A/N: HELLO, PEOPLE. I'm Wingah, and to newcomers who've never been to one of my stories before, welcome! To others who've been reading since the original, welcome! (I'm looking at you, badDRUMMERboy15.)Anyway, this is a revamp of my original story by the same name. More notes at the bottom!Disclaimer: I do not own Undertale.

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Chapter 1:

A Wild Human Appears!

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My head throbbed as I awoke, surrounded by golden petals. The blinding light above me was what woke me up, but the walls around me are what kept me up.

Except, they were cave walls.

I shot up from my spot on the golden petals, recognizing them almost instantly. I hoped I was dreaming.

I took a look to the shining light above me. It had to be hundreds of feet in the air, just waiting to trap someone in the confines of the giant hole I was in.

I started breathing quicker as I finally noticed for good where I was.

UNDERTALE.

I flung myself into the air, breathing in and out in rapid succession at the golden petals at my feet, and at the purple doorway several feet in front of me. As I backed up towards the far end of the giant cave I was in, I tried to process the information I was taking in, but all it probably sounded like in my head was:

OHMYF#CKINGGODI'MINAVIDEOGAMEWHATTHEHELLDOIDOI'MSCAREDASSH!TRIGHTNOWWHATTHEF#CK.

I grabbed at my face, trying to see what the Hell I was supposed to do, and trying not to spiral into insanity, when a squeaky voice to my side spoke up.

"Howdy!"

IT'S FLOWEY HOLY SH!T!

"You must be so confused!"

NOPE! TOTALLY FINE, NOT SARCASTIC AT ALL.

"Let me teach you the way things work around here!"

NOPE! I internally screamed, kicking the talking flower across the face with as much force as I could muster, and I sprinted away.

Then and only then did my body start to register the pain from falling down a hundred foot hole.

I ran as fast as my legs could carry me, my body screaming as loud as it could to stop, and I ignored it as I ran over Flowey's room, into the entrance to the Ruins, up the stairs, and into the room with the retreating spikes, where I took the time to stop and rest.

As I flopped onto the floor next to the spikes, I tried to take inventory of everything I had on me.

I had my backpack, which was full of bandages and little snacks, a pair of wireless earbuds, and my phone.

I had my red, black, and grey striped jacket with my dark blue T-Shirt underneath, along with my blue jeans and black shoes.

I had black fingerless gloves on, and...

My Triforce necklace.

I grabbed the necklace, eyes wavering a little as the memories that were associated with it came rising up..

No. I can't think of that right now. I have to get moving. I stood up, and remembered.

"Sh!t, I don't know this puzzle at all."

So I tried to figure out the puzzle over the next twenty or thirty minutes.

The rest of the Ruins were like that. I came to a puzzle which I thought I knew, but ended up screwing up. I fell through the crumbling floor puzzle, tripped up on the rock puzzle, (How I managed that, I'll never know.) and failed at trying to understand Froggits.

By the time I finally reached Goat Mom's house, I finally had a grip of where I was. Everything looked a bit different, but what do you expect, looking at a real version of an 8-bit game?

I sat down in the leaves next to Toriel's house, crinkling them playfully. It filled my with... Determination. I watched as a shifting, glowing star appeared for a brief second before disappearing.

Wierd. I might not have control over the timeline, th-

Holy sh!t time travel exists.

I shook the thought out of my head, wanting to rid myself of the retched idea.

So instead, I stood up, scared like no one's business, and knocked.

A small voice came from inside. A woman's. I heard footsteps drawing closer, and I braced myself for seeing the Goat Monster herself.

Goat Mom stood there, tall and beaming with a huge smile rested gently on her face. "Oh! Another Human! Oh, my child. Come in! It must have been very difficult for you to travel the Ruins by yourself... Are you alright?"

I nodded my head, scared out of my wit's. It seemed that any wounds I might've gained where healed by the SAVE point next to me, which was barely there.

"Well, come in, my child. I should have you know, there is one more human staying here with me. There usually isn't so many at once." I nodded along in agreement as I walked into the cozy little Home, Toriel trailing not far behind.

Then the smell hit me.

It was like the most heavenly smell to every bless the Earth. The perfect mixture of Butterscotch and Cinnamon made my heart grow fonder of the Goat Mom, and my stomach go:

Grrrowl..Toriel looked at me, and smiled. "Well, it looks like you are hungry. I will get you some of my homemade pie. In the meantime, why don't you greet the other human? They should be in their room. In the hallway, first door on the left."

I nodded, and walked to the room of the other child. I knocked on the door lightly, checking if they were awake. Since there was no awnser, I let myself in.

Once inside, I took a knee at the bed, and got a good look at Frisk.

I honestly couldn't tell their gender.

They were a bit older than I imagined though. About fourteen, which was around my age. I watched in silence as their chest moved up and down, breathing silently.

Then the door opened, and I saw Toriel come in with two pieces of Butterscotch-Cinnamon pie. She handed one to me, holding a finger to her lips to tell me to be quiet in a polite way, then put the other piece next to me on the floor.

"Watch it, please. And do not eat it, human." I laughed a little at that. "Please tell me though, what is your name?"

I spoke weakly, almost like a small child. "C-Connor." I smiled up at her.

"Well, Connor," She said with a small grin on her face, "You'd better get to sleep. It's going to be a fun day tommorow."

I nodded, and she left the room.

I stashed my pie away in a small container in my backpack, and then used the backpack itself as a pillow on the floor. Not the most comfortable arrangement, but it worked.

As I started to doze off, I wondered how I got there.

Oh well... I'll figure it out in the morning.

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A/N: So! This the start of WingahTale: Revamped. I did this... Because I felt I had less control over that story then I will have with this one, and I didn't like the way it was written. Anyway, I hope you all enjoy, 'cause this one's here for the long haul.