'd say this but here goes I'd rather stay out here and listen to those two (he jabs his finger in Cindy and Jimmy's direction) arguing for 4 hours than have 2 hours of chemistry."
"Come on Sheen look on the bright side at least its Friday and it's our date tonight" Libby said trying in vain to cheer Sheen up, but even she knew that double chemistry was always torture. Jimmy and Cindy didn't turn up for registration and when the teacher asked if anyone knew where they were everyone knew but no-one was gonna snitch in fear of getting their ass kicked by Cindy when she found out (Cindy had started karate when she was 11 and she was almost a black belt) When they finally did turn up 15 minutes late they were both given detention after school. After the bell rang the teacher sat them both in opposite corners of the room and told them to 'think about what they'd done' whilst he went to have a cup of tea in the staff room and complain to the other staff about the awful pupils he taught probably. Well this isn't bad thought Cindy at least now I can plan that shopping trip me and Libby are going on at the weekend. So she got a piece of scrap paper out of the desk she was sitting at and stared to write down all the shops she wanted to go into and all the stuff she wanted to buy.
Oh well now I can start planning some new inventions thought Jimmy so he started to try and think up some new inventions. His eyes wondered all around the classroom looking for inspiration and his gaze came to rest on Cindy. After 5 minutes he realised what he was doing and shook his head and turned his eyes back onto the desk in front of him. But every time he did this, his eyes would uncontrollably drift back onto the back of Cindy (she was facing the opposite way to him) He suddenly realised just how pretty she was, he'd hardly ever looked at her before when she wasn't yelling her head off at him. When she was calm with her long blonde hair cascading over her shoulders and down to her waist she looked gorgeous. Then he realised what he was thinking and shook his head violently and went back to his inventing thoughts.
This worked for a while but then his mind turned to the argument they'd had that morning. He thought about the things he'd said to her and realised some the really cruel things he'd said to Cindy, not just that lunch time but every time they'd had an argument and without warning he suddenly became aware of the fact that he felt sorry for her. Even though he knew the stuff she'd said had been just as mean he wanted to go over to her and apologize for all the spiteful and untrue things he said to her.
Just then the teacher came in interrupting his thoughts and told them they could go as long as they promised that it would never happen again.
"I promise sir" Jimmy and Cindy chorused
"Good bye then have a good weekend and I'll see you on Monday"
"Good bye sir" they chanted.
Once out in the corridor Cindy turned on Jimmy.
"That was all your fault" Cindy said angrily Jimmy ignored her. He stopped half way down the corridor, pretending he needed something out of his locker and watched her out of site before he left the school for the weekend.
Finally Chapter 1 is finished I hope you liked it. Chapter 2 will be out really soon I hope, the more reviews I get the faster I'll write. Oh yeah and please tell me if there's anything I can improve.
Intro Jimmy, Cindy and the gang are 14 and they've just started 10th grade at RetroVille high. Libby and Sheen have been going out for a year and Nick and Cindy have been dating since 8th grade. Jimmy and Cindy are still arch enemies or so they think.
Chapter 1 Detention
It was a sunny day in Retroville and Sheen, Libby & Carl were sitting outside at lunch. It was only the second day back after the school holidays but already Jimmy and Cindy were arguing about something. Libby had turned up her music to full blast to try and block out their yelling, Sheen was trying to concentrate on calculating how much his Ultralord collection was worth (yeah even though he's 14 Sheen is still completely obsessed with Ultralord) and Carl was reading about llamas in his new book he'd got from Jimmy for his birthday in the summer holidays. Sheen sighs finally giving up with his calculator and says
"Hey Libby what are they arguing about?" Libby turns off her music and replies
"I dunno, you know what they're like, when they get going they'll argue about anything, I bet they don't know either. So are we still on for our date tonight"
"Yeah of course, your gonna love it."
"So aren't you gonna tell me where you're taking me or is it a secret like that time you took me to an Ultralord convention" She is remembering the time Sheen had said he was taking her on a 'secret date,' she had thought it was going to be dead romantic but Sheen had driven her for miles and miles just so he could take her to an Ultralord convention.
"No you were so boring last time, this time I'm taking you somewhere you'll never be bored. (the bell rings) BBBBBBRRRRRIIIIIINNNNNGGGGGG
"Hey Libby what lessons have we got now" Sheen asked.
"Double chemistry" Libby replied sounding despondent.
"Noooooooooooooooooooo" Sheen almost screamed " I never thought I'd say this but here goes I'd rather stay out here and listen to those two (he jabs his finger in Cindy and Jimmy's direction) arguing for 4 hours than have 2 hours of chemistry."
"Come on Sheen look on the bright side at least its Friday and it's our date tonight" Libby said trying in vain to cheer Sheen up, but even she knew that double chemistry was always torture. Jimmy and Cindy didn't turn up for registration and when the teacher asked if anyone knew where they were everyone knew but no-one was gonna snitch in fear of getting their ass kicked by Cindy when she found out (Cindy had started karate when she was 11 and she was almost a black belt) When they finally did turn up 15 minutes late they were both given detention after school. After the bell rang the teacher sat them both in opposite corners of the room and told them to 'think about what they'd done' whilst he went to have a cup of tea in the staff room and complain to the other staff about the awful pupils he taught probably. Well this isn't bad thought Cindy at least now I can plan that shopping trip me and Libby are going on at the weekend. So she got a piece of scrap paper out of the desk she was sitting at and stared to write down all the shops she wanted to go into and all the stuff she wanted to buy.
Oh well now I can start planning some new inventions thought Jimmy so he started to try and think up some new inventions. His eyes wondered all around the classroom looking for inspiration and his gaze came to rest on Cindy. After 5 minutes he realised what he was doing and shook his head and turned his eyes back onto the desk in front of him. But every time he did this, his eyes would uncontrollably drift back onto the back of Cindy (she was facing the opposite way to him) He suddenly realised just how pretty she was, he'd hardly ever looked at her before when she wasn't yelling her head off at him. When she was calm with her long blonde hair cascading over her shoulders and down to her waist she looked gorgeous. Then he realised what he was thinking and shook his head violently and went back to his inventing thoughts.
This worked for a while but then his mind turned to the argument they'd had that morning. He thought about the things he'd said to her and realised some the really cruel things he'd said to Cindy, not just that lunch time but every time they'd had an argument and without warning he suddenly became aware of the fact that he felt sorry for her. Even though he knew the stuff she'd said had been just as mean he wanted to go over to her and apologize for all the spiteful and untrue things he said to her.
Just then the teacher came in interrupting his thoughts and told them they could go as long as they promised that it would never happen again.
"I promise sir" Jimmy and Cindy chorused
"Good bye then have a good weekend and I'll see you on Monday"
"Good bye sir" they chanted.
Once out in the corridor Cindy turned on Jimmy.
"That was all your fault" Cindy said angrily Jimmy ignored her. He stopped half way down the corridor, pretending he needed something out of his locker and watched her out of site before he left the school for the weekend.
Finally Chapter 1 is finished I hope you liked it. Chapter 2 will be out really soon I hope, the more reviews I get the faster I'll write. Oh yeah and please tell me if there's anything I can improve.