~Since I honestly don't wanna diss on either of Mark or Jack's girlfriend, I came up with a name, sorry if it's your name~
Guys, I don't hate Jack or Mark's girlfriend, and I'm NOT trying to disrespect them, this is purely fiction that I came up with!
A phone in hand, his mind shut down, his world collapsing, Jack slid down a wall. He looked SO happy, his smile was bright, her blue eye shining, her other eye, which he noticed was purple, was gleaming under the sun, he heaved a sob, Mark was happy without him, Mark was enjoying life without him.
"Jack! Hey, Bub, why aren't you responding to any of my texts? I've texted you like...20 times...Call me back...Please..." Mark's voice rang through his phone, Jack shook his head, no use in answering the phone, Mark wouldn't care, he was convinced. Jack walked into the kitchen, where his phone rest, looked down at it, seeing all the text, he sighed, reading them all silently.
Jack, you up?
Jack, what's up, you're not on Twitter or Instagram, what's wrong?
Jack, did I do something wrong?
Jack, please respond, I'm sorry about whatever I did...
The room was dark, a candle lightly flickering in the corner, his eyes were glued to the roof, wondering around the patterns of the ceiling. Why? Why, He wondered, why did it bother him so much? Madison was a wonderful girl, her bleach blonde hair, and her magnificent eyes, one Purple, and one blue. He didn't know why his mind wandered to hate, something about her, he couldn't tell, even if he knew, it wouldn't matter, Mark loved her, and that was all there was to it.
How was the first chapter? Please review so I know what to change! Thank you!